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WEEK 2 BOTW Spotlight: Barcotic 1-0 VS Hush 1-0 HUSH WINS
THIS IS SPOTLIGHT BATTLE OF THE WEEK
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We going pics
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Idfc what we doing
I'd be down for the first ever pic vs. reg battle at this point Let's just fucking goo Sharp's vote does not count Seth's vote does not count Zelph's vote does not count |
Hush aka Victor
I'ma shank this goof. 5 foot 2, the boy is nothing Assume my toys are rusty..they'll go thru his Toys R Us tee He isn't a catch. He's the only single one at his potlucks Always gets 'you're Too Short'...fitting, his rap is washed up Petrified of road rage, dodgy whips and the violence .. Victor Cruz is around 'cept he's the opposite of a giant So obv. a drop-top is outta the picture, only basic shit If he ever buys a convertible, it's a male stripper going atheist Faggot bitch. Happily spending nights w/ ANY fellow Irony 101; resembling a Goomba & hitting pipe on every level Any paycheck you've earned is spent gas, technically You work for Petrovic and you're the size of his left calf, RIP. Another small insult. Solid stuff, I'm not close to done .. Can't counter them if you aren't tall enough to look over one Might say it's redundant, preschool and approve it never Might say "I get it, I'm short Bar"...me too, and I do it better 1 quote from ya verse last week? Courteous pal, it stank Everyone here is ON to you.. you weren't even power ranked |
u don’t bust guns .. u pretended to be black online to get poppin
Only ammunition u had was n bombs & u had to make an alias to drop em From Cronus to Hollywood.. convincing urself ur the man at this shit with all the mental gymnastics it’s no wonder your personalities split It’s sad u had to pretend to be someone else for a dose of respect Wanted to be black so bad .. guess playing my shadow was the closest you’d get Is it landscaping or manscaping?? Bro u gay and friendly Kobra Kai wasn’t the only ones bringing wax on wax off back for 2020 U out here letting ya queer flag fly for weeks- shotgun leave 100 leaks Shouldn’t have to tell u to cover up ur chest .. good thing the coroner brung a sheet That whole style u got is shit ... bitch none of its clever If I tore u to ribbons each one would be 1st place for worst wordplay ever “3 ingredients curry” That’s the dumbest shit ever ... it gots to be Ur bar hangs above a crib yet constantly u the one getting rocked to sleep & this nigga got tits .. u ain’t a shooter . U never had a 30 palmed If u let the strap pop on the low u removing ya bra while ya shirt is on The way u been sucking the upn niggas dicks is a disgrace to ur city When ppl say they feel your bars the emotion there thinking of is pity |
I'ma shank this goof. 5 foot 2, the boy is nothing
Assume my toys are rusty..they'll go thru his Toys R Us tee ok i like the opener He isn't a catch. He's the only single one at his potlucks Always gets 'you're Too Short'...fitting, his rap is washed up nice but a too short ref in 2020 Petrified of road rage, dodgy whips and the violence .. Victor Cruz is around 'cept he's the opposite of a giant bars So obv. a drop-top is outta the picture, only basic shit If he ever buys a convertible, it's a male stripper going atheist not feelin it Faggot bitch. Happily spending nights w/ ANY fellow Irony 101; resembling a Goomba & hitting pipe on every level lolllll Any paycheck you've earned is spent gas, technically You work for Petrovic and you're the size of his left calf, RIP. idk if this was a personal or nah Another small insult. Solid stuff, I'm not close to done .. Can't counter them if you aren't tall enough to look over one nice Might say it's redundant, preschool and approve it never Might say "I get it, I'm short Bar"...me too, and I do it better cool 1 quote from ya verse last week? Courteous pal, it stank Everyone here is ON to you.. you weren't even power ranked again I'm new, not sure of the history Vs u don’t bust guns .. u pretended to be black online to get poppin Only ammunition u had was n bombs & u had to make an alias to drop em cool From Cronus to Hollywood.. convincing urself ur the man at this shit with all the mental gymnastics it’s no wonder your personalities split I'm assumin these are aliases, nice It’s sad u had to pretend to be someone else for a dose of respect Wanted to be black so bad .. guess playing my shadow was the closest you’d get is hush black? Is it landscaping or manscaping?? Bro u gay and friendly Kobra Kai wasn’t the only ones bringing wax on wax off back for 2020 lolzzz U out here letting ya queer flag fly for weeks- shotgun leave 100 leaks Shouldn’t have to tell u to cover up ur chest .. good thing the coroner brung a sheet hard That whole style u got is shit ... bitch none of its clever If I tore u to ribbons each one would be 1st place for worst wordplay ever cool “3 ingredients curry” That’s the dumbest shit ever ... it gots to be Ur bar hangs above a crib yet constantly u the one getting rocked to sleep cool & this nigga got tits .. u ain’t a shooter . U never had a 30 palmed If u let the strap pop on the low u removing ya bra while ya shirt is on dead The way u been sucking the upn niggas dicks is a disgrace to ur city When ppl say they feel your bars the emotion there thinking of is pity feel like it coulda been harder Fire battle. With my knowledge ima V/Hush. |
Barcotic:
I'ma shank this goof. 5 foot 2, the boy is nothing Assume my toys are rusty..they'll go thru his Toys R Us tee - haha cool wordplay He isn't a catch. He's the only single one at his potlucks Always gets 'you're Too Short'...fitting, his rap is washed up - Ehh Petrified of road rage, dodgy whips and the violence .. Victor Cruz is around 'cept he's the opposite of a giant - cool So obv. a drop-top is outta the picture, only basic shit If he ever buys a convertible, it's a male stripper going atheist - lol, like it. Kind of a general hit though, not too stinging. Faggot bitch. Happily spending nights w/ ANY fellow Irony 101; resembling a Goomba & hitting pipe on every level - Dig the reference. Any paycheck you've earned is spent gas, technically You work for Petrovic and you're the size of his left calf, RIP. - Petro Vic... Damn. Another small insult. Solid stuff, I'm not close to done .. Can't counter them if you aren't tall enough to look over one - Filler, for you. Might say it's redundant, preschool and approve it never Might say "I get it, I'm short Bar"...me too, and I do it better - Nice multi's, clever. 1 quote from ya verse last week? Courteous pal, it stank Everyone here is ON to you.. you weren't even power ranked - Loved this closer. Hush: u don’t bust guns .. u pretended to be black online to get poppin Only ammunition u had was n bombs & u had to make an alias to drop em - personal hit, okay. From Cronus to Hollywood.. convincing urself ur the man at this shit with all the mental gymnastics it’s no wonder your personalities split - Very nice. It’s sad u had to pretend to be someone else for a dose of respect Wanted to be black so bad .. guess playing my shadow was the closest you’d get - This was cool, nothing crazy though. Is it landscaping or manscaping?? Bro u gay and friendly Kobra Kai wasn’t the only ones bringing wax on wax off back for 2020 - Nah. U out here letting ya queer flag fly for weeks- shotgun leave 100 leaks Shouldn’t have to tell u to cover up ur chest .. good thing the coroner brung a sheet - Meh... too gun bar-ish for my taste. That whole style u got is shit ... bitch none of its clever If I tore u to ribbons each one would be 1st place for worst wordplay ever - lol. “3 ingredients curry” That’s the dumbest shit ever ... it gots to be Ur bar hangs above a crib yet constantly u the one getting rocked to sleep - Haha... good flip. & this nigga got tits .. u ain’t a shooter . U never had a 30 palmed If u let the strap pop on the low u removing ya bra while ya shirt is on - Oh man... I hate gun bars but that was creative af. The way u been sucking the upn niggas dicks is a disgrace to ur city When ppl say they feel your bars the emotion there thinking of is pity - Not feeling this closer. GREAT battle between two of the best going right now. Both of you are witty and got punchlines for days... Hush had the better personal attacks and considering what he dropped in the never-to-be pic battle, this was super impressive... But I think Barc's flow really won it for me here. Everything was crafted to perfection and couple that with his wordplay/punchlines... It was JUST enough for the W, imo. Vote - Barcotic |
Barcotic:
Toys R Us Tee was cool Too Short was way too on the nose imo Victor Cruz feels kind of old, but it was decent Goomba was a fun reference Petrovic was nice Tall enough is bleh Short bar is cool Closer fell a little flat imo Hush: N bombs was cool Mental gymnastics was nice Playing shadow was good Coroner bar was so-so Kobe’s Kai was okay Tear to ribbons was dope Crib was a banger Strap on the low was dope Closer was meh Hush got this with a more consistent verse and harder punches Barc was dope but some of his lines fell super flat short jokes got over killed V/Hush |
Is it landscaping or manscaping?? Bro u gay and friendly
Kobra Kai wasn’t the only ones bringing wax on wax off back for 2020 bahahaha... people thst don't like that can fuck right off... honestly... couldn't get into Barcotic's verse was too choppy to read... Vote - Hush |
Barcotic was solid all the way through, with a couple of woofs and a couple of really clever and dope lines. My favorite line is prob the goomba one, which had a pretty corny setup but it still worked cuz it's funny. The short bar line also towed that line of being corny and funny but still fell mostly on dope.
Hush killed this though. The being black/my shadow line was dope, wax on/off was dope, rocked to sleep line was really clever, and tore you to ribbons line is vintage shit, so good. Not sure why I decided to stop by NC and vote on a battle, but I'm glad I did. This was good on both sides, but Hush was on another level. |
This was really close and a solid little battle. Barcotic focused more on multi-syllable end rhymes, which is something I think Hush could improve on. I think the wit level was about even. IMO, Hush had the slight edge in funny/damaging disses. Each had their modestly high points and fairly high floors. Nothing super exceptional, but definitely entertaining.
Hush takes this by a nose. |
I'ma shank this goof. 5 foot 2, the boy is nothing
Assume my toys are rusty..they'll go thru his Toys R Us tee Lol it works I guess. Most random concept I’ve heard in a while tho He isn't a catch. He's the only single one at his potlucks Always gets 'you're Too Short'...fitting, his rap is washed up Cool Petrified of road rage, dodgy whips and the violence .. Victor Cruz is around 'cept he's the opposite of a giant Dope So obv. a drop-top is outta the picture, only basic shit If he ever buys a convertible, it's a male stripper going atheist Nice Faggot bitch. Happily spending nights w/ ANY fellow Irony 101; resembling a Goomba & hitting pipe on every level Lmao Any paycheck you've earned is spent gas, technically You work for Petrovic and you're the size of his left calf, RIP. is the work for petrovic a personal? I get the concept Another small insult. Solid stuff, I'm not close to done .. Can't counter them if you aren't tall enough to look over one Light but cool Might say it's redundant, preschool and approve it never Might say "I get it, I'm short Bar"...me too, and I do it better Nice 1 quote from ya verse last week? Courteous pal, it stank Everyone here is ON to you.. you weren't even power ranked Ehh u don’t bust guns .. u pretended to be black online to get poppin Only ammunition u had was n bombs & u had to make an alias to drop em Cool personal From Cronus to Hollywood.. convincing urself ur the man at this shit with all the mental gymnastics it’s no wonder your personalities split Nice It’s sad u had to pretend to be someone else for a dose of respect Wanted to be black so bad .. guess playing my shadow was the closest you’d get Cool Is it landscaping or manscaping?? Bro u gay and friendly Kobra Kai wasn’t the only ones bringing wax on wax off back for 2020 Lol U out here letting ya queer flag fly for weeks- shotgun leave 100 leaks Shouldn’t have to tell u to cover up ur chest .. good thing the coroner brung a sheet Ok That whole style u got is shit ... bitch none of its clever If I tore u to ribbons each one would be 1st place for worst wordplay ever Lmao nice “3 ingredients curry” That’s the dumbest shit ever ... it gots to be Ur bar hangs above a crib yet constantly u the one getting rocked to sleep Nice & this nigga got tits .. u ain’t a shooter . U never had a 30 palmed If u let the strap pop on the low u removing ya bra while ya shirt is on Lmao nice The way u been sucking the upn niggas dicks is a disgrace to ur city When ppl say they feel your bars the emotion there thinking of is pity Decent I got highlights being victor cruz, short bar and goomba vs mental gymnastics, ribbons, bra I’d call it a tie but that’s weak so going lotb which was ribbons for me Vote - Hush. Good showing by both though. |
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u don’t bust guns .. u pretended to be black online to get poppin Only ammunition u had was n bombs & u had to make an alias to drop em ok From Cronus to Hollywood.. convincing urself ur the man at this shit with all the mental gymnastics it’s no wonder your personalities split Again, ok It’s sad u had to pretend to be someone else for a dose of respect Wanted to be black so bad .. guess playing my shadow was the closest you’d get Light jab Is it landscaping or manscaping?? Bro u gay and friendly Kobra Kai wasn’t the only ones bringing wax on wax off back for 2020 Lmao. Brutal U out here letting ya queer flag fly for weeks- shotgun leave 100 leaks Shouldn’t have to tell u to cover up ur chest .. good thing the coroner brung a sheet Hits That whole style u got is shit ... bitch none of its clever If I tore u to ribbons each one would be 1st place for worst wordplay ever Lol. Accurate “3 ingredients curry” That’s the dumbest shit ever ... it gots to be Ur bar hangs above a crib yet constantly u the one getting rocked to sleep Ouch lotb & this nigga got tits .. u ain’t a shooter . U never had a 30 palmed If u let the strap pop on the low u removing ya bra while ya shirt is on Nah The way u been sucking the upn niggas dicks is a disgrace to ur city When ppl say they feel your bars the emotion there thinking of is pity Not feeling __________________ Man, hush killed this. Barc, I want to like your shit, it’s like every bar is either too much or too little. I think you just think of a concept and immediately just run with it like Petrovic is a good example. Like I get why you thought of it. But then you wasted it on making it another “you’re short” punch. Like, Petrovic died in a car crash. You’re already using gasoline. Come on man. That’s not a large leap to a dying in a car/gasoline punch. He was even foreign and hush has the whole forine thing going. There’s A LOT you could do with that concept. Flesh them out more. ON/power ranked? Come on, bro. That’s some text concept 101 shit. You’re better than that. V/hush |
Toys r us
Victor Cruz Goomba LOTB VS Alias Cobra Kai Coroner Rocked to sleep Great battle guys. Hush barely got this with one more quotable. Goomba was stupiddddd. Vote hush |
Barc:
He isn't a catch. He's the only single one at his potlucks Always gets 'you're Too Short'...fitting, his rap is washed up Petrified of road rage, dodgy whips and the violence .. Victor Cruz is around 'cept he's the opposite of a giant Faggot bitch. Happily spending nights w/ ANY fellow Irony 101; resembling a Goomba & hitting pipe on every level Another small insult. Solid stuff, I'm not close to done .. Can't counter them if you aren't tall enough to look over one Cool verse, liked Goomba and the counter line. I'm just stating this here to be objective, but Barc, I honestly like your lines more when you drift away from the wordplay. That's just me though, I'm not a wordplay guy. You can write and you have some dope ideas in there and the execution on some is great...i usually wind up just reading the wordplay stuff as complete whiff's though. I say that, and then sometimes you wind up throwing out a crazy WP line i actually fuck with, so, it's whatever I guess lol Hush: u don’t bust guns .. u pretended to be black online to get poppin Only ammunition u had was n bombs & u had to make an alias to drop em It’s sad u had to pretend to be someone else for a dose of respect Wanted to be black so bad .. guess playing my shadow was the closest you’d get Is it landscaping or manscaping?? Bro u gay and friendly Kobra Kai wasn’t the only ones bringing wax on wax off back for 2020 That whole style u got is shit ... bitch none of its clever If I tore u to ribbons each one would be 1st place for worst wordplay ever Hush kinda tapered off in the end for me, but went on a soliddddd run up until that point. the rocked to sleep line was hilarious, and a genuine laugh for me. Makes it about even in the quotes, but I think there was just a level of disrespect in hush's verse that made those lines pop more. It's a close battle, really glad this was a spotlight this week. Good show fellas. V - Hush |
This is tough choice for me because I enjoyed reading both
I felt like Hush bars more polished compare to Barc vote -Hush |
I'ma shank this goof. 5 foot 2, the boy is nothing
Assume my toys are rusty..they'll go thru his Toys R Us tee i know there's been a lot of debate over this bar this week... personally i thinks its smooth and cool...i guess 'toys' can be knives He isn't a catch. He's the only single one at his potlucks Always gets 'you're Too Short'...fitting, his rap is washed up pretty cool short punch Petrified of road rage, dodgy whips and the violence .. Victor Cruz is around 'cept he's the opposite of a giant ncie wording on this, it was delivered smoothly, personal touch, dig it So obv. a drop-top is outta the picture, only basic shit If he ever buys a convertible, it's a male stripper going atheist ehh not a fan conceptually Faggot bitch. Happily spending nights w/ ANY fellow Irony 101; resembling a Goomba & hitting pipe on every level lolol this was dope Any paycheck you've earned is spent gas, technically You work for Petrovic and you're the size of his left calf, RIP. ehhh, creative sure but im not a fan of this nameplay Another small insult. Solid stuff, I'm not close to done .. Can't counter them if you aren't tall enough to look over one lol this is jokes Might say it's redundant, preschool and approve it never Might say "I get it, I'm short Bar"...me too, and I do it better i dunno defining yourself as "i'm shortbar" seems weird to me... this was okay 1 quote from ya verse last week? Courteous pal, it stank Everyone here is ON to you.. you weren't even power ranked dece Vs u don’t bust guns .. u pretended to be black online to get poppin Only ammunition u had was n bombs & u had to make an alias to drop em cool personal From Cronus to Hollywood.. convincing urself ur the man at this shit with all the mental gymnastics it’s no wonder your personalities split lol not an overly wowing concept but this hits and was impactful imo It’s sad u had to pretend to be someone else for a dose of respect Wanted to be black so bad .. guess playing my shadow was the closest you’d get i think a more personal setup about you beating him before or something along those lines wouldve made this hit harder... its alright Is it landscaping or manscaping?? Bro u gay and friendly Kobra Kai wasn’t the only ones bringing wax on wax off back for 2020 lmao , setup was great to... dope personal this hits U out here letting ya queer flag fly for weeks- shotgun leave 100 leaks Shouldn’t have to tell u to cover up ur chest .. good thing the coroner brung a sheet solid, wording was great That whole style u got is shit ... bitch none of its clever If I tore u to ribbons each one would be 1st place for worst wordplay ever haha funny “3 ingredients curry” That’s the dumbest shit ever ... it gots to be Ur bar hangs above a crib yet constantly u the one getting rocked to sleep fire personal, lotb & this nigga got tits .. u ain’t a shooter . U never had a 30 palmed If u let the strap pop on the low u removing ya bra while ya shirt is on ehh strap/bra plays are ancient af... this is well worded but nah for me The way u been sucking the upn niggas dicks is a disgrace to ur city When ppl say they feel your bars the emotion there thinking of is pity solid bar on the 'feel' angle but only decent Nice battle guys. I think this is pretty close as both were pretty consistent throughout with just a couple misses or so-so bars throughout.. On the whole i'm giving the edge to hush tho for more sting on the personals and standout bars for both... props to both , best hush verse ive seen in a while Vote Hush |
wow.. good battle.. when I read barcotic verse I thought he was going to win but hush did his thing and came all the way in here.. I dig his style a lot.. honestly I could break this but it's par on par and almost everything hits on both verses, with equal amount of misses.. for all we know hush had a bunch of personals on barcotic.. that wax on wax off line was pure gold.. on the other hand there is the goomba line from barcotic which was a standout
no hate barcotic but v/ hush.. |
Barc: Victor Cruz, Goomba, Counter
Toys r us for idea, some others missed to me bc i didn't like the concept or wordplay (power, petrovic) The originality was there tho Hush: rocked to sleep, cobra Kai were my top two faves of the battle + the Hollywood personals plus had some solid jabs in there w/ coroner n ribbons Vote Hush, good battle, both did there thing but one had the 2 lotb IMO. Vote - Hush |
Barc
Your last 3 and the opener were highlights for me Counter Short bar Power ranked These were all cool Toys r us tee gets a nod as well Hush Mental gymnastics Shadow Both cool Rocked to sleep ok Kobra Kai dope Based on consistency the edge here goes to hush Vote hush |
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