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Week 8: Packed Graves (1-0) vs. Enbombz (1-0) - ENBOMB WINS
NBL Season XIV Rules Due Dates: • Verses are due FRIDAY by 11:59 PM PST. • Voting ends MONDAY ideally • Battles that lack votes may close later. • One sided battles may get closed early. • Extensions are 24 hours, anything longer is a DQ and/or Double DQ • To avoid issues, you are encouraged to PM me your verse in advance Line Limit: • Min. = 10 lines • Max. = 20 lines • The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both. Voting: • I do not have time to count links, and I know nobody wants to post them because it’s tedious. Do your part and vote or I’m making house calls. General Rules: • 1st person to post can't edit after the 2nd person posts. • 2nd person to post can't edit after a vote has been made. • Feeding = DQ. • Recycling = DQ. • Biting = DQ. • No freeposting, swaying or bitching. • Unless a picture battle is agreed upon, linking to your opponent's picture or posting it means you will disqualified. • A check in isn't mandatory, but it is encouraged. • If your opponent doesn't check in, you still have to post a verse. • Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in. • If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post must match the 1st person's line amount, and can’t post more lines. @Packed Graves @Enbombz |
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Enbombz aka Rutter Knows Best aka Sour Joog bka Body Snatchers tag team duo .....
you’ve never made a boom on the scene nor a name we’ve heard before you’ll see Bombs get buried alive like military equipment w/ no concern of war that names a racial slur yet y’all cool w/ what this boy is branding? post all your punches in a Cluster Bomb, yet never manage to make noise when landing defeat me your hallucinating, I’ll beat you to a pulp & ya brain comatose cuz if N-Bom even gets a vote, readers must be taken those & about to overdose you haven’t Snatched a Body since you registered- that’s more then just facts a finals loss in the MBK tourney, only thing you kept ya brother from was an award on his stats you the type to run home & lock doors during beef, ya porch where my goons play have them kick door & enter Bomb Shelter w/ cans like it’s preparation for dooms day keep your candy lines & gun bars- you’ve flopped every big battle- there’s truth to that somehow Sour Worms his way to the finals an gets bagged & handled quicker then movie snacks so I did my research, Rutter Knows Best from back in your vet days test my lyricalassault & we’ll see bullets stuck in a rut like they’ve being doing that for decades I’ve seen your battles the concepts are drawn out an taking a knee to the neck those bars aren’t just winded their currently making George Floyd take the deepest of breaths #JusticeForGeorge |
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Whining bout votes, you ain’t gifted! Just riled in the worst way You’ll be lucky to get anything... reliving every one of ya childhood birthdays Who you even faced worth a mention here? Stop it don’t lie Give a @Defiant answer...next questions how the fuck you lost to him twice Can’t even Stick to ya guns..when ya products in doubt Typical pack mentality, just another sheep how you follow the crowd Watch ya mouth! before you say something you’ll grow to regret Anything close to a grave threat gone end with you tombstoned on ya head Queue out the door for ya girl, they up in her guts gettin brain Bitch like snowpiecer, even you gotta fight ya way to the front of the train. Don’t Try fuck with my name I make a habit of murder I go for the throat...put a box cutter to packs like amazon workers Boy the lamest of the vets, safe to say I’ll drop you dead Messing with engraves, I’ll spell it out to you with a blade across ya chest You ain’t moving up the rankings, while dropping that crock of shit If we ever see a rise from graves...It’ll be in the form of a zombie apocalypse |
Packed Graves
you’ve never made a boom on the scene nor a name we’ve heard before you’ll see Bombs get buried alive like military equipment w/ no concern of war Decent opener that names a racial slur yet y’all cool w/ what this boy is branding? post all your punches in a Cluster Bomb, yet never manage to make noise when landing Even better defeat me your hallucinating, I’ll beat you to a pulp & ya brain comatose cuz if N-Bom even gets a vote, readers must be taken those & about to overdose Decent, good start so far you haven’t Snatched a Body since you registered- that’s more then just facts a finals loss in the MBK tourney, only thing you kept ya brother from was an award on his stats Doesnt resonate you the type to run home & lock doors during beef, ya porch where my goons play have them kick door & enter Bomb Shelter w/ cans like it’s preparation for dooms day Back on track, nice keep your candy lines & gun bars- you’ve flopped every big battle- there’s truth to that somehow Sour Worms his way to the finals an gets bagged & handled quicker then movie snacks Wtf fire so I did my research, Rutter Knows Best from back in your vet days test my lyricalassault & we’ll see bullets stuck in a rut like they’ve being doing that for decades Points for cleverness, but the wording didn't hit for me I’ve seen your battles the concepts are drawn out an taking a knee to the neck those bars aren’t just winded their currently making George Floyd take the deepest of breaths Decent closer Damn ok muhfucka you might be aiiiiight It looks like you put some amount of effort into this one, good. Movie snacks was the best bar, Cluster Bomb & Bomb shelter were nice, and the opener and closer hit. Solid fucking verse 8/10 VS Enbombz Whining bout votes, you ain’t gifted! Just riled in the worst way You’ll be lucky to get anything... reliving every one of ya childhood birthdays Not bad Who you even faced worth a mention here? Stop it don’t lie Give a @Defiant answer...next questions how the fuck you lost to him twice Not a fan of the "you lost to ___" bars, when that concept is the focal point of the punch Can’t even Stick to ya guns..when ya products in doubt Typical pack mentality, just another sheep how you follow the crowd Decent Watch ya mouth! before you say something you’ll grow to regret Anything close to a grave threat gone end with you tombstoned on ya head Nice Queue out the door for ya girl, they up in her guts gettin brain Bitch like snowpiecer, even you gotta fight ya way to the front of the train. Nicer Don’t Try fuck with my name I make a habit of murder I go for the throat...put a box cutter to packs like amazon workers Above avg filler Boy the lamest of the vets, safe to say I’ll drop you dead Messing with engraves, I’ll spell it out to you with a blade across ya chest Similar to previous bar You ain’t moving up the rankings, while dropping that crock of shit If we ever see a rise from graves...It’ll be in the form of a zombie apocalypse Fuck you, I have a bar with ' a rise' in it in my verse and now ppl are gonna think I was influenced by your shit. This was a decent closer I'm fucking confused. Niggas went Super Saiyan compared to their earlier verses. Snowpiercer and tombstone were nice, and I only counted three misses. I probably would've picked your favorite outta the amazon / engraves bars and left one out, or placed it elsewhere in the verse. 7/10 First impression, I felt PG's verse went a bit harder, but lemme go bar for bar Packed Graves keep your candy lines & gun bars- you’ve flopped every big battle- there’s truth to that somehow Sour Worms his way to the finals an gets bagged & handled quicker then movie snacks you the type to run home & lock doors during beef, ya porch where my goons play have them kick door & enter Bomb Shelter w/ cans like it’s preparation for dooms day that names a racial slur yet y’all cool w/ what this boy is branding? post all your punches in a Cluster Bomb, yet never manage to make noise when landing VS EB Queue out the door for ya girl, they up in her guts gettin brain Bitch like snowpiecer, even you gotta fight ya way to the front of the train. Watch ya mouth! before you say something you’ll grow to regret Anything close to a grave threat gone end with you tombstoned on ya head Zombie = Buried, Floyd > Birthday, Sheep Entertaining battle. Vote: Packed Graves |
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keep your candy lines & gun bars- you’ve flopped every big battle- there’s truth to that somehow Sour Worms his way to the finals an gets bagged & handled quicker then movie snacks defeat me your hallucinating, I’ll beat you to a pulp & ya brain comatose cuz if N-Bom even gets a vote, readers must be taken those & about to overdose ^if worded better would've been lotb Don’t Try fuck with my name I make a habit of murder I go for the throat...put a box cutter to packs like amazon workers ^dope line. v/ graves for being more consistent. |
bomb was a lil too simple but ok
cluster was good 3rd straight nameplay, not feelin this one mbk was ehh, statement ish cans/shelter lines been done alot before but it’a still ok lol sour worms was corny, but i fucked with it nah wasnt feelin rut closer was ok vs childplay worked with the quote, cool defiant line was more of a statement sheep line was nice, coulda been real heavy with some nasty wording grave tombstone was too simple snowpiercer was a bannnger amazin concept coulda been nice, wording issues engraves was aight closer was decent enjoyed the read, both got some solid concepts.. came down to how many more lines i liked and i think enbombz had 2 of the best 3 lines in here v bomb |
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Cluster bomb was nice Bomb shelter I fucked with, although simple Sour worms was dope The rest either average / not feeling Vs Bombz Childhood birthdays had potential, it was nearly there Defiant, the idea I fuck with but ‘stop it don’t lie’ / ‘lost to him twice’ bit of a stretch in rhyming for me Snowpiercer is dope Fuck. Close one. Could go either way imo. Both had some decent lines. I felt Bombz kinda had better ideas in places... less name-plays for example.. however, his misses were worse (really wasn’t feeling sheep or tombstone) while PG was a little more consistent so that’s where I’m leaning. Vote Packed Graves |
that names a racial slur yet y’all cool w/ what this boy is branding?
post all your punches in a Cluster Bomb, yet never manage to make noise when landing keep your candy lines & gun bars- you’ve flopped every big battle- there’s truth to that somehow Sour Worms his way to the finals an gets bagged & handled quicker then movie snacks vs. Queue out the door for ya girl, they up in her guts gettin brain Bitch like snowpiecer (typo made this confusing), even you gotta fight ya way to the front of the train. You ain’t moving up the rankings, while dropping that crock of shit If we ever see a rise from graves...It’ll be in the form of a zombie apocalypse v - Enbombz. In a battle of mostly nameplays, this was a close battle between the two. I felt En got it slightly, even though the quotables were nearly the same. Packed damn near had LOTB, but the wording for his Sour Worms bar was so iffy and long, I almost didn't quote it, which is why I italicized it. Instead, En had the LOTB with the snowpiercer bar, which outside of the typo, I thought was hilarious. He should do more of those, rather than the "do _ to _ like _" or "I'll ___________" stuff. Packed's extremely long bars took a bit out of the punch for me, as many were stretched to contain unnecessary words. I didn't feel a lot of it, but with the right wording and condensing, he could be good. |
you’ve never made a boom on the scene nor a name we’ve heard before
you’ll see Bombs get buried alive like military equipment w/ no concern of war I get it but it doesn’t really work? ‘Like a land mine or something would’ve worked better that names a racial slur yet y’all cool w/ what this boy is branding? post all your punches in a Cluster Bomb, yet never manage to make noise when landing This is nice, didn’t notice it was a name flip at first but yeah defeat me your hallucinating, I’ll beat you to a pulp & ya brain comatose cuz if N-Bom even gets a vote, readers must be taken those & about to overdose Decent personal you haven’t Snatched a Body since you registered- that’s more then just facts a finals loss in the MBK tourney, only thing you kept ya brother from was an award on his stats Bars getting stretched here could be way more efficient you the type to run home & lock doors during beef, ya porch where my goons play have them kick door & enter Bomb Shelter w/ cans like it’s preparation for dooms day Nice keep your candy lines & gun bars- you’ve flopped every big battle- there’s truth to that somehow Sour Worms his way to the finals an gets bagged & handled quicker then movie snacks Nice again so I did my research, Rutter Knows Best from back in your vet days test my lyricalassault & we’ll see bullets stuck in a rut like they’ve being doing that for decades Nice I’ve seen your battles the concepts are drawn out an taking a knee to the neck those bars aren’t just winded their currently making George Floyd take the deepest of breaths Don’t like this the expression is long winded Whining bout votes, you ain’t gifted! Just riled in the worst way You’ll be lucky to get anything... reliving every one of ya childhood birthdays Decent angle and personal Who you even faced worth a mention here? Stop it don’t lie Give a @Defiant answer...next questions how the fuck you lost to him twice This is ok Can’t even Stick to ya guns..when ya products in doubt Typical pack mentality, just another sheep how you follow the crowd This feels either played or obvious unless I’m missing a personal or something Watch ya mouth! before you say something you’ll grow to regret Anything close to a grave threat gone end with you tombstoned on ya head Feels rushed and forced Queue out the door for ya girl, they up in her guts gettin brain Bitch like snowpiecer, even you gotta fight ya way to the front of the train. Dope Don’t Try fuck with my name I make a habit of murder I go for the throat...put a box cutter to packs like amazon workers nice name play but amazon workers aren’t known for opening packages are they? Could’ve hit harder Boy the lamest of the vets, safe to say I’ll drop you dead Messing with engraves, I’ll spell it out to you with a blade across ya chest Nice name flips You ain’t moving up the rankings, while dropping that crock of shit If we ever see a rise from graves...It’ll be in the form of a zombie apocalypse Dope Ender Another close one with some good personals and name flips from both. I think bomb just edged it in terms of highlights and his wording was better to me. Good stuff from both. Vote enbombz |
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v/PG...Tough call, Sour worms & Lyrical assault edged it for me |
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Both had 2 air balls PG had 3 ok-ish bars, Enbombz had 2 PG had 3 standouts, Enbombz had 4 Yet PG had the better quality bars But then, Enbombz did have better personals while still pulling off some great concepts while PG went with 90% nameplays Going with Enbombz for impact |
I got 4-2, Graves with the edge. Didnt like movie snacks. Doomsday was lotb.uztt. cluster bomb was cool. Lyricalassault was dope. Emb had intro and closwe
Mvgt pg |
5-4 PG atm
Please vote if you haven't already Thanks all |
Too many name plays from both imo. Close battle
LOTB was Snowpiercer. Liked box cutter to Packs but I don’t like when names are shortened. Engraves was okay. Vs Sour worms was cool so was Cluster Bombs. Lines are a little wordy. Takes too long to get to the punch. Stuck in a rut was cool but wordy. Could go either way as votes have shown but I think EnBombz executed his verse a little better. Less choppy and more concise. PG will improve as he shakes the rust. Vote EnBombz (worst name on the site man) |
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Graves OD on the name plays where bombz had a more rounded and creative attack I also favor creativity so I’m leaning to enbombz here Enjoyed the read |
Facts. I should have another accomplishment. jk
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Good battle guys. Sometimes they end this close this has been open long enough
Enbombz wins 6-5 |
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