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HollaFrontOG 08-25-2019 09:25 PM

Take a look in the mirror
 
Battle ur hero? I'm too conceited and he's pumped with a shot. He foolin the gut, with enough bull, its a W...OVER
Slow it down I just dissed u!
I SAID he's PUMPED with a shotty, full in the gut, with enough bullets to double you over

You're in trouble the closer u try to reach me, yall must not practice too often with all that whack that you droppin
But call me out and you're 100% off and now you got to deal with the pencil without back to school shoppin

So you just happen to cross with the offspring of habits of hostile actions and possible clashes from a hospital ambulance
But if you're lost in the vastness, its not often that that's whats meant but just chalk it up to plausible accidents...

...Now if you're tongue's twisted and red, you must be dumb gifted, you're bred with the gift of dumbness misled
Like God took one look at you a decided not to fucks with it, he's dead
Or like he rushed it instead
Cuz his wrapping was symbolic to urs. Theres not enough paper or the rapping is all over the place and I cant wait to come rip it to shreds

Yeah that's a wrap/rap bar, now who's braver than me? Yall need to turn one eighty degrees and face a mirror and ask is it safer to be
On paper a priest or the flavor of the week, or the rater to each. Either way it's a reach. Cuz now a days, theres no more of the gladiators we preached.

HollaFrontOG 08-25-2019 09:47 PM

Sorry for the edit. Just had to make a couple cosmetic changes that didn't transfer from my phones copy and paste

Exis 08-26-2019 08:53 AM

Your a breathe of fresh air here man...

Exis 08-26-2019 08:54 AM

Love your wordplay.

HollaFrontOG 08-26-2019 09:32 AM

Appreciate the feed bro

Exis 08-27-2019 12:27 AM

Gracias on feedin' mine, thought I'd up this for you brethren...

Aero 08-27-2019 12:59 PM

Yooooo you're the only person I know of besides me to do a slow it down on text LOLOL... Let's re-read and see if it's hot.

Battle ur hero? I'm too conceited and he's pumped with a shot. He foolin the gut, with enough bull, its a W...OVER
Slow it down I just dissed u!
I SAID he's PUMPED with a shotty, full in the gut, with enough bullets to double you over

Absolutely TERRIBLE but I loved that you attempted lol.

Rest of verse is absolutely Sinacog cringe worthy. You are a breath of fresh air though.

HollaFrontOG 08-27-2019 03:53 PM

You're right!


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