Verse against Kannon aka Nick Jones
 

U people dont deserve to read my golden writtens.

Even though you saved people from listening to this trash you're still a bitch for not recording it to your battle vs. him.

I had no way to record it man. Tha fuck?

U act like I wanted to lose when I could've easily chapped that tourney by taking out the strongest competitor in the first rd

I wrote a verse didn't i?

Lol still I get disrespected even when I honor a battle that's been closed for a week

yeah its been closed for a week

Gambini, you should still record it at some point.

Yo if u ain't gonna leave feedback then don't come in here.

I'm only posting this to honor me and kannons agreement. He asked me to. Ima spit over the beat n record it too so we could get some votes

Yeah I'm gonna tomorrow. Just won't be good quality cud idk how to get the beat in the program.

@kannon

Your best bar is the Star Jones one.

...Let me rephrase that;
Your only decent bar is the Star Jones one.

I still want to hear you rap this, and not have sloppy as shit flow. and I still think it's funny that you think you could beat me with this. And I think most of your bars are built for text and people probably wouldn't get them when rapped.

Cool. The only reason I was negative af towards you is that you agreed to do an audio only to bail when the other dude obviously put time into this shit. Sucks if the quality aint great, but anything is better than no-showing.

tbh, u should really incorporate the style u use for audio into ur text battles

just reading ur text battles and comparing them to this, two entirely different approaches

I gave you a full break down on how to import the beat in that other thread.

Word good looks Broke.

I been working on it.

Btw @kannon u are a fucking idiot kid. U got str8 merked. Have no respect for someone that can't give props when there deserved

Smh pathetic.

>audio tourney
>text verse a week later
>str8 merked

how'd kannon get straight merked when gamble couldn't even get in a studio to record this?

this has tl;dr all over it

Son, you put 32 bars against my 84.

don't be mad at me because you were like "oh man kannon, your shit was better than I thought it would be." and I didn't feel the same way about yours.

It was pretty much right on par with where I thought it would be. Which is why I was so confident, and still am, that I would destroy you.

I'll give you a better breakdown. You had three bars of intro, which is fine. every battle starts with a basic intro. Your first punchline is that I don't take a bunch of selfies on instagram. Next you try to say that I shouldn't have chosen to battle you. But I actually put forth effort into making sure I got you in round one and that it was a battle theme, so I don't see those lines holding much weight. Next is the "shitting on a can/kan" line. super basic. and the set up was basically irrelevant to the punch. Next is some complex shit. You lead with "you missed your calling, watering plants" which means absolutely nothing to anyone or anything. You have to just hold onto that line, because three bars later, you reference Madison Square GARDEN, where you say you wouldnt root for Nick/Knick. The garden shit was whack as fuck. Not creative at all. doesn't make sense as a double entendre. And basically holds no weight. the Nick/Knick line is okay, but your set up was all over the place. Star Jones line was solid. I knew the Kansir line cause you posted it in the other thread. I thought it was corny as fuck then, and I think it's corny as fuck now. that being said, I think the cancer/Kan sir play had some potential. I've surprisingly never heard it before. But I think your execution was okay at best. The Nickelback shit is the worst line in this verse. It's worded poorly, and it plays on the idea that anyone here would know that Nickleback has an album called The Road. Which I am only assuming because you capitalized it. This means that this line would only work in text unless your audience is Nickelback fans. (Okay, I just googled it, and their album isn't even called The Road, it's called The Long Road. That makes the line even worse.) I've heard way too many Nick Cannon lines for "you're wylin' out" to be remotely impressive. And seeing as how I'm currently beating Seadad (my only real competition as far as I am concerned), my "dreams" of making it to the finals are very real.

I really wish I could just shake your hand, say good game, and we could be pals about this. But you really are an egotistical asshole with no real talent.

And I still don't believe you have a meeting with universal.

This is the end of my book. Thank you for reading.

Lmao. Thanks for the close minded/I'm better no matter what u say breakdown.

I know my shit goes hard. Especially when I spit it, so u could say whatever u want to downplay my verse it really doesn't matter to me considering ur verse was trash compared to mine... U can't even flow, ur all choppy an shit... Don't even make me breakdown ur garbage...

Nice sway tho Kan. Takes a real emcee to do that!

Smh. Get on my level faggot.

Btw "Nickelback away"

Performance on the road

Triple post.

Not a Good look man

I usually try not to join the gamble hate train.

But you're doing this to yourself dude

Smh.

Sue me.

Lmao gamble ducked so hard.

QUACK QUACK FAGGOT.

GONE @ RESPONDING A WEEK LATER, WITH A TEXT VERSE AHAHAHAHAHA

Kannon merked this addict

Yo spicboy go fucking stuff yourself in a dirty truck w/ all ur cousins fucking pussy

lol loses by no show

one week later accuses opponent of swaying


gample pls

Dont u have some animated porn u gotta go creep off too?

I'm curious to see how that long bar would've worked over a beat.

You say this like it's an insult to Mr. Boners, but I am pretty sure the answer is 'yes' and he is proud of it.

So that didn't work.

You need to work on your insult game, how u gonna insult someone with something they freely admit to and are not ashamed of?

Just some words of advice to help you improve.

- Your Friendly Neighbourhood Irishman.

Thats not something anyone should be proud of, or defending. Lmao.

For someone with the name Witty your not that bright.

Im a new york/NJ style structure I guess. Idk if u listen to Ransom, but very similiar structure

Why not?

He can be himself, he doesn't have to try and fit in like some people.

By that I mean you.

I am very bright, very intelligent, thought that means little because a lot of stupid people are very happy and lead happy lives, intelligence is over rated and offers very little other than an ego boost...but what in my comment was not bright? You tried to insult him with something that was not insulting to him...you failed at your attempted insult.

I'm just trying to help you Gamble, you need it.

Whoever said I was insulting him?

I was just pointing out something he should rather be doing than bothering me in every thread I post in.

U said it urself, its quite apparent thats what he enjoys to do. lmao

Dont put words in my mouth Wit.

Oh and... I need no help. U wanna help me? Help yourself and sstop hopping on an off the band wagon.

You should read this again Gamble. I mean, it's physically challenging to read your replies, I cringe at most of the shit you say in here. Own up to your loss and stop trying to defend the fact you gave 0 fucks about 2 audio battles vs. someone who put the effort in. I got nothing against you, but this is not a good look man.

Go take scrip meds and be a total faggot online k?


Maybe even edit out a shit verse from pure butthurt

STOP MURDERING ME WITH THESE LOLS

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