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~RustyGunZ~ 06-27-2020 07:44 AM

Neighbor vs Letterman - NEIGHBOR WINS
 
Due Thursday

20 minimum 26 max

@Letterman @Neighbor

Neighbor 06-27-2020 04:31 PM

Check

Neighbor 07-04-2020 10:52 AM

My bad, bro @Letterman

I’ll spare you the details, but I can key something up today if you’ll allow it

If you wanna take the W, I understand

Neighbor 07-05-2020 03:24 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Letterman (Post 779288)
Let’s just drop by tomorrow @Neighbor

Sounds good, I’ll drop tonight

What do you wanna do for a line limit?

Letterman 07-05-2020 06:56 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Neighbor (Post 779371)
Sounds good, I’ll drop tonight

What do you wanna do for a line limit?

20 is cool.

Neighbor 07-05-2020 11:36 PM

Letterman?


Docs gon’ have to patch you up after these hollows rippin ya flesh
Zippered over the buttons, but trust the stitches you’ll get ain’t Mitchell & Ness
You’re DEAD; my targets get shredded soon as I’m sparkin the FN
This murder gonna be capital, Letter.. after the first bar, I was startin a sentence
7-0’d you last month, so you’re sniffin dope if you think I’d no-show
Get shot w/ a Spec Ops Beretta; put the red dot on Letter like Pinterest’s logo
I’m all-in w/ this shit, chips in my grip.. tell this fag get a hustle
Only time you had skin in the game was playin strip poker w/ your dad & ya uncle
Alias who? You ain’t legend status &’ll never be a lock for the Hall
If you get Karaoke comparisons, it’s the same song & dance w/ Letter droppin the ball
Put ya head thru the wall when I’m at ya front door like you owe me something
Chest shot w/ the pump — leave a chunk of meat hangin off the trap; I’m trophy hunting
Only posts in battles, bites outta Archives & recycles that all-around trash
So I’ma drive-by & pull up on money laundering for bein a watered-down Cash
Quote:

Originally Posted by Letterman
Think I’m fake? I’ll catch him on the street then I air & erase em
& Just to prove that I’m real, I’ll keep clicking on the crosswalk - Human Verification

Boy please, your Zimbabwean ass ain’t keepin shooters around
If they hear you clicking ANYTHING, it’s just your tongue against the roof of ya mouth
Quote:

Originally Posted by Aero
Letterman is DOPE and has had some of the dopest punchlines. I face him next and if he comes with it it will be battle of the round.

This ain’t RB, keep sayin you’re a threat — I got the .30 by the Wesson
You got an Aer rating, but they’ll be diggin holes in dirt to find you fertilizer spreadin
You’re Black & proud, but that forced wordplay style’s been a cancer
Happy to make everyone in ya Jungle Book.. & it’ll bring me Mogley to fire on a Panther


20

Letterman 07-06-2020 01:45 AM

My team fuck girls in ur city. We find a dame & lay the wood
They love me like Mr. Rogers, that’s why I’m always running trains in NeighborHood
You got money? Brought two guns to rob em cuz I need my loot
& If you don’t end up paying inbred then I’ll raise a couple underneath your roof
Machete to ur bitch knees. The blood on the bed made an awful scene
Now you need a better mattress.. all because it was a leg hanging off your Queen
Dealt with a lot lately, but if I see you then I’ll clutch the pound
‘Cause life is a rollercoaster, so I always have to hold the metal thru the ups & downs
.38 will turn ur life to a horror movie. You’ll be screaming & crying
Now it’s an Annabelle scene.. The little toy I possess will be the reason you’re dying
I’ll beat your ass for fun. So for this scary bitch, it’ll be grim
& I’m NC’s Peter Griffin.. cuz I’ll be fucking up this chicken everytime I see him
Bring this sheltered bitch to my block, where even police are unethical
Fucking square.. before the cops even plant base on him, he’ll be turned into a vegetable
Big guns will make u lose a couple organs when it hits the geek
Puttin choppers in the back of your mouth, u’ll cough up more than your wisdom teeth
U been fuckin a hoe. That nasty slut can’t seem to get rid of ya
Cuz Neigh-sayer pussy fire, but most guys just disagree & bring up her Chylmadia
Neigh’s a fuckin creep. Sniper rifle aimed at his crib, I expect a homi
You got the swag of a Peeping Tom, & I’m scoping Neighbor’s house tryna catch a body

Zaddy 07-06-2020 08:50 AM

Docs gon’ have to patch you up after these hollows rippin ya flesh
Zippered over the buttons, but trust the stitches you’ll get ain’t Mitchell & Ness
nah
You’re DEAD; my targets get shredded soon as I’m sparkin the FN
This murder gonna be capital, Letter.. after the first bar, I was startin a sentence
nice
7-0’d you last month, so you’re sniffin dope if you think I’d no-show
Get shot w/ a Spec Ops Beretta; put the red dot on Letter like Pinterest’s logo
ok
I’m all-in w/ this shit, chips in my grip.. tell this fag get a hustle
Only time you had skin in the game was playin strip poker w/ your dad & ya uncle
uhh?
Alias who? You ain’t legend status &’ll never be a lock for the Hall
If you get Karaoke comparisons, it’s the same song & dance w/ Letter droppin the ball
wow, fire
Put ya head thru the wall when I’m at ya front door like you owe me something
Chest shot w/ the pump — leave a chunk of meat hangin off the trap; I’m trophy hunting
good again
Only posts in battles, bites outta Archives & recycles that all-around trash
So I’ma drive-by & pull up on money laundering for bein a watered-down Cash
i get the wp lawn during but I think you’re missing something here, had great potential but right now I’m quite lost
Boy please, your Zimbabwean ass ain’t keepin shooters around
If they hear you clicking ANYTHING, it’s just your tongue against the roof of ya mouth
lmao nice
This ain’t RB, keep sayin you’re a threat — I got the .30 by the Wesson
You got an Aer rating, but they’ll be diggin holes in dirt to find you fertilizer spreadin
nah
You’re Black & proud, but that forced wordplay style’s been a cancer
Happy to make everyone in ya Jungle Book.. & it’ll bring me Mogley to fire on a Panther
no lol


4 good
1 ok
5 misses



Vs



My team fuck girls in ur city. We find a dame & lay the wood
They love me like Mr. Rogers, that’s why I’m always running trains in NeighborHood
solid opener
You got money? Brought two guns to rob em cuz I need my loot
& If you don’t end up paying inbred then I’ll raise a couple underneath your roof
nice
Machete to ur bitch knees. The blood on the bed made an awful scene
Now you need a better mattress.. all because it was a leg hanging off your Queen
i liked what you were going for but this ended up having JUST OKISH impact
Dealt with a lot lately, but if I see you then I’ll clutch the pound
‘Cause life is a rollercoaster, so I always have to hold the metal thru the ups & downs
decent
.38 will turn ur life to a horror movie. You’ll be screaming & crying
Now it’s an Annabelle scene.. The little toy I possess will be the reason you’re dying
good
I’ll beat your ass for fun. So for this scary bitch, it’ll be grim
& I’m NC’s Peter Griffin.. cuz I’ll be fucking up this chicken everytime I see him
pretty cool
Bring this sheltered bitch to my block, where even police are unethical
Fucking square.. before the cops even plant base on him, he’ll be turned into a vegetable
dope
Big guns will make u lose a couple organs when it hits the geek
Puttin choppers in the back of your mouth, u’ll cough up more than your wisdom teeth
not feelin it
U been fuckin a hoe. That nasty slut can’t seem to get rid of ya
Cuz Neigh-sayer pussy fire, but most guys just disagree & bring up her Chylmadia
Nah
Neigh’s a fuckin creep. Sniper rifle aimed at his crib, I expect a homi
You got the swag of a Peeping Tom, & I’m scoping Neighbor’s house tryna catch a body
this had potential, thought you were gonna go somewhere else with it. Decent at best here


5 good
1 ok
2 decent
2 misses



Dope ass battle here. Could go either way, I have letterman taking it with a more consistent verse. Both had some bangers here and this battle should get a lot of attention.


Vote Letterman

Hush 07-08-2020 11:15 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Neighbor (Post 779464)
Letterman?


Docs gon’ have to patch you up after these hollows rippin ya flesh
Zippered over the buttons, but trust the stitches you’ll get ain’t Mitchell & Ness
....nah not for me really . Feels too dated for me
You’re DEAD; my targets get shredded soon as I’m sparkin the FN
This murder gonna be capital, Letter.. after the first bar, I was startin a sentence
...ok jab . Nothing heavy
7-0’d you last month, so you’re sniffin dope if you think I’d no-show
Get shot w/ a Spec Ops Beretta; put the red dot on Letter like Pinterest’s logo
....ok
I’m all-in w/ this shit, chips in my grip.. tell this fag get a hustle
Only time you had skin in the game was playin strip poker w/ your dad & ya uncle
....lolol this is fire
Alias who? You ain’t legend status &’ll never be a lock for the Hall
If you get Karaoke comparisons, it’s the same song & dance w/ Letter droppin the ball
.... that’s tight
Put ya head thru the wall when I’m at ya front door like you owe me something
Chest shot w/ the pump — leave a chunk of meat hangin off the trap; I’m trophy hunting
....fire
Only posts in battles, bites outta Archives & recycles that all-around trash
So I’ma drive-by & pull up on money laundering for bein a watered-down Cash
....eh
Boy please, your Zimbabwean ass ain’t keepin shooters around
If they hear you clicking ANYTHING, it’s just your tongue against the roof of ya mouth
...lol
This ain’t RB, keep sayin you’re a threat — I got the .30 by the Wesson
You got an Aer rating, but they’ll be diggin holes in dirt to find you fertilizer spreadin
...ehh it’s ok
You’re Black & proud, but that forced wordplay style’s been a cancer
Happy to make everyone in ya Jungle Book.. & it’ll bring me Mogley to fire on a Panther
...this bar KKKrazy. Kinda dope but I got my eye on u now bro


20

Quote:

Originally Posted by Letterman (Post 779474)
My team fuck girls in ur city. We find a dame & lay the wood
They love me like Mr. Rogers, that’s why I’m always running trains in NeighborHood
...nice
You got money? Brought two guns to rob em cuz I need my loot
& If you don’t end up paying inbred then I’ll raise a couple underneath your roof
...I don’t get it
Machete to ur bitch knees. The blood on the bed made an awful scene
Now you need a better mattress.. all because it was a leg hanging off your Queen
...nice. Why didn’t u say bigger mattress instead of better
Dealt with a lot lately, but if I see you then I’ll clutch the pound
‘Cause life is a rollercoaster, so I always have to hold the metal thru the ups & downs
...fire but it’s not a diss it’s a Flex
.38 will turn ur life to a horror movie. You’ll be screaming & crying
Now it’s an Annabelle scene.. The little toy I possess will be the reason you’re dying
...:ehhh
I’ll beat your ass for fun. So for this scary bitch, it’ll be grim
& I’m NC’s Peter Griffin.. cuz I’ll be fucking up this chicken everytime I see him
....hmm seems like this could of been doper. Cool idea. Creative
Bring this sheltered bitch to my block, where even police are unethical
Fucking square.. before the cops even plant base on him, he’ll be turned into a vegetable
...nice
Big guns will make u lose a couple organs when it hits the geek
Puttin choppers in the back of your mouth, u’ll cough up more than your wisdom teeth
...ehhh
U been fuckin a hoe. That nasty slut can’t seem to get rid of ya
Cuz Neigh-sayer pussy fire, but most guys just disagree & bring up her Chylmadia
....good flip
Neigh’s a fuckin creep. Sniper rifle aimed at his crib, I expect a homi
You got the swag of a Peeping Tom, & I’m scoping Neighbor’s house tryna catch a body
....pretty cool

This is a close battle


It hurt letter that imo his best bar wasn’t a diss


Neigh has the worst miss imo but the higher highs



I got neigh

Blue Bayou 07-08-2020 11:40 AM

Docs gon’ have to patch you up after these hollows rippin ya flesh
Zippered over the buttons, but trust the stitches you’ll get ain’t Mitchell & Ness
Okay so cool open, zipper over buttons tie in elevated this...coolish attack line
You’re DEAD; my targets get shredded soon as I’m sparkin the FN
This murder gonna be capital, Letter.. after the first bar, I was startin a sentence
love this, cant recall seeing it done on him and this was worded creatively
7-0’d you last month, so you’re sniffin dope if you think I’d no-show
Get shot w/ a Spec Ops Beretta; put the red dot on Letter like Pinterest’s logo
Okay nameplay...it's fresh conceptually for sure , cool np jab
I’m all-in w/ this shit, chips in my grip.. tell this fag get a hustle
Only time you had skin in the game was playin strip poker w/ your dad & ya uncle
lmaooo...this is jokes to me
Alias who? You ain’t legend status &’ll never be a lock for the Hall
If you get Karaoke comparisons, it’s the same song & dance w/ Letter droppin the ball
Nah too many similar flips have been done... Dom did dropping the ball / karaoke against karry years back, i believe it was seth that also had one....KK hasnt been active in years this seems like an all around reach for a concept
Put ya head thru the wall when I’m at ya front door like you owe me something
Chest shot w/ the pump — leave a chunk of meat hangin off the trap; I’m trophy hunting
pretty dope this was a great concept worded well, getting a bit gun bar heavy at this point imo tho
Only posts in battles, bites outta Archives & recycles that all-around trash
So I’ma drive-by & pull up on money laundering for bein a watered-down Cash
i think i get this, but nah... i think maybe its the execution throwing me off..
Boy please, your Zimbabwean ass ain’t keepin shooters around
If they hear you clicking ANYTHING, it’s just your tongue against the roof of ya mouth
i've seen this done as well and there's nothing flip wise here that's crazy different... this is worded well per usual but the concept is played to me
This ain’t RB, keep sayin you’re a threat — I got the .30 by the Wesson
You got an Aer rating, but they’ll be diggin holes in dirt to find you fertilizer spreadin
i'm all for a good flip but i did an Aer-rate concept against zelph in the NBL.. personally this isn't fresh for me so it wasn't a hitter
You’re Black & proud, but that forced wordplay style’s been a cancer
Happy to make everyone in ya Jungle Book.. & it’ll bring me Mogley to fire on a Panther
lol a lot of interesting tie ins here....everything 'works' and this was cool



Vs



My team fuck girls in ur city. We find a dame & lay the wood
They love me like Mr. Rogers, that’s why I’m always running trains in NeighborHood
lmao i can't recall this being done...i like this np great open
You got money? Brought two guns to rob em cuz I need my loot
& If you don’t end up paying inbred then I’ll raise a couple underneath your roof
great delivery... this is good witty wp , solid bar
Machete to ur bitch knees. The blood on the bed made an awful scene
Now you need a better mattress.. all because it was a leg hanging off your Queen
this is pretty cool conceptually, creativity points.. but the heart of a punch being i'm going to cut your wifes leg off will only ever be okay to me lol
Dealt with a lot lately, but if I see you then I’ll clutch the pound
‘Cause life is a rollercoaster, so I always have to hold the metal thru the ups & downs
i like this conceptually as well, but this isn't worded to be impactful to neigh imo...i get you incorporated him in the setup but it's more of a swag and flow bar to me as the punch is basically i'm strapped through thick and thin....wish you did this a bit diff but still respect for the idea
.38 will turn ur life to a horror movie. You’ll be screaming & crying
Now it’s an Annabelle scene.. The little toy I possess will be the reason you’re dying
yeah i guess a doll is a toy... pretty coolish gun bar, getting repettiive now tho
I’ll beat your ass for fun. So for this scary bitch, it’ll be grim
& I’m NC’s Peter Griffin.. cuz I’ll be fucking up this chicken everytime I see him
lol this is pretty funny & its fresh to me... cool bar
Bring this sheltered bitch to my block, where even police are unethical
Fucking square.. before the cops even plant base on him, he’ll be turned into a vegetable
this is fire imo... plant base is a dope idea and this was delivered really well
Big guns will make u lose a couple organs when it hits the geek
Puttin choppers in the back of your mouth, u’ll cough up more than your wisdom teeth
is Chopper a dental term/tool they use? Assuming so then this is a cool take on the chopper concept...i wouldve liked a rob you/coffing up your $ tie in more personally but still a cool enough gun bar
U been fuckin a hoe. That nasty slut can’t seem to get rid of ya
Cuz Neigh-sayer pussy fire, but most guys just disagree & bring up her Chylmadia
lol i think neigh-sayer is cool conceptually, the disagree angle and execution here was solid enough for me... cool np
Neigh’s a fuckin creep. Sniper rifle aimed at his crib, I expect a homi
You got the swag of a Peeping Tom, & I’m scoping Neighbor’s house tryna catch a body
this is also a cool nameplay to me...wording and tie ins were all pretty good



Cool battle guys, good stuff from both. I can see how people are torn on this one...For me both had some cool gun bar angles, nameplays, and a couple good comedy bars... both highs were relatively similar so for me personally this comes down to misses... I see Lett's misses primarily as just not being overly hard hitting vs. Neighs were i think he had a couple played concepts (drop the ball karaokee, click) .... Very close, both did their thing concept wise but i'm giving the edge to Letterman as i think he was a tad more consistent for me...Props to both

Vote - Letterman

dull boy 07-08-2020 11:40 AM

Vote - Neigh

It was really close

UPN Zuch 07-08-2020 01:58 PM

Neighbor

Docs gon’ have to patch you up after these hollows rippin ya flesh
Zippered over the buttons, but trust the stitches you’ll get ain’t Mitchell & Ness

Cool

You’re DEAD; my targets get shredded soon as I’m sparkin the FN
This murder gonna be capital, Letter.. after the first bar, I was startin a sentence

Nice

7-0’d you last month, so you’re sniffin dope if you think I’d no-show
Get shot w/ a Spec Ops Beretta; put the red dot on Letter like Pinterest’s logo

Nice concept, although the idea falls short to me based on wording

I’m all-in w/ this shit, chips in my grip.. tell this fag get a hustle
Only time you had skin in the game was playin strip poker w/ your dad & ya uncle

No for me

Alias who? You ain’t legend status &’ll never be a lock for the Hall
If you get Karaoke comparisons, it’s the same song & dance w/ Letter droppin the ball

Eh

Put ya head thru the wall when I’m at ya front door like you owe me something
Chest shot w/ the pump — leave a chunk of meat hangin off the trap; I’m trophy hunting

Okay

Only posts in battles, bites outta Archives & recycles that all-around trash
So I’ma drive-by & pull up on money laundering for bein a watered-down Cash

It’s okay

Boy please, your Zimbabwean ass ain’t keepin shooters around
If they hear you clicking ANYTHING, it’s just your tongue against the roof of ya mouth

This is dope

This ain’t RB, keep sayin you’re a threat — I got the .30 by the Wesson
You got an Aer rating, but they’ll be diggin holes in dirt to find you fertilizer spreadin

Missin it for me

You’re Black & proud, but that forced wordplay style’s been a cancer
Happy to make everyone in ya Jungle Book.. & it’ll bring me Mogley to fire on a Panther

Nice closer



Up and down verse being that it started nice, started to falter and picked up towards the end. Pretty good but not your best.

Letterman

My team fuck girls in ur city. We find a dame & lay the wood
They love me like Mr. Rogers, that’s why I’m always running trains in NeighborHood

Okay opener

You got money? Brought two guns to rob em cuz I need my loot
& If you don’t end up paying inbred then I’ll raise a couple underneath your roof

Cool

Machete to ur bitch knees. The blood on the bed made an awful scene
Now you need a better mattress.. all because it was a leg hanging off your Queen

Worded poorly on a decent concept

Dealt with a lot lately, but if I see you then I’ll clutch the pound
‘Cause life is a rollercoaster, so I always have to hold the metal thru the ups & downs

Okay

.38 will turn ur life to a horror movie. You’ll be screaming & crying
Now it’s an Annabelle scene.. The little toy I possess will be the reason you’re dying

These gun bars gotta be better if it’s gonna be your main angle. This isn’t bad but eh

I’ll beat your ass for fun. So for this scary bitch, it’ll be grim
& I’m NC’s Peter Griffin.. cuz I’ll be fucking up this chicken everytime I see him

No

Bring this sheltered bitch to my block, where even police are unethical
Fucking square.. before the cops even plant base on him, he’ll be turned into a vegetable

I like this

Big guns will make u lose a couple organs when it hits the geek
Puttin choppers in the back of your mouth, u’ll cough up more than your wisdom teeth

Cool

U been fuckin a hoe. That nasty slut can’t seem to get rid of ya
Cuz Neigh-sayer pussy fire, but most guys just disagree & bring up her Chylmadia

Nah

Neigh’s a fuckin creep. Sniper rifle aimed at his crib, I expect a homi
You got the swag of a Peeping Tom, & I’m scoping Neighbor’s house tryna catch a body

Decent


On first read a couple days ago I had letter but upon reread and complete breakdown neighbor had better wording considering you guys had similar concepts. Cool battle guys


Vote neighbor


Also, that human verification bar is a fucking doozy can’t believe I am just now seeing it.

Adverse 07-08-2020 02:08 PM

Docs gon’ have to patch you up after these hollows rippin ya flesh
Zippered over the buttons, but trust the stitches you’ll get ain’t Mitchell & Ness
^ thought this was a cool concept that could have been executed just a tad better

You’re DEAD; my targets get shredded soon as I’m sparkin the FN
This murder gonna be capital, Letter.. after the first bar, I was startin a sentence
^ I'm a fan. Good

7-0’d you last month, so you’re sniffin dope if you think I’d no-show
Get shot w/ a Spec Ops Beretta; put the red dot on Letter like Pinterest’s logo
^ nice scheme here and good enough punch

I’m all-in w/ this shit, chips in my grip.. tell this fag get a hustle
Only time you had skin in the game was playin strip poker w/ your dad & ya uncle
^ this was funny but not super hard lol

Alias who? You ain’t legend status &’ll never be a lock for the Hall
If you get Karaoke comparisons, it’s the same song & dance w/ Letter droppin the ball
^ nice here

Put ya head thru the wall when I’m at ya front door like you owe me something
Chest shot w/ the pump — leave a chunk of meat hangin off the trap; I’m trophy hunting
^ flames imo

Only posts in battles, bites outta Archives & recycles that all-around trash
So I’ma drive-by & pull up on money laundering for bein a watered-down Cash
^ liked the concept again but think you missed the mark

Boy please, your Zimbabwean ass ain’t keepin shooters around
If they hear you clicking ANYTHING, it’s just your tongue against the roof of ya mouth
^ HAHAHA cool here

This ain’t RB, keep sayin you’re a threat — I got the .30 by the Wesson
You got an Aer rating, but they’ll be diggin holes in dirt to find you fertilizer spreadin
^ yeah this was alright

You’re Black & proud, but that forced wordplay style’s been a cancer
Happy to make everyone in ya Jungle Book.. & it’ll bring me Mogley to fire on a Panther
^ I liked this but would prefer something more hard body as a closer

Letter

My team fuck girls in ur city. We find a dame & lay the wood
They love me like Mr. Rogers, that’s why I’m always running trains in NeighborHood
^ wordplay cool but conceptually wasn't a great way to start off

You got money? Brought two guns to rob em cuz I need my loot
& If you don’t end up paying inbred then I’ll raise a couple underneath your roof
^ damn alright good bar

Machete to ur bitch knees. The blood on the bed made an awful scene
Now you need a better mattress.. all because it was a leg hanging off your Queen
^ ehh could have used some better execution but was okay

Dealt with a lot lately, but if I see you then I’ll clutch the pound
‘Cause life is a rollercoaster, so I always have to hold the metal thru the ups & downs
^ this seems so bland tbh

.38 will turn ur life to a horror movie. You’ll be screaming & crying
Now it’s an Annabelle scene.. The little toy I possess will be the reason you’re dying
^ alright this was cool

I’ll beat your ass for fun. So for this scary bitch, it’ll be grim
& I’m NC’s Peter Griffin.. cuz I’ll be fucking up this chicken everytime I see him
^ feel like this had been done a million times

Bring this sheltered bitch to my block, where even police are unethical
Fucking square.. before the cops even plant base on him, he’ll be turned into a vegetable
^ this was cool

Big guns will make u lose a couple organs when it hits the geek
Puttin choppers in the back of your mouth, u’ll cough up more than your wisdom teeth
^ I mean yeah that's cool

U been fuckin a hoe. That nasty slut can’t seem to get rid of ya
Cuz Neigh-sayer pussy fire, but most guys just disagree & bring up her Chylmadia
^ DECENT ENOUGH

Neigh’s a fuckin creep. Sniper rifle aimed at his crib, I expect a homi
You got the swag of a Peeping Tom, & I’m scoping Neighbor’s house tryna catch a body
^ dope closer I liked it a lot

All in all this was everything it was billed up to be a dope semi finals match from two great battlers, feel like you both had some misses but Neigh kept more.consistent throughout so I'd lean towards him here. Dope battle

V/Neigh

Adverse 07-08-2020 02:08 PM

Oops dbl post

evaD 07-08-2020 05:15 PM

Docs gon’ have to patch you up after these hollows rippin ya flesh
Zippered over the buttons, but trust the stitches you’ll get ain’t Mitchell & Ness
Ok opener
You’re DEAD; my targets get shredded soon as I’m sparkin the FN
This murder gonna be capital, Letter.. after the first bar, I was startin a sentence
Concept probably been done but this is pretty complex and it works so I like it
7-0’d you last month, so you’re sniffin dope if you think I’d no-show
Get shot w/ a Spec Ops Beretta; put the red dot on Letter like Pinterest’s logo
Nice
I’m all-in w/ this shit, chips in my grip.. tell this fag get a hustle
Only time you had skin in the game was playin strip poker w/ your dad & ya uncle
Lmao nice
Alias who? You ain’t legend status &’ll never be a lock for the Hall
If you get Karaoke comparisons, it’s the same song & dance w/ Letter droppin the ball
Ok
Put ya head thru the wall when I’m at ya front door like you owe me something
Chest shot w/ the pump — leave a chunk of meat hangin off the trap; I’m trophy hunting
Nice
Only posts in battles, bites outta Archives & recycles that all-around trash
So I’ma drive-by & pull up on money laundering for bein a watered-down Cash
Laundering doesn’t really work here for me
Boy please, your Zimbabwean ass ain’t keepin shooters around
If they hear you clicking ANYTHING, it’s just your tongue against the roof of ya mouth
lmao
This ain’t RB, keep sayin you’re a threat — I got the .30 by the Wesson
You got an Aer rating, but they’ll be diggin holes in dirt to find you fertilizer spreadin
I think I get this but the fertiliser spreading bit comes off weird
You’re Black & proud, but that forced wordplay style’s been a cancer
Happy to make everyone in ya Jungle Book.. & it’ll bring me Mogley to fire on a Panther
Nice closer


My team fuck girls in ur city. We find a dame & lay the wood
They love me like Mr. Rogers, that’s why I’m always running trains in NeighborHood
Decent
You got money? Brought two guns to rob em cuz I need my loot
& If you don’t end up paying inbred then I’ll raise a couple underneath your roof
Nice
Machete to ur bitch knees. The blood on the bed made an awful scene
Now you need a better mattress.. all because it was a leg hanging off your Queen
Took me a minute but this is just ok feel like it could’ve been better
Dealt with a lot lately, but if I see you then I’ll clutch the pound
‘Cause life is a rollercoaster, so I always have to hold the metal thru the ups & downs
Lol ok
.38 will turn ur life to a horror movie. You’ll be screaming & crying
Now it’s an Annabelle scene.. The little toy I possess will be the reason you’re dying
Decent
I’ll beat your ass for fun. So for this scary bitch, it’ll be grim
& I’m NC’s Peter Griffin.. cuz I’ll be fucking up this chicken everytime I see him
Ok
Bring this sheltered bitch to my block, where even police are unethical
Fucking square.. before the cops even plant base on him, he’ll be turned into a vegetable
Decent
Big guns will make u lose a couple organs when it hits the geek
Puttin choppers in the back of your mouth, u’ll cough up more than your wisdom teeth
Pretty basic
U been fuckin a hoe. That nasty slut can’t seem to get rid of ya
Cuz Neigh-sayer pussy fire, but most guys just disagree & bring up her Chylmadia
Nice
Neigh’s a fuckin creep. Sniper rifle aimed at his crib, I expect a homi
You got the swag of a Peeping Tom, & I’m scoping Neighbor’s house tryna catch a body
Ok

I think both of you have done better than this but I think it was all done last minute and that shows. Letterman didn’t have a lot that really stood out. Neighbour had the better highlights and maybe the worst miss but I think he did enough to edge this

Vote - Neighbour

Sinnercog 07-08-2020 05:34 PM

Docs gon’ have to patch you up after these hollows rippin ya flesh
Zippered over the buttons, but trust the stitches you’ll get ain’t Mitchell & Ness

I fuck wit it, felt it could have been harder tho, it’s more about the swag than the punch as it stands

You’re DEAD; my targets get shredded soon as I’m sparkin the FN
This murder gonna be capital, Letter.. after the first bar, I was startin a sentence

okay.

7-0’d you last month, so you’re sniffin dope if you think I’d no-show
Get shot w/ a Spec Ops Beretta; put the red dot on Letter like Pinterest’s logo

simple similar really, again it maybe lacked some execution to make it hit hard but I can fuck with it

I’m all-in w/ this shit, chips in my grip.. tell this fag get a hustle
Only time you had skin in the game was playin strip poker w/ your dad & ya uncle

lol

Alias who? You ain’t legend status &’ll never be a lock for the Hall
If you get Karaoke comparisons, it’s the same song & dance w/ Letter droppin the ball

old but okay I guess

Put ya head thru the wall when I’m at ya front door like you owe me something
Chest shot w/ the pump — leave a chunk of meat hangin off the trap; I’m trophy hunting

ehhhh it’s decent but not hard hitting. you swagging somewhat but that’s it

Only posts in battles, bites outta Archives & recycles that all-around trash
So I’ma drive-by & pull up on money laundering for bein a watered-down Cash

not keen.

Quote:
Originally Posted by Letterman
Think I’m fake? I’ll catch him on the street then I air & erase em
& Just to prove that I’m real, I’ll keep clicking on the crosswalk - Human Verification
Boy please, your Zimbabwean ass ain’t keepin shooters around
If they hear you clicking ANYTHING, it’s just your tongue against the roof of ya mouth


old concept again here


Quote:
Originally Posted by Aero
Letterman is DOPE and has had some of the dopest punchlines. I face him next and if he comes with it it will be battle of the round.
This ain’t RB, keep sayin you’re a threat — I got the .30 by the Wesson
You got an Aer rating, but they’ll be diggin holes in dirt to find you fertilizer spreadin


seen the play done before tbh

You’re Black & proud, but that forced wordplay style’s been a cancer
Happy to make everyone in ya Jungle Book.. & it’ll bring me Mogley to fire on a Panther

I liked the Jungle Book half but the mo glee is almost Barcotic bad and the end doesn’t do it any favours imo

Sinnercog 07-08-2020 05:41 PM

My team fuck girls in ur city. We find a dame & lay the wood
They love me like Mr. Rogers, that’s why I’m always running trains in NeighborHood

too obvious for me

You got money? Brought two guns to rob em cuz I need my loot
& If you don’t end up paying inbred then I’ll raise a couple underneath your roof

feels kinda old, but fresh at the same time. liked it

Machete to ur bitch knees. The blood on the bed made an awful scene
Now you need a better mattress.. all because it was a leg hanging off your Queen

nope

Dealt with a lot lately, but if I see you then I’ll clutch the pound
‘Cause life is a rollercoaster, so I always have to hold the metal thru the ups & downs

okay

.38 will turn ur life to a horror movie. You’ll be screaming & crying
Now it’s an Annabelle scene.. The little toy I possess will be the reason you’re dying

nah too simple

I’ll beat your ass for fun. So for this scary bitch, it’ll be grim
& I’m NC’s Peter Griffin.. cuz I’ll be fucking up this chicken everytime I see him

nope

Bring this sheltered bitch to my block, where even police are unethical
Fucking square.. before the cops even plant base on him, he’ll be turned into a vegetable

nah bruh. you missing back to back here right now

Big guns will make u lose a couple organs when it hits the geek
Puttin choppers in the back of your mouth, u’ll cough up more than your wisdom teeth

damn, nope.

U been fuckin a hoe. That nasty slut can’t seem to get rid of ya
Cuz Neigh-sayer pussy fire, but most guys just disagree & bring up her Chylmadia

neigh Sayer too basic again. literally one of the first name plays that come to mind with Neighbor. gotta try harder and make it FRESH

Neigh’s a fuckin creep. Sniper rifle aimed at his crib, I expect a homi
You got the swag of a Peeping Tom, & I’m scoping Neighbor’s house tryna catch a body

nah


hated most of Letters verse tbh. I usually fuck with him, but not here at all. inconsistent verse and full of misses for me personally

I got Neigh

Aero 07-08-2020 08:06 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sinnercog (Post 779869)
My team fuck girls in ur city. We find a dame & lay the wood
They love me like Mr. Rogers, that’s why I’m always running trains in NeighborHood

too obvious for me

You got money? Brought two guns to rob em cuz I need my loot
& If you don’t end up paying inbred then I’ll raise a couple underneath your roof

feels kinda old, but fresh at the same time. liked it

Machete to ur bitch knees. The blood on the bed made an awful scene
Now you need a better mattress.. all because it was a leg hanging off your Queen

nope

Dealt with a lot lately, but if I see you then I’ll clutch the pound
‘Cause life is a rollercoaster, so I always have to hold the metal thru the ups & downs

okay

.38 will turn ur life to a horror movie. You’ll be screaming & crying
Now it’s an Annabelle scene.. The little toy I possess will be the reason you’re dying

nah too simple

I’ll beat your ass for fun. So for this scary bitch, it’ll be grim
& I’m NC’s Peter Griffin.. cuz I’ll be fucking up this chicken everytime I see him

nope

Bring this sheltered bitch to my block, where even police are unethical
Fucking square.. before the cops even plant base on him, he’ll be turned into a vegetable

nah bruh. you missing back to back here right now

Big guns will make u lose a couple organs when it hits the geek
Puttin choppers in the back of your mouth, u’ll cough up more than your wisdom teeth

damn, nope.

U been fuckin a hoe. That nasty slut can’t seem to get rid of ya
Cuz Neigh-sayer pussy fire, but most guys just disagree & bring up her Chylmadia

neigh Sayer too basic again. literally one of the first name plays that come to mind with Neighbor. gotta try harder and make it FRESH

Neigh’s a fuckin creep. Sniper rifle aimed at his crib, I expect a homi
You got the swag of a Peeping Tom, & I’m scoping Neighbor’s house tryna catch a body

nah


hated most of Letters verse tbh. I usually fuck with him, but not here at all. inconsistent verse and full of misses for me personally

I got Neigh


Who in the hell are you?

Blue Bayou 07-08-2020 09:09 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Aero (Post 779881)
Who in the hell are you?

Pretty sure that's Lars


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