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Miss Netcees 05-02-2019 07:42 PM

A new life
 
Trying to leave things in the past
Start a new life.
Don't have to worry about a thing
Jesus by my side.
He help me overcome strife.
The day I die
I hope Jesus take me high

~RustyGunZ~ 05-03-2019 02:13 PM

good for you

Blas 05-03-2019 02:17 PM

he will take you high babe, he will take you high

beautiful

Miss Netcees 05-03-2019 03:51 PM

Thanks loves

Exis 05-08-2019 04:21 AM

Didin't I say to work on multies?...Gotta flesh this out more ma, Like just expand on your content so it resonates more with the reader, Your pieces are so short.

Make them longer...

Stay up with it.

Aero 05-08-2019 08:08 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Exis (Post 739627)
Didin't I say to work on multies?...Gotta flesh this out more ma, Like just expand on your content so it resonates more with the reader, Your pieces are so short.

Make them longer...

Stay up with it.


Are you slow? This is her and we accept it.

Exis 05-08-2019 09:41 PM

My bad, I'll be more of a cunt next time nigga...

Miss Netcees 05-10-2019 01:12 PM

It's ok no need to apologise love, thanks for advice and feedback everyone


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