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Hush 07-20-2020 03:24 PM

Rnd1 - Blue Bayou vs Evad {Blue Bayou Wins}
 
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Due tonight



@Blue Bayou
@evaD

Hush 07-20-2020 09:04 PM

@Blue Bayou I have Evads verse

Blue Bayou 07-20-2020 11:17 PM

*no zelph votes*

you voted me UPN Champ, called me the best of the greats
so we’re cool dave, only Wedge in the relationship’s the shoe ur girl left at my place
hit you in the ribs so hard ya blood curdles speakin..
fuck ur sunny disposition, youre talkin Bubbly now cuz of internal bleedin’
those concepts you dropped against Hush needed maddd revisions
voters decided to Crown Vic, you took a backseat after all the bad decisions
& you claim youre good looking?! bro, that’s a little drastic
only bitch calling you a Knockout was Bags reviewing ur battle in the Classic
i hear the sound of the police, my nine is raised n' squeezin
you hear the sound of The Police & shout STING'S MY FAVORITE weepin

evaD 07-21-2020 02:11 AM

Try something.. we all know Dave’ll die stuntin’
The only time Blue balls hard is if finny dot been dry humping
He ain’t bringing any hits and he wouldn’t fight me so stop it
He’ll only be swinging from the hip when I rip his legs right out their sockets
Why you run hard with gun bars? That just ain’t how we see you
Every time you drop a pic I think PeeWee’s playhouse getting a reboot
He’s an ugly boy but he must treat his girl right n buy her cuddly toys
Cuz she looks like she’s had a lot of TLC... matches vs the Dudley Boys
Twin revolvers fully loaded, you see the choppers then you shook
When I put two spinners to your top it’s taken off like a chinook

Sharp 07-21-2020 08:24 AM

you voted me UPN Champ, called me the best of the greats
so we’re cool dave, only Wedge in the relationship’s the shoe ur girl left at my place
cool
hit you in the ribs so hard ya blood curdles speakin..
fuck ur sunny disposition, youre talkin Bubbly now cuz of internal bleedin’
okay
those concepts you dropped against Hush needed maddd revisions
voters decided to Crown Vic, you took a backseat after all the bad decisions
solid
& you claim youre good looking?! bro, that’s a little drastic
only bitch calling you a Knockout was Bags reviewing ur battle in the Classic
nice
i hear the sound of the police, my nine is raised n' squeezin
you hear the sound of The Police & shout STING'S MY FAVORITE weepin
funny but light


Try something.. we all know Dave’ll die stuntin’
The only time Blue balls hard is if finny dot been dry humping
blue's gonna be mad at me for not hating a blue balls line, but this is funny, has a current event angle, and reads smooth
He ain’t bringing any hits and he wouldn’t fight me so stop it
He’ll only be swinging from the hip when I rip his legs right out their sockets
cool
Why you run hard with gun bars? That just ain’t how we see you
Every time you drop a pic I think PeeWee’s playhouse getting a reboot
lol. Funny but light
He’s an ugly boy but he must treat his girl right n buy her cuddly toys
Cuz she looks like she’s had a lot of TLC... matches vs the Dudley Boys
I had to google it, so it's not hitting hard as it could for me
Twin revolvers fully loaded, you see the choppers then you shook
When I put two spinners to your top it’s taken off like a chinook
sick. Well put together from start to finish


I'm really on the fence about this one. Both verses are dope. same number of quotes and bars I could take or leave. Blue's advantage, for me, is that his personals hit harder so I got him by a hair. I expect some split votes on this one though. Battle of thr round, easy. Good shit

V/Blue

UserName 07-21-2020 08:49 AM

This was cloooooose.

I’m gonna go with Blue, but Dave’s last 4 were dope. This was PeeWee, TLC, Chinook vs. Wedge, Crown Vic, Bags.

Overall, with it being tied on quotables - I took a few other things into account to help decide a winner: wording, effective use of the setup, and swagger/humor. And I think Blue had a better grasp of the intangibles here.

Pardon my lack of a line of a line breakdown fellas, voting from my phone for this one.

V - Blue

Orc 07-21-2020 09:57 AM

I think Dave won this one. Blue may have underestimated him slightly - couple throwaway bars such as Knockout and the closer. Neither hit to me. Crown Vic seemed old as well because I’ve seen it on Hush. Opener was fire. So was Bubbly. Great twist on the concept made it fire. Daves TLC line was a perfect misdirection, fire. Closer was well worded and hit. The only real miss for me was the Peewee line. Blue balls has been done to death but the Finny tie in was nice. I’ve got Dave here.

Destroyer 07-21-2020 10:20 AM

I have blue here
It’s pretty even on quotables but dave loses points for the chinook bar cuz it just feels like cred wrote it 27 times
Sting and pee wee’s playhouse cancel each other out (I loved both bars)
I tossed out blue’s crown Vic line cause this ain’t a hush battle
That said I think blue had a slightly stronger verse but Dave about to be a problem

V/bb

Hush 07-21-2020 10:29 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou (Post 781608)
*no zelph votes*

you voted me UPN Champ, called me the best of the greats
so we’re cool dave, only Wedge in the relationship’s the shoe ur girl left at my place
fire. never saw nothing like this. good shit
hit you in the ribs so hard ya blood curdles speakin..
fuck ur sunny disposition, youre talkin Bubbly now cuz of internal bleedin’
so dope. this is fire man sheeeesh
those concepts you dropped against Hush needed maddd revisions
voters decided to Crown Vic, you took a backseat after all the bad decisions
not good. someone just did this on me. no good way to do this anymore. maybe im biased i never saw a version of this I liked
& you claim youre good looking?! bro, that’s a little drastic
only bitch calling you a Knockout was Bags reviewing ur battle in the Classic
eh this is filler
i hear the sound of the police, my nine is raised n' squeezin
you hear the sound of The Police & shout STING'S MY FAVORITE weepin
lol maybe kinda, but u worded it so fucking wierd man. my nine will blaze/stings my fav. or any other rhyme scheme the way u worded this killed momentum and sting, u a veteran bro u know that

Quote:

Originally Posted by evaD (Post 781667)
Try something.. we all know Dave’ll die stuntin’
The only time Blue balls hard is if finny dot been dry humping
good opener
He ain’t bringing any hits and he wouldn’t fight me so stop it
He’ll only be swinging from the hip when I rip his legs right out their sockets
thats nice
Why you run hard with gun bars? That just ain’t how we see you
Every time you drop a pic I think PeeWee’s playhouse getting a reboot

im so fucking dead. lmaoooo good shit
He’s an ugly boy but he must treat his girl right n buy her cuddly toys
Cuz she looks like she’s had a lot of TLC... matches vs the Dudley Boys
lol i fuck with this. nice
Twin revolvers fully loaded, you see the choppers then you shook
When I put two spinners to your top it’s taken off like a chinook
never saw it done like this. i get it. not bad. why did u italize the letter I tho, that threw me for a loop. this is good man


dang this is close af

blue has lotb. bubbly is the best line. wedge is the second best line

BUT Dave didnt miss. every line Dave had was good or better


Blue tripped on his closer, and the Bags line wasnt good. BUT wasnt bad either...


so close

Daves peewee line is hilarious but its not a tradiitonally sound punch like Blues two openers


but again Dave not missing is standing out to me


no cap I got Dave slightly


v Evad

evaD 07-21-2020 10:43 AM

@Hush that vote was suspenseful af lmaoo

Bomb Bard 07-21-2020 10:46 AM

Wedge in relation ship talkin bubbly crown Vic and bags


Vs

From the hip, peewees playhouse was dope I use a similar concept in my blue battle I no showed
And TLC was nice


I got Blue with one more quotable

Amen 07-21-2020 11:27 AM

Blue:

Wedge nice
Crown Vic nice
Knockout was ok.

Dave:

Gun bars/Peewee reboot fire

Blue was more effective and consistent here punch for punch. IMO Dave had the LOTB tho but wasn’t really feeling much else.

Blue By You


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