Orc vs fresh-ORC WINS
 

10 lines due today sometime

check @Orc

How you gonna compare yourself to Orcs when you are hardly a shrew
Those homo infused larping sessions the only time you be bodying dudes
The proof is in your check, you posted the actor you fantasize over
I can imagine your room is James Franco themed and its clad with his posters
Probably got some unicorn pillows with which you fight @Diode and @Bags
But after the slumber party your back on netcee's as the three lonely fags
You're such a fucking queer that its impossible for you to get your head straight
Cutting off your bug fucking needle dick the only way to get rid of the dead weight
If I were to battle you face to face, you'd probably just start kneeling
But the attraction isn't mutual, so you know what I mean when I say no hard feelings

son u got bars. u'd beat loadsa nice heads,
Congrats kid ur a Natural... aka a faggot who shudnt post in my threads
my worse shit bodies watever ur comin w/ faggot..
if YOU'RE whats considered fresh? i'm a rotting corpse covered in maggots
u never been nice. quit txt & fall away,
if u talking like u got Rust. it's a cutout Matthew McConaughey
My Hands got an Over The Top style. Ima vet clown
Yours do too - Girls don't let you touch them from the Neck Down
i seen u cry and whine already!? like how nerdy is dude,
man the last fresh here was a bitch & didn't come across as girly as u.

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?p=2...d=1#post272986

Heres my second vote boss

How you gonna compare yourself to Orcs when you are hardly a shrew
Those homo infused larping sessions the only time you be bodying dudes

Should have worked with this more. Basic.

The proof is in your check, you posted the actor you fantasize over
I can imagine your room is James Franco themed and its clad with his posters

Concept was cool, think you could have went in a different direction tho to land more effectively as well as added some harshness.

Probably got some unicorn pillows with which you fight @Diode and @Bags
But after the slumber party your back on netcee's as the three lonely fags

Nah

You're such a fucking queer that its impossible for you to get your head straight
Cutting off your bug fucking needle dick the only way to get rid of the dead weight

Nah - All thou I think dead weight could have made for a potential dope concept.

If I were to battle you face to face, you'd probably just start kneeling
But the attraction isn't mutual, so you know what I mean when I say no hard feelings


Eh, wording and execution killed here. Could have landed effectively.

vs

son u got bars. u'd beat loadsa nice heads,
Congrats kid ur a Natural... aka a faggot who shudnt post in my threads

No

my worse shit bodies watever ur comin w/ faggot..
if YOU'RE whats considered fresh? i'm a rotting corpse covered in maggots

Lol - Cool.

u never been nice. quit txt & fall away,
if u talking like u got Rust. it's a cutout Matthew McConaughey

No

My Hands got an Over The Top style. Ima vet clown
Yours do too - Girls don't let you touch them from the Neck Down

Haha, this was alright.

i seen u cry and whine already!? like how nerdy is dude,
man the last fresh here was a bitch & didn't come across as girly as u.

Eh - wack.

Overall. I think Orc does take this with minimal effort. I've seen better Bars from you, son. Fresh, work on your concepts and executed them properly dude. Take some time, develop some nice harsh concepts and execute them with the proper precise wording and you'll be straight. NC's is a different ball game brother, not like RB.

v/Orc - Better execution of concepts and consistent.

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How you gonna compare yourself to Orcs when you are hardly a shrew
Those homo infused larping sessions the only time you be bodying dudes
this had potential but fell short
Probably got some unicorn pillows with which you fight @Diode and @Bags
But after the slumber party your back on netcee's as the three lonely fags
I thought this was going somewhere but again ... fell short
You're such a fucking queer that its impossible for you to get your head straight
Cutting off your bug fucking needle dick the only way to get rid of the dead weight
this was just weird

vs


My Hands got an Over The Top style. Ima vet clown
Yours do too - Girls don't let you touch them from the Neck Down
nice
i seen u cry and whine already!? like how nerdy is dude,
man the last fresh here was a bitch & didn't come across as girly as u.
I think everyone misses Freshadiddle, not bad

One sided battle, orc got this with his last 2 bars.

Vote-Orc

Obvious reasons.

Vote - Orc

RTF - http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=57076

Didn't like fresh's take here, that over the top line was ridic by Orc, liked the swag on fresh rotten corpse line

I got Orc with a more consistent verse

I like fresh's style. But a lot of things - not to say they didnt land but they just didnt land as hard as I wanted them too. Orc had more misses than lands but what did land was in good judgment. This was a regularly good battle. But Orc had a bit more sting and I am going to lean towards him. Good job, thanks for the read.

its aight, This could have been better
Vote- ORC
reason: better concepts

Awkward wording and rhyming lost one the battle.

MVGT-ORC