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from time, you know i got it
BEAT: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DmqG_35_m-k
check me, i dont gotta' tell em' i don't gotta make a statement its not the official type like the whistle type, yeah ur right but only a little right, see the game needs change and i got it, but its hard to race Bugattis on pedal bikes, u know the feelin', Pac, can u picture me gleamin'? shinin' like a wizzbang when an eclipse came or like, 2 Chainz look i'm 3 times better, u can call me 6 chains, exchange the love, maybe-we-can-let-the-misery-free-us, ahh, sweet symphony i, seen the light illuminate a path, but i'm in the back of the what-i-had-museum, inbetween identities, mental mezzanine, drink heavily, pressin' keys, n' just hoping for a press release, i mean, i had 30 minuts or less like dominoes bitch, n' this industry got a bounty like that domino bitch, guess we're off topic a bit, ya'll know, young love, palo alto we-can't-be-together, no-hip-hop-in-the-cosmos, nah, ain't no Ray Charles glasses in those ashes, they still live on, while he's up there chillin' with Atlas, n' the world is on the shoulders of whoever can catch it then spin it on a finger before sinkin' a basket, yeah, and im back on my shit again, was sick for a week, u know when u get a moment to revisit ur visions, and u see the future on the line that ur johhny walkerin' zig zaggin', sparkin' shit, not lookin' as far as this, yeah, and as far as this, man, i just wanna be a part of it... i just wanna be a part of it, cant be apart from it, yeah, part of it lets get it |
That was the worst fuckin rap I've ever read. You suck.
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Bro go write bout ur battles along side bilbo baggins and gandalf and shit^
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i know u like that gandalf hat from the new pharrell video
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Maybe u should take more time on these instead of cranking out one a day......write one that takes u a week or 2
Take your time. Respect your craft with dedication and attention to detail. |
maybe u should rap these instead of reading em'. i know what ur saying, but this shit goes hard. ppl don't want perfect, they don't want to hear what u guys write. its too perfect, with all the diction and shit... they want simple and hits home thats what i try to do
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Do u think that i listen to text rhymes in my car?
This shit does not go hard It needs work |
and thats just it, since its not a mp3 u cant tell the inflection or where the snares are meant to be, but it goes hard in my mind. i know im better than mac miller, rick ross and that i love college guy. i can do this shit
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Lol cmon
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thats ur prob u think like 99% of ppl. u dont think somebody from here could make it big? what bout ghandi, mandella, wright bros, just a faded light in a sea of darkness. ur tellin me ghandi can free india and i cant write a bigger hit than i love college?
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LOL WHAT BOUT GHANDI!!!
I LOVE THIS GUY. |
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for real^
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In my opinion it need more creativity, flows, & complexity.
keep scribbling tho! |
bro pipe down, we been over this complexity thing^
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lol @ keep scribbling. fucking kunt
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no offence u need to stop bickering at everyone and step your music up
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fat kunt^
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Somebody make me a mod again so I can close every one of this faggots threads.
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ban me for what ya little bitch? self expression?
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I didn't say ban you. Play a beat and then reread what I posted so you can understand.
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im the only interesting thing bout this website homie^ pls tell me how i offended u this time tho
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Tbh, I'm just overwhelmed by your talent.
The profound impact of your lyrics leave us all in awe. Others may deny it, but it's true. Lets take a look at some of these gems for those who don't know. but only a little right, see the game needs change and i got it, but its hard to race Bugattis on pedal bikes, ^^^DAYUM yeah, and im back on my shit again, was sick for a week, u know when u get a moment to revisit ur visions, and u see the future on the line that ur johhny walkerin' zig zaggin', sparkin' shit, not lookin' as far as this, ^^^^Vintage Pac Besides the obvious profound effects your lyrics carry with them, there is something else that you have that alludes even the greatest of writers: simplicity. While the rest of us are pouring through our thesaurus for different words for sick, you're like, "fuck it. sick's perfect, and it goes perfect wit dis beat i dont even rap to, nahmean?" Genius. The simplicity of your lyrics is bound to garner a mainstream audience the likes of which the world has never seen. For countless hours me and Mac Miller have talked on how to stall the rise of DexLabb the rap genius to no avail. Even the I love college guy joined us on one such discussion, and after years of learning in one of the most prestigious universities, he too could not think of a way to stop you. Until one day it finally clicked to us.... OH YEAH, HE CAN'T FUCKIN RAP |
vintage pac, thank you dude. you know the only difference between dexlabb and tupac is we were born in different bodies - that's it
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while he's up there chillin' with Atlas,
n' the world is on the shoulders of whoever can catch it then spin it on a finger before sinkin' a basket, Do more lines like this one ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ That line is really nice. The rest is complete shit. |
music should not be broken down line for line. and mitch dude i love u bro, but you suck balls @ rap
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and how could you not include the ray charles line, which is strong if not stronger than the Atlas reference - that shows me u dont know what ur talkin bout
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well u know the majority of people who listen to music listen for a few lines in the song, aka the chorus, so ur wrong, lines matter more than the full picture. and im 10x better than u, u dont even know my skill, i see ur posts everyday and theyre decent but.. just doesnt compare to anything ive ever wrote from day 1 of my rapping. btw i dont even write often, i freestyle.
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holy fuck. and people say im ignorant and stubborn. can i enjoy some of the psilocybins ur shrink prescribed u too bud?
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