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Geno 04-21-2013 10:20 AM

The Boiling Point.
 
I remember the days, young scrap, never restrained
When the next drunken high was all gen could obtain
Bending the shapes, wide awake, amphetamine laced
Up for days, halucinate, is what's ahead of me fake
Is it figments of imagination, or the enemies face
in my peripheral, the distant pools of entities play
Electrically brain dead, need rest for today, chemically gone
Somethings medically wrong with a man whos devils can talk
And sing sweet sexual songs, the romance never disrupts
Forever in love, the back burner, written letters in dust
Where the memories tucked, fuck, can't shake what I feel
Surreal, something deep inside can't wait to reveal
The hatred was sealed, pinned, but its patience is thin
It quips, through techtonic plates in my limbs
The great escapist, the sins, the very evil I harbor
The boiling point, the fucking fever, the heartburn
The wrong turn, the alcohol, the heroin, the ounce of raw
The ball in my possession, its the call, its omnipresence
Its the loss of all control, its the cause of my depression
Black intentions, penance, failures of my abstinences
Phone is filled with bad connections, plastic friendships
Baltimore, the path, the trenches, fighting it...
Been so fucking shut down, my last resort was writing this

IamBenT 04-24-2013 12:20 PM

fantastic flow, your vocab is really top notch and i love the journey you take us on and the imagery used

dead man 04-24-2013 12:47 PM

The wrong turn, the alcohol, the heroin, the ounce of raw
The ball in my possession, its the call, its omnipresence

sheesh

Zen 04-24-2013 01:52 PM

Geno why does your shit always get slept on in the OM? I think you needa start knocking some heads. Anywho now to the feed. Excellent shit here once again. I loved the line about the phone full of plastic friendships. Interesting way to say fake people lol. Great shit here and really shouldn't be slept on. I'd give more feed but it's dope and I think you know that. Keep droppin Geno.

Mr. J 04-24-2013 08:43 PM

Electrically brain dead, need rest for today, chemically gone
Somethings medically wrong with a man whos devils can talk
And sing sweet sexual songs, the romance never disrupts
Forever in love, the back burner, written letters in dust

slick guano right here....makes a guy quite mad how well that worked
a nice drop, deep as well...the flow was on point and the vocab never disappoints
good shit Geno

Natural 04-28-2013 03:40 AM

You are a wizard with wording imo. Transistions fade and blend into each other like its supposed to. I get the vibe of words of wisdom wise man tip from this...not necessaryly in content but wording.
Hard to explain but i did enjoy it. Im new to the site but maby as i get settled in we can collaborate.

Favorite part was devils who talk ish tbh.
No oustanding improvements that i can help you with
So stay up and keep writing

Geno 04-28-2013 09:17 AM

Thanks natty.

We can collab whenever. I'm ready to go nuts around here and get active. So hit me with something if you already have a verse and ill vibe to it. Either that or ill come up with something.

Natural 04-29-2013 07:43 PM

Give me a few days. Tied up with work...but I'll definitely get a verse to you soon.
Ive been in a rut with writing lately but im ready to light up.

Geno 04-29-2013 08:47 PM

Sounds good, I plan on getting the OM live again. You are going to be part of it if the collab goes down. Get me something asap.

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Fig 04-29-2013 10:40 PM

Quote:

The great escapist, the sins, the very evil I harbor
The boiling point, the fucking fever, the heartburn
The wrong turn, the alcohol, the heroin, the ounce of raw
The ball in my possession, its the call, its omnipresence
this part got my heart pumpin man.

There's some dark stuff here, everything is represented so well that it has to be real... I wish you'd post more lol

Geno 07-19-2018 05:48 AM

Levitate

Geno 07-13-2020 11:24 PM

Fuck. I remember these feelings man. Never again

Exis 07-18-2020 11:13 PM

You should right more...

Exis 07-18-2020 11:15 PM

Or write lol, stupid auto correct...


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