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10Senses vs Witty - WITTY WINS

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@10Senses @Witty

I'm good with 12 or 16. Let me know... Good luck.

Witty, who you kid'n? you ain't got no wits
You're so fuck'n stupid, your puppy teaches you tricks
You're the dumbest of your race, your IQ damn near zip
I mean, you so slow... In a 2 man race, you still placed 5th
You're just not sharp, you could never make the cut
You the type to get hit by a parked car... Perfect example of "how dumb niggaz stunt"
I would ask how old you are but I know you can't count that high-up
the candles on your b-day cake made the earth temperature rise-up
This was just a quick lesson, I hope you paid attention
cuz the next time you test this, I'll send you to another dimension
I'll treat you like a demonic possession, and twist your neck in different directions...
When I'm done with this dumb relic, he'll be lucky if he feels any SENSES...

-10 Senses (Bryan Ragin)

can post tomorrow if cool.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Witty (Post 567614)

can post tomorrow if cool.

Sure. Its not a problem with me. I want to see what you got.

Quote:

If you guys didn't create that account, he must be the alternate Human version of me. I should send him a message and greet him.

U never get skirt, so you hiding in the shade every time you net surf
U may have 10 senses, but clearly none are the sense of self worth
The case is clear, u gotta meet a girl, talk to her, face your fears
Cuz there's plenty of fish in the sea, but u ain't wet ur bait in years
You sell property, but ur lonely, u'll never get a hoe as a spouse
Only time ur in a bedroom with a girl is when you're showing a house
You talk like a hippy, but you should hate nature, this shit is true
I mean, I know I would if it fucked ME up like it did to you
Just joking tho, please don't be hating God while you're home alone
He MUST love u, he give u 5 more senses PLUS an extra chromosome
Fuck it, this sucks, I'm drunk as fuck, thinking only hurts the brain
But tomorrow I'll be sober, and you'll still be a forever lonely virgin lame

Bleh...keyed, sucks, my bad.

@Witty Good stuff, may the best win.

No point doing a bar for bar on this. Witty did enough to win even though his verse wasn't great. Dug the "showing a house" joint most. 10 senses' was really poor. Didn't even know if it was serious.

V/Witty

Senses how dumb niggas stunt bar was fire. Rest of the verse was kinda corny.
Witty bodied that sense of self worth line was crazy and so was the extra chromosome

V witty

10 senses had a couple workable concepts lil the stunt and head lines, but had too many lows and corny jokes. Obv ya first battle and u haven't been in the game to know what's what..

Witty came w/ a more NC style verse. Just more punch oriented and standard. A few cool lines..

Vote Witty

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Originally Posted by 10 Senses (Post 567188)

Witty, who you kid'n? you ain't got no wits
You're so fuck'n stupid, your puppy teaches you tricks
no, sir
You're the dumbest of your race, your IQ damn near zip
I mean, you so slow... In a 2 man race, you still placed 5th
no
You're just not sharp, you could never make the cut
You the type to get hit by a parked car... Perfect example of "how dumb niggaz stunt"
the setup was was great, but the punch was unrelated
I would ask how old you are but I know you can't count that high-up
the candles on your b-day cake made the earth temperature rise-up
no
This was just a quick lesson, I hope you paid attention
cuz the next time you test this, I'll send you to another dimension
no
I'll treat you like a demonic possession, and twist your neck in different directions...
When I'm done with this dumb relic, he'll be lucky if he feels any SENSES...
eh, no
-10 Senses (Bryan Ragin)

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Originally Posted by Witty (Post 567883)

U never get skirt, so you hiding in the shade every time you net surf
U may have 10 senses, but clearly none are the sense of self worth
so-so
The case is clear, u gotta meet a girl, talk to her, face your fears
Cuz there's plenty of fish in the sea, but u ain't wet ur bait in years
punch coulda been better
You sell property, but ur lonely, u'll never get a hoe as a spouse
Only time ur in a bedroom with a girl is when you're showing a house
lol
You talk like a hippy, but you should hate nature, this shit is true
I mean, I know I would if it fucked ME up like it did to you
inside joke? over my head
Just joking tho, please don't be hating God while you're home alone
He MUST love u, he give u 5 more senses PLUS an extra chromosome
lmao
Fuck it, this sucks, I'm drunk as fuck, thinking only hurts the brain
But tomorrow I'll be sober, and you'll still be a forever lonely virgin lame
decent
Bleh...keyed, sucks, my bad.

Not a stellar battle, but there was a clear winner IMO. MVGT Witty

Witty, shame on you for having the opportunity to leave a crater in this man's existence and almost getting out-barred.

That bedroom line sealed it for you, but def a missed opportunity.

10 Senses. I like your gumption, but your wordplay is about 25 years old and that's not an exaggeration. Some of that shit had me laughing for real, but at you not with you. Try to take a look at how others are wording their shit and the kinda of concepts that get love from the voters and it can help you along the way. Not saying be derivative but there's a certain way of doing things that'll get reaction from voters.

Vote -- Witty

10 senses you have a lot of work to do. It's almost like you're just trolling. Terrible terrible verse

Witty wins with the opener and the chromosome bar

air balls

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U never get skirt, so you hiding in the shade every time you net surf
U may have 10 senses, but clearly none are the sense of self worth
Just joking tho, please don't be hating God while you're home alone
He MUST love u, he give u 5 more senses PLUS an extra chromosome

vote - Witty

yeah, witty got this
10 senses was horribad
just read some battles, and step ya game up

v/wit