2013 Hit
 

I thought this was very good and read it 13 times. On the first read when you said 'Put your drinks in the sky' I was inspired to run to the kitchen to get a drink then run outside to put it the sky. Outside the air was fresh so I am very thankful that you wrote this to inspire me to go out there

Thanks!

dead

Lmaoooooooooooooooooooooo

this cant be a serious attempt(?)

Reasonably amazing.

thanks!

I fucking hate you, you suck cyclop cock fucking bitch have a glass of bleach martini and kill yourself

What the fuck is wrong with u? Stop free posting with negative comments.

Fuck it i'm done with this stupid bitch.
I'm done with the act i'm done with the joke it's geeting old , your fucking so stupid, on the edge of retarded all your drops is horriBLE! and you. lol. U r so stupid you actually believe these sarcastic ass fuck feeds are honest feeds LMAOO

u really think your the shakespeare of rap. kill urself

I hate u.

U really think nigma read this shit 13times?lmaooooo

2beautiful dont listen to him. you brightened my day with this masterpiece<3

He doesn't realize I don't care what he said, & thanks loves!

To be fair, everyone starts somewhere ...

I did.

lol the joke is geeting real oldd.. i feel bad for her. shes probably never gonna elevate..

ok, now this is like the bloopers/rejects from american idol whos parents told them that they could sing beautifully

lmao

I'M NOT LISTING TO kEN... I know I got skills & I can sing really good.

you tell 'em girl i got your back. they just don't understand you. keep spitting that hot fiyah. `1

You may be able to sing. However your written lyrics are simple and elementary. You need depth to your content. One word syllable end rhymes just dont cut it. You need to elevate your technical writing plain and simple. People that are telling you its hot, are 1. full of shit 2. After your pussy, or 3. both #1 and 2.

if you can say something with meaning, introduce more than 1 syllable to your rhyming words, change your scheme up to include internal rhymes you will come across much more skilled.

elevate.

look what u guys did.

Your end rhymes don't rhyme.
here doesnt rhyme with air
air doesnt rhyme with rhianna
rhianna doesnt rhyme with ballout
ballout doesnt rhyme with hits
hits doesnt rhyme with bottles
bottles doesnt rhyme with sky..

everyone has a Diff taste in music, but Ya'll don't have to be rude about it.

Nigmas comment leaned me.