Incredible vs. Prozac - PRO WINS
 

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GL @Incredible.

Bring the heat to his gut, once it touch his stomach fat I'm burstin' shells
Y'all gon' be seein' In's center raided, then watch this faggot Burn in Hell
You bangin' sluts? All them claims are just doubtful
Women talkin' bout Incisor just jokin', you've never gave 'em a mouthful
They'll need a closed casket for ya funeral based on what the morgue might see
So your mom'll only be lowerin' the rose if it were court-side seats
Folks on Netcees are already talkin' bout how Prozac murked 'em
So you should be worried bout ya Nextel... but it ain't ya phone's bad service
Ya live in a nice estate, shit I bet ya neighbors with three feds
Do this for acceptance 'til I getcha curbstomped, now ya got a taste of the street, cred

He get frustrated trying to write, this n00b should be ashamed
Soon he'll have disclosures at the end like if it's a commercial for his name
Turn your bitch into a singer, savor the pussy, I got her locked up
She liked it when this artist went big, I told her I got a dick in a box truck
You winning? No luck,,, your rolling the dice on a wild chance
You couldn't make it through an episode with the hot ones, wouldn't get a mild glance
Ya girl go for many rides, same ups and downs bet shes never annoyed
Now she begging for band and hard wood every night so I moved her to Cedar point
Your bitch don't like your green, she call up the homies n' we find her purp
Take her back to the spot &&& twist and turn her like how a weed grinder work

Dammit guys I was gonna use my previous post when making my vote

I got Prozac for better wording and concepts. Close one here tho


V/ Prozac (ps you were both trash)

Thanks?

Bump.

Prozac -

Bring the heat to his gut, once it touch his stomach fat I'm burstin' shells
Y'all gon' be seein' In's center raided, then watch this faggot Burn in Hell

lmao..this was dope..


You bangin' sluts? All them claims are just doubtful
Women talkin' bout Incisor just jokin', you've never gave 'em a mouthful

This was okay..a kind of cool bar..

They'll need a closed casket for ya funeral based on what the morgue might see
So your mom'll only be lowerin' the rose if it were court-side seats

This was okay..nice and decent..

Folks on Netcees are already talkin' bout how Prozac murked 'em
So you should be worried bout ya Nextel... but it ain't ya phone's bad service

lol..this was okay..

Ya live in a nice estate, shit I bet ya neighbors with three feds
Do this for acceptance 'til I getcha curbstomped, now ya got a taste of the street, cred

lmao..this was okay..



Incredible -

He get frustrated trying to write, this n00b should be ashamed
Soon he'll have disclosures at the end like if it's a commercial for his name

lol..was kind of cool..nice..

Turn your bitch into a singer, savor the pussy, I got her locked up
She liked it when this artist went big, I told her I got a dick in a box truck

lol..this was okay..


You winning? No luck,,, your rolling the dice on a wild chance
You couldn't make it through an episode with the hot ones, wouldn't get a mild glance

lol..this was okay..

Ya girl go for many rides, same ups and downs bet shes never annoyed
Now she begging for band and hard wood every night so I moved her to Cedar point

this was okay..a cool bar..

Your bitch don't like your green, she call up the homies n' we find her purp
Take her back to the spot &&& twist and turn her like how a weed grinder work

This was okay..nice one..

overall - cool battle here..but prozac wins this one..more good bars here..

v/ prozac

Bump.

Bring the heat to his gut, once it touch his stomach fat I'm burstin' shells
Y'all gon' be seein' In's center raided, then watch this faggot Burn in Hell
tad bit of a reach but I liked it, cool
You bangin' sluts? All them claims are just doubtful
Women talkin' bout Incisor just jokin', you've never gave 'em a mouthful
ok here
They'll need a closed casket for ya funeral based on what the morgue might see
So your mom'll only be lowerin' the rose if it were court-side seats
lol this is a no
Folks on Netcees are already talkin' bout how Prozac murked 'em
So you should be worried bout ya Nextel... but it ain't ya phone's bad service
pretty old wp, decent flip
Ya live in a nice estate, shit I bet ya neighbors with three feds
Do this for acceptance 'til I getcha curbstomped, now ya got a taste of the street, cred
streetcred has been done like 100x on cred


Vs


He get frustrated trying to write, this n00b should be ashamed
Soon he'll have disclosures at the end like if it's a commercial for his name
huh?
Turn your bitch into a singer, savor the pussy, I got her locked up
She liked it when this artist went big, I told her I got a dick in a box truck
umm no lmao
You winning? No luck,,, your rolling the dice on a wild chance
You couldn't make it through an episode with the hot ones, wouldn't get a mild glance
nah
Ya girl go for many rides, same ups and downs bet shes never annoyed
Now she begging for band and hard wood every night so I moved her to Cedar point
no lol what
Your bitch don't like your green, she call up the homies n' we find her purp
Take her back to the spot &&& twist and turn her like how a weed grinder work
decent I guess, barely



Idk what incredible was doing here but Prozac def gets the win.


Vote Prozac

Bump.

@Sharp @Infiltrate @Blue Bayou Anyone wanna vote on this or close it?

@bleak

You bangin' sluts? All them claims are just doubtful
Women talkin' bout Incisor just jokin', you've never gave 'em a mouthful
Folks on Netcees are already talkin' bout how Prozac murked 'em
So you should be worried bout ya Nextel... but it ain't ya phone's bad service


You winning? No luck,,, your rolling the dice on a wild chance
You couldn't make it through an episode with the hot ones, wouldn't get a mild glance



This wasn't great, but you've both improved so I won't elaborate, but Prozac gets it with an extra hit

V/Prozac

Open my fcking battleror votes, Inc

Look at other verses both hang of better Punchlines, flow, multies and concepts.
But my vote go to Prozac

Looks like this should be closed, but I'll vote anyway

Rhymes/Multi/Inners - prozak had a lot of multi use, whereas inc seemed to fluctuate back and forth with simpler rhymes. Gotta say prozak.
Punches/Personals - were not really any closeout haymakers here, but prozak was a little more consistent as inc had a few misses. Incs find her purp/grinder work vs pros doubtful/mouthful. Gotta go pro
Metaphors/Wordplay - again I'll go with prozak. The In's size are/incisor pretty much closed the deal here though that Nextel line was dated.
Vocabulary/Technique - probably go with prozak here but it wasn't much that made either much better, more a preference call here.
Structure/Flow - prozak took this one. The lengthy multis really helped tie it all together whereas much of the opposite worked against inc.

Overall - prozak took this one. Wasn't really a shut-out but he got it for sure

VOTE - Prozak

My vote goes to Prozac I thought it was close but P got my vote just off of his closer alone

This was close Battle
Both had decent bars
Vote-Pro I felt like he had better bars