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Show & Prove FINALS- Wanderer vs Evad - {Evad Wins}
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More crybaby posts than u can shake a stick at.. so ima let em rattle in ur crib See u not revered... Its glocks to ur chest fore’ u caught in the throne Ain’t no Famous Dave’s in here but we’d pay to see ur Rib meat fall off the bone But congrats on reaching the final! I bet ur needing a moment Love to say i saw u Smash the last round but u couldn’t even KO that easy opponent Well u may not of come ur hardest.. but STILL this joker’s a failure Saved ur best lines for a Rainy Day just to see a downpour of votes in my favour Keep it old school for ur readers? Them lies I hate.. this faker is killin’ me Front yard drive by. I’ll ride past & let it fly over ur gate, newspaper delivery Come this far but u in for a world of trouble now ur stamina’s lost Yeh u been tryna unlock ur potential... unfortunately from a Pandora’s box Not been at ease for days. getting this win is somethin u doubt Funny how the Dread Locks in... & u been doing nothing but pullin ur hair out Claim u never shook? I’ll come for ur fam... tuckin the pieces in Learn ur flesh & blood’s been exposed to me & u wanna Jump right out of ur skin & u love ur girl’s bed head look but It’s danger if u pound that snatch Shittt. All that Frisbee... & yet only STDs being thrown around to catch Team efforts futile so u really wanna test...?? I’ll kill em all & loot Gimme the wrong answer im taking chunks out ur circle quicker than trivial pursuit See ur boys can’t track or get to me.. no attack of the century If Dave see a pack of animals doing their thing it’s an Attenborough documentary |
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Two months on the site but my name rings out like sonic on the spikes After 5 years Wand’s only claim to fame is when Barcotic called him Tyke Everybody gettin outed.. pedophile rings for the famous and rich Ask Zayn Malik how Wand erection has only EVER been aimed at kids Can’t believe he even revealed vs Orc with that mugshot picture Shit was like The Hills Have Eyes, a suspect beard and an ugly sister This ain’t no street fight son, he gettin rolled with the heat No wonder his punches are all a stretch when he has Dhalsim’s physique Wand claims he scrap for a living but it adds an extra relevance When it looks like ‘Rag and Bone Man’ is both his job AND sexual preference Everything about his appearance screams ‘interested in male partners’ Shit, if I lit a match up off that stubble the stick would turn into a sparkler Your fruity cock tales on netcees were never gonna slide after this war he eatin meals through a straw.. with a pink umbrella on the side Something missing when all your writtens pedal lies and bullshit So bullets hitting when I clip-in, he doin bicycle kicks Not an ounce of fear, strollin up the chopper take off his lid Only thing sketching ME out? Detectives facial composite. And yo His girl is so ugly I couldn’t even take a blow job When I saw her on my bed with legs akimbo.. and the face of Cro Cop Congrats you made the final, but I want Gold so I’m gonna kill ya I guess I should take some kinda Pride that I made Wanderlei Silva |
Wanderer you had a cool verse. Some of your concepts were forced and worded poorly. Newspaper delivery felt like you were trying to do anything to make it work but it fell flat. You did have some good ideas just executed them poorly.
Dave your style is cool. You keep things simple and witty. Throughout you had some nice hitters. Nothing crazy but you were jabbing well. This was a good battle but Dave got this with better execution and more wit. Good stuff gentlemen. |
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when I read this when they posted I thought Dave won now that I sit here really scrutinizing it I got vote= Wanderer he had the harder hits,. Evad felt rushed at points, especially the end |
Wand had trivial pursuit, famous daves, rattle was okay and newspaper
Vs Opener, zayn Malik, facial comp, cro cop, wanderlei Silva was cool too Like Zuch was saying some of Wander's concepts fell flat imo and Dave definitely had some meh stuff he hung on the gay concepts a little too long in my opinion but whatever I think he won here with better concepts and execution. Dope battle fellas |
I got Dave here
Better wording and execution. Some decent ideas from wand, but he just can’t word them in a way where they hit well. Dave good shit here bro. I enjoy your reads. |
Yeah I got Dave here, Wand started really well if it had been a 10 line battle he could have won but he fell off.
Lotb was daves One Direction bar for me, the Barcoticesque wp killed me. |
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But congrats on reaching the final! I bet ur needing a moment Love to say i saw u Smash the last round but u couldn’t even KO that easy opponent Well u may not of come ur hardest.. but STILL this joker’s a failure Saved ur best lines for a Rainy Day just to see a downpour of votes in my favour Keep it old school for ur readers? Them lies I hate.. this faker is killin’ me Front yard drive by. I’ll ride past & let it fly over ur gate, newspaper delivery (this was close to being dope, it's not actually dope, but I'm giving you points for the creativity of it... in the future I'd definitely reword something like this, bud) evaD: Everybody gettin outed.. pedophile rings for the famous and rich Ask Zayn Malik how Wand erection has only EVER been aimed at kids (lol) Wand claims he scrap for a living but it adds an extra relevance When it looks like ‘Rag and Bone Man’ is both his job AND sexual preference Everything about his appearance screams ‘interested in male partners’ Shit, if I lit a match up off that stubble the stick would turn into a sparkler And yo His girl is so ugly I couldn’t even take a blow job When I saw her on my bed with legs akimbo.. and the face of Cro Cop going with Dave here, Wand had a decent little middle section, but the rest whiffed hard for me. Dave sprinkled his hits throughout and had more of them, so it was pretty clear cut from the jump for me. V - Dave |
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