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Spoken Vs. Muff - MUFF WINS

10 lines
24hr. Check
24hr. After last person checks in to drop verse.
House rules.

@Muff this my check broseph

In but I'm not rdy

If its due 24 hrs frm now I'm good

Might key up shutting if u give me incentive 2

Fuck incentives either key now ur use the 24hr leniency it don't matter accept the beating

@Muff

The worse of all kind, muff the type to pine with lies
Put the knife integer many people since he brings life to how they write.
Been texting a long time.. u've set stones for a path,
N noticed everyone tossed this stepping stone to cover the tracks.
He penzoil bitches, fugly hoes just to clear the hoax,
The way muffler dimes in the sheets is gas'd cus he blowin' smoke.
Fruitcake been wailing for acceptance. A legend in text?
We'll soon find out once I put junto's question to test.
5-0... that's a KO w/ no conscience in mind,
Funny u prayer not losin' till sum1 took amen had u crucified.

on laptop. which means ur fkn dead @Spoken

Quote:

Originally Posted by Spoken (Post 454786)

Real talk.

I shud say the same for u to my battles then cus we never kno wat the Fuck u saying till we see this shit -->V/

Then we realize u placing an actual vote... It's like u put stuttering into text format and got a patent for it.

U make GoW sentences look human

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yo

Ur a weak faggot. Endangered from birth
U say my votes need translation...well your verses are wack as fuck in every language on earth
U need guidance fam..and no im not forcin the issue
I tried to Coach Spo'...but u need to get off the bench to EVEN come close to Official
Man your rhymebook should come complete w/ a shredder
1-2 League's like your Childhood
Someone kicked your Jigsaw puzzle n now u tryin to put the pieces together
College football is dope bro. yet u dont cheer coz foods missing
Shit only reason you and your team eligible for a bowl is coz yall stand in line at soup kitchens
BLOODSUCKER. ya life is a waste. i got the louisville slugger lyin in wait
Run? Watch how quick I Turn to A Bat if this fkn Vampire tries to escape

BANG

Wow okay pretty aweful here.
Im going with Muff for his Closer.. couldn't really gel with anything else.
..was it into germany people? thats weird.
Muff lay dimes in the sheets? Idk seemed forced beyond or I'm not getting it.
Muffs, soup bowl/gridiron bar was a bar, the jigsaw puzzle thing was a possible concept.
V-Muff for his closer

Thanks for showing @Muff and @Plot thanks for the vote @Sharp Nine we open for business

Those wordplay attempts need serious work spoke. I didn't get the integer one either. Prayer was weird. Muffler was cool but really bad misses overall. Soup bowl was dope overall just better.

V muff

muffler was cool missed tho

vs.

last 2 bars

v. muff, spoken work on concepts more mane

Nada

vs.

Ur a weak faggot. Endangered from birth
U say my votes need translation...well your verses are wack as fuck in every language on earth
Man your rhymebook should come complete w/ a shredder
1-2 League's like your Childhood
Someone kicked your Jigsaw puzzle n now u tryin to put the pieces together
BLOODSUCKER. ya life is a waste. i got the louisville slugger lyin in wait
Run? Watch how quick I Turn to A Bat if this fkn Vampire tries to escape

Muff's verse wasn't amazing or anything, but it was more than enough. Spoke, you seem to have the concept of wordplay and metaphors down, but you need to work on that wording/delivery. Right now, there's just too much going on and your lines are difficult to follow and lack a punch. Keep at it.

V/ Muff