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Sovereign 02-03-2018 11:37 PM

Random bars
 
This is some shit I previously used on a Microsoft Sam track. Feedback is appreciated.

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Deadlier than flammable nitrate mixed with samples of nightshade or tactical knife blades and the savagest primates
Bringing heat when spitting schemes, rapping a bright blaze
Y'all are frozen in time and prolly trapped in an ice age
So show respect in the ring like some classical bridesmaids or the cannon'll vibrate
The machine will make you leave the streets like you backed in a driveway
Behold the magical mindscape of a rapper that smites greats
Deadly thoughts of spells and rhymes that I craft in precise ways and daring to traverse the left-hand path with my right brain

For Battling 02-03-2018 11:59 PM

Dope shit bro, props on signing into the nbl

Lyriscologist 02-04-2018 12:35 AM

wow, dopest flow and scheming I read here so far , worst part was it ended too soon.. solid work! keep that scheme going..

Orc 02-04-2018 08:36 AM

Nice flow throughout man. Rhyming was slick. Check out @dull boys work. He was Metaphive back in the day. Or @CopyPat. Both have insane flow. Right up your street.

Geno 02-04-2018 12:03 PM

Nice.

Facts MuhSheen 02-05-2018 02:47 PM

#BATS

CopyPat 02-13-2018 02:28 AM

Damn. I really liked this a lot. Hopefully you post more, coulda been longer, i like this style and this content, also clever bars with real wordplays, nice duke. stay up, i'll look for ya


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