Just some tracks for ya
 

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Hey bud

Best way to get feedback here is leave feed on OM pieces and link yours. Usually will get you more than just dropping a link

I know the audio section is mostly dead but the OM itself has a few recent ish pieces

Yeah I was planning on combing through some posts after work to reply on...

Btw...why I get kicked out of Discord? Ppl just supposed to let Bags talk down to them without saying shit back? He on some kinda pedestal or somethin? Got me fuuucked up lol
I came in chill af too and had to fight off attacks and aggressive dick pic demands lmao

Idk. I'm in and out of conversations during the week usually. I didn't kick you and I don't think you were banned (meaning you should be able to rejoin from the same link)... Discord is just wild sometimes. Half the cord asks everyone for dick pics semi ironically and rod calls everyone every slur so it wasn't personal

I'll give these a listen soon either way

I tried the link a couple times lol no luck.

Weird. I just reset something, feel free to try again if you want/still have the link.

What’s up man?

I peeped 10-96 and I liked the vibe you were going for, the beat was awesome and honestly the flow and lyrics were nice. Most of my issue was with the delivery, it just felt like it could have been delivered harder, it just feels more spoken than it was aggressive, and with the lyrical content you’re going for I think you’d benefit more from being a little more angry when you spit

My other issue is there’s no tonal change between the verses and the hook and they just kind of blend together. Which I think comes down to editing/delivery problems. The content itself was dope and I dug the flow and beat. Keep spitting man

Thanks for the feedback, but the vibe was something I wanted to keep throughout the song so the hooks biggest standout is the delivery style vs the 2 verses so I felt being aggressive would kill the vibe....it's a ride and smoke a blunt type vibe, plus that shit knocks hard if you got a system. I do make it a point to make each song significantly different than the last...I got some high energy aggressive shit coming soon...you'll like 5 Minute Abs whenever I get it mixed down...shit is 5 min bar out

I also tried to leave feedback on like 6 different posts but every godamn one of them removed their songs lol

this is hot! lol
nice

Hi Curse,
I've digested about 3 trax...
Based on that sample size, you have a lot of potential, my friend...I think the writing/bars are there...
All you need to do is work on your delivery a little...to make it hit HARDER...
This involves many, many practice takes, bit more inflection & change-ups....AND a little more trying to hit the snare, or be a bit more on beat...

um, your "10-96" would be a good example.
Based on those lyrics/material it SHOULD be a little more fire than it is...
Not trying to knock or diss you, I just know it can sound better...

I myself am still practicing and everything I've said to you can apply to me, of course...But as I keep practicing these are the things I've noticed about 3 of your trax....

lollll
"Sociopath" track just came on auto-play....Niiice I thought...whoever that first rapper is a littttle more on beat (and more inflection) than #2 (which may be you?))....jus keep practicin...
Ah, now "without warning" is playing...again, you did not do the writing quite justice...YET...need more energy BUT
it is admirable that you are creating... AND posting tracks, keep it up

waiting on that one you told ad about, 5 minute abs or whatever

Hey bro. Bags aint around on the discord we be in anymore. Idk maybe swing by.. i think this will get you into our forum. 1

https://discord.com/invite/6AhnEeZY