Dominate vs Ahriman - DOMINATE WINS
 

@Dominate @Ahriman

How many you want Ahr?

Min

Busy week

@Dominate won’t have time to write today/tonight

Post tomorrow?

Ext

Yes. I thought it was due a Friday anyway. Ooos.

Sent 8 to Sharp

Dominate's Verse

Act up it’s endin in violence. Even buck at your friends if they wildin
Bullets roar through a circle - that’s the fuckin MGM Lion
You & your girl start bickering and she come straight to my dick for a ride
Funny she call urs a matchstick… whenever it’s a rough patch, that box gettin hit on the side
Guy’s mug is a fucking nightmare, think of it late in the night
Got a noodle that’ll keep you up, no pool flotation device
Sharp said he had a chance here? Sooo polite. Total class.
Too bad Argon get his hopes up and find out it was only a Noble Gas



Ahriman's Verse


Die a log off???



Here’s an idea, faggot…
learn to properly speak before your lifes unconscious
Only reason you got good Bar Dialogue b/c you search & bite his concepts
Your boo deep throat hard, then open cooch soon as I say
Tonight she’ll drip my nut in your bed, that’s a true “ooooos on Friday”
Let this 9 bake a dude, pull up where you sought to calm
No Indian cuisine,…but for that bread? It’s nothing to Pappadom
I hate this battle shit… this legends writtens soft
We see you in the archives with more underlined words than Bags Vs Sonacog[/QUOTE]

Dom:
Act up it’s endin in violence. Even buck at your friends if they wildin
Bullets roar through a circle - that’s the fuckin MGM Lion
^ cool opener imo not too hard but a good solid hit

You & your girl start bickering and she come straight to my dick for a ride
Funny she call urs a matchstick… whenever it’s a rough patch, that box gettin hit on the side
^ dope

Guy’s mug is a fucking nightmare, think of it late in the night
Got a noodle that’ll keep you up, no pool flotation device
^ lol funny but it didn’t really hit for me kinda filler

Sharp said he had a chance here? Sooo polite. Total class.
Too bad Argon get his hopes up and find out it was only a Noble Gas
^ good wordplay here. Decent closer

Ahirman:
Here’s an idea, faggot…
learn to properly speak before your lifes unconscious
Only reason you got good Bar Dialogue b/c you search & bite his concepts
^ this is okay but you been around long enough you seen one of these type of lines done on almost every textcee that’s been around for years

Your boo deep throat hard, then open cooch soon as I say
Tonight she’ll drip my nut in your bed, that’s a true “ooooos on Friday”
^ I mean okay but kinda statementish, alright flip on what he said I guess

Let this 9 bake a dude, pull up where you sought to calm
No Indian cuisine,…but for that bread? It’s nothing to Pappadom
^ set up could have alluded to the punch a little more, good wordplay though

I hate this battle shit… this legends writtens soft
We see you in the archives with more underlined words than Bags Vs Sonacog
^ I’m not really following this one, are underlined words a bad thing?

Think Dom won this one pretty handily, and didn’t really try, Ahirman needs to do some fresher concepts and not bring a bunch of quotes in unless they’re tied to something insane, I think that was my biggest problem when I first started battling here is trying to dig up a huge amount of dirt just to find inconsequential stuff and I mean the flips were clever but you’re trying to inflict damage to your opponent, not just say funny shit.

V/Dom

Matchstick was a fire meta.... mgm lion was nice, pool noodle LOL
Argon works but is light and mehh to.me

Vs

Opener nah, I appreciate the attempt but it felt like a reach
Pappadom a solid np I haven't sent before
Other 2 mehh


Dom has more creative and better executed ideas... Matchstick was fire and the generics were consistently good concepts

Ahr was cool but a bit outmatched in an only 8 line battle

Dom gets it

Dom had mgm lion, matchbox was lotb, didn’t get noodle one and closer was cool

Barc started badly since that die or log off wp is quite obvious and it’s not even used the same way as what it’s supposed to have bitten. Didn’t get ooos on Friday? Poppadam was funny. Didn’t like closer

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Dom - I can tell you really thought that MGM live was fire, it was decent lol.. matchstick was dope, very creative we need more like that in this league... pool noodle was silly.. Argon I'm not giving you that..


Ahri - I liked this verse and the concepts and the personal angles.. papoadom was cool underline too..


Dom had better ideas and wording but this was good battle

Dominate

MGM lion was quite cool but I’m sure I’ve seen something like it before which subtracted from the sting
Matchstick was cool and clever

Ahriman

The poppadom line got me but that was about all for this drop

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