WK 5: Bongo Bear 0-0 vs. 2tripple0 0-0 - Bongo Bear WINS!!
 

Rules

Due Dates:

• Verses are due FRIDAY JUNE 8th! and will be open until Sunday.
• Battles that lack votes may close later.
• One sided battles may get closed early.
• Extensions are 24 hours

Line Limit:

• Minimum of 8, maximum of 16
• If not agreed upon, second drop must match length of the first.

Edit Rules:

• 1st Person can edit until his opponent drops
• 2nd Person can edit until the first vote is posted

Check ins are encouraged but not mandatory. Also, swaying/biting/recycling is a DQ

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@Bongo Bear @2tripple0

BB's Verse
 

Ill still go if you want to

This cat bongo bear right he aint got shit for rhymes to spit
Thought he was hard right aint even know he had a deck to flip
Too bad mate nice try right you couldnt win this cause you aint know what it like
You aint getting shit from this battle right here you look more like a dyke
Couldnt spit no good lines on a mic in fact if you were anything good i wouldnt be very nice
You tryinto battle and diss me but no one want to read what you got to write
Damn man talk about this battle right here whatever never been on the boards
Cause you so whack how you prove nothing all ya shit come up short
Im the one who did all the work Win this battle why when i got too much loot to hustle
But cant find his way out this one if i popped up on ya ass like some bubbles..

Done. Whoops.

Bear on thin ice? Climate change. Tell em the facts.
I put my heat beside his dome and start meltin the caps.
In a ring fight with me if the scheme writing weak
My sacred text, ‘higher power’ is a thing I believe
hit bishop with a cross if the king right beside of me
n casey' tried to flee like a scream type survival scene
Gun bars? Bud spark? know that the bong’s hot
Sniping me? Unlikely he would win by a long shot
A bullet from the westside, another in the east coast
Two rounds clap this faggot's chin, that's a deep throat

2trip

bubbles


vs

Bongo

scream type survival scene was my fav

good shit for showing guys.

v/ bongo

Bongo opener won this

Vote bongo

2trip bro you just not going to keep doing this with no punches?

Nothing to really quote on his verse...

Bubbles line was extra basic, but coo I guess

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Bear on thin ice? Climate change. Tell em the facts.
I put my heat beside his dome and start meltin the caps.

Coo

In a ring fight with me if the scheme writing weak
My sacred text, ‘higher power’ is a thing I believe

Lightwork, decent tho

hit bishop with a cross if the king right beside of me
n casey' tried to flee like a scream type survival scene

Coo here

Gun bars? Bud spark? know that the bong’s hot
Sniping me? Unlikely he would win by a long shot

I like how this was worded-simple though!

A bullet from the westside, another in the east coast
Two rounds clap this faggot's chin, that's a deep throat

Nahhh fam


V-Bongo by a MILE

Im the one who did all the work Win this battle why when i got too much loot to hustle
But cant find his way out this one if i popped up on ya ass like some bubbles..
lawd I’m fuckin dead. LOTB


VS


nothing


Vote: I’ll brb

2 trip: nothing. Dead @ fart bubbles

Vs

Bongo: scream

Vote: bongo

2trip came out with an opener that I thought missed. The next 3 bars all felt like statements bars. No real punch. The closer was funny to me. That was definitely your best line. Not that great though tbh.

Bongo had a pretty good opener. The sacred text line missed imo. The survival scene bar was witty but it was too subtle. The long shot bar was decent but simple. The closer was pauseworthy so it was a miss to me.

Overall...

2trip your verse came off as like a freestyle. It was too much filler lines. Gotta work on crafting punches, wordplay, etc. and make sure every line has a punch. Take that last bar and work and build on that. Also, you gotta use some punctuation to make your verses easier to read.

Bongo’s verse was enough to take this pretty clear. You can clearly rap imo but you’ll have to adapt your style a bit once you get some tougher competition. Your setups got that open mic feel so work on being more direct with your bars. You are punching though.

Overall Bongo took this one pretty clear.

Mvgt: Bongo

Bingo Bongo wins imo

Bongo takes this, 2trip verse was horrible, I normally do a breakdown this was unworthy of one. I think Bongo opener was enough to win the match.