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Atomic vs Shank Sinatra - BOREDOM WINS 5-3

10 lines due wednesday night 12 pm est.
since ur known for noshowing/being late, if u do noshow, i'll just take the W.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Shank Sinatra (Post 91109)

@Atomic

the most i'm giving u is 5 bars/10 lines. 1 month pink slip and user title/sig/avatar change for 1 month as well.

^ all the above & i would appreciated respected voters only/no retards.
ie; no lecture/flo/storytellerfaggot votes

@Shank Sinatra

i'll drop after you, assuming u show LOL

10 sent to @Sharp Nine @Atomic
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Shanks verse

can't believe i even wasted time writing for u ya worthless faggot... quick key.

when i get up n at em'..it's a chick slobbin between the sheets like a slut
faggot when u say get up n at em' it's cause u want a dude deep in ur guts
no one wants u on their team, u get dropped quick so no need to quote articles
anyone'd subatomic when ur rep and skill are equal to less then one of those particles
i rep chains n black to rob a lame or leave bodies in a fkn ditch
u wear chains n black to go w/ that faggot ass hair style and cut ur wrists
emo fag. ur the lamest nerd to try text, i hope u die next n choke on dicks
the only way this battle could get any more pathetic is if u were aloud to vote on it
text is ya life n it's stressing u out.. u need get this off ya chest nerd
it resembled a high school massacre the way u freaked out when u couldn't handle lecture

blah.

oh ok word.

fuck this canadian weirdo.

seriously he's constantly raging, i swear this dyke is irate,
so please take a deep breath, as i hold the CYANIDE TO UR FACE.
he's got the ego of a god, but please just know you suck,
i swear kid thinks his Artifact, but honestly it's all just old as fuck.
seriously ull be a virgin for life.. this stuff is depressin,
ur bars are JUST like ur love life, no set up OR fuckin connection.
i don't need guns to kill 'em. no1's scared if he says he's got a matic,
& my death plan foreshank? will show i've CLEARLY got a leg up on this faggot.
ur bars? all fuckin played ur dads pissed he had a son so gay.
the man can't contain himself, & is depressed @ what the broke RubberMaid.

see u in a month, "bye bye faggot"

Best Lines from both

no one wants u on their team, u get dropped quick so no need to quote articles
anyone'd subatomic when ur rep and skill are equal to less then one of those particles

vs

i don't need guns to kill 'em. no1's scared if he says he's got a matic,
& my death plan foreshank? will show i've CLEARLY got a leg up on this faggot.

I got a feeling that both kinda rushed verses in.. But either way, both were pretty solid..

Boredom, you were in so many places at once, it's hard to keep up with plus you stretched just a SMALL amount of ya lines.. And i mean a SMALL amount. But you did have some hits here and there..

Atomic, you were more aggressive and i believe you attempted some personals. Not any wowzers but they were there as well as a few attempts from Boredem..

MVGT:Atomic

Shank - subatomic was cool, a bit predictable though.. The vote on it would've been dope w a better set up.., rest of punches were ok but wordy.

Atomic - love life was coolish, foreshank coo np, rest was ok basic stuff but needed way better wording.

I had to do a tally bc this is razor thin close I have Atom at 12.5/25 and Shank at 12/25

V/ Atom

up.

would like more top tier voting, thanks.

Not really feeling either verse. Boredom had subatomic and his closer, kind of. Atomic had foreshank and that's it.

v/ Boredom

Dope battle. Atomic surprised me tbh, first time I read any of your shit

But tbr. I got shank here with more personal type shit. I think he edged it.
Sure, atomic had some cool bars. But they coulda been for anyone for real. I feel like shank got at his opponant better. Less stray shots and more direct hits imo,

V-shank

@Beyond @top tier heads/voters

emo fag. ur the lamest nerd to try text, i hope u die next n choke on dicks
the only way this battle could get any more pathetic is if u were aloud to vote on it
text is ya life n it's stressing u out.. u need get this off ya chest nerd
it resembled a high school massacre the way u freaked out when u couldn't handle lecture

vs

he's got the ego of a god, but please just know you suck,
i swear kid thinks his Artifact, but honestly it's all just old as fuck.
seriously ull be a virgin for life.. this stuff is depressin,
ur bars are JUST like ur love life, no set up OR fuckin connection.

Overall Vote - Close battle but I had to read both verses again before coming to my vote I felt like both emcees closers were they only good and strongest bars of this battle shank was bleh in the opening bars then towards the end picked it up and landed two atomic I felt like was the same but his two closer bars I felt hit or had alittle more sting than shanks. close battle but im leaning more towards atomic for being slightly more witty then shank.

Vote - Atomic

no one wants u on their team, u get dropped quick so no need to quote articles
anyone'd subatomic when ur rep and skill are equal to less then one of those particles
i rep chains n black to rob a lame or leave bodies in a fkn ditch
u wear chains n black to go w/ that faggot ass hair style and cut ur wrists
emo fag. ur the lamest nerd to try text, i hope u die next n choke on dicks
the only way this battle could get any more pathetic is if u were aloud to vote on it

Vs

i don't need guns to kill 'em. no1's scared if he says he's got a matic,
& my death plan foreshank? will show i've CLEARLY got a leg up on this faggot.
ur bars? all fuckin played ur dads pissed he had a son so gay.
the man can't contain himself, & is depressed @ what the broke RubberMaid.

V/Shank, cool battle, but i felt shank was more consistent his non quotes was still ight atomic had some cool shit but started off slow tbh, shanks aloud vote bar was lotb, props yah'll but sinatra wins.

thx for RTF allen. 3-3.

no one wants u on their team, u get dropped quick so no need to quote articles
anyone'd subatomic when ur rep and skill are equal to less then one of those particles
text is ya life n it's stressing u out.. u need get this off ya chest nerd
it resembled a high school massacre the way u freaked out when u couldn't handle lecture
vs
i don't need guns to kill 'em. no1's scared if he says he's got a matic,
& my death plan foreshank? will show i've CLEARLY got a leg up on this faggot.
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For a pinkslip battle i thought this was weak tbh, ive seen shank dropped better and well ive not seen much from atomic neways, felt most of atomic's line were just either too simple for my liking or just played out e.g the artifact line, he did have an ok foreshank flip tho. So down to quotes i got shank 2 against atomic 1, shank wins

when i get up n at em'..it's a chick slobbin between the sheets like a slut
faggot when u say get up n at em' it's cause u want a dude deep in ur guts
-woulda been doper if the first half of the second line was worded differently then the first line to relate better to the punch you were goin for, but was still decent the way it was
no one wants u on their team, u get dropped quick so no need to quote articles
anyone'd subatomic when ur rep and skill are equal to less then one of those particles
-liked the concept here and it flowed nicely, but the punch was a bit wordy for me
i rep chains n black to rob a lame or leave bodies in a fkn ditch
u wear chains n black to go w/ that faggot ass hair style and cut ur wrists
-lol! nice
emo fag. ur the lamest nerd to try text, i hope u die next n choke on dicks
the only way this battle could get any more pathetic is if u were aloud to vote on it
-allowed* for shame. this worked for me, not bad
text is ya life n it's stressing u out.. u need get this off ya chest nerd
it resembled a high school massacre the way u freaked out when u couldn't handle lecture
-sounds like he battled lecture in the past and didn't do well? if thats the case not a bad finish, pretty consistent verse, not really any huge weak point.

seriously he's constantly raging, i swear this dyke is irate,
so please take a deep breath, as i hold the CYANIDE TO UR FACE.
-unless i was missin some wordplay on the cyanide, wasnt really feelin this
he's got the ego of a god, but please just know you suck,
i swear kid thinks his Artifact, but honestly it's all just old as fuck.
-didnt feel it
seriously ull be a virgin for life.. this stuff is depressin,
ur bars are JUST like ur love life, no set up OR fuckin connection.
-not too shabby, i liked it
i don't need guns to kill 'em. no1's scared if he says he's got a matic,
& my death plan foreshank? will show i've CLEARLY got a leg up on this faggot.
-kinda liked, 3.5/5
ur bars? all fuckin played ur dads pissed he had a son so gay.
the man can't contain himself, & is depressed @ what the broke RubberMaid
-nice closer, probs my fav line from your verse

Felt Atomic had 2 or 3 bars I was feeling and about the same, if not more lines that I wasn't really feeling. Shanks 'cut your wrist' line was the most memorable to me he had some other decent lines and not a lot of big misses. Feel he took the battle with a more consistent verse.

+1 Shank