Crime business, no eye witness.. shots roar when I stretch the metal
 

Burner up in the briefcase, your whole top floor can get the memo

Yay!

Prime thick bitch, slow eye twitches... a raunch whore with the stench of devils
Murder stunk in her teeth case, this poor blond boar can get the mentos.

I liked this one

No tags?

tags.

Debated as the rawest on pages. God of the Matrix.
If your jaw droppers are sick... it's 'cause yawning's contagious.

Dope

U should battle, pussy

Take that as a compliment

you listen to death reborn yet

Funny, I'm listening to it now

Good "get shit done" music so far

You?

type of shit is wack to me but the battlers liked it. you just know them, dallie. Me and julie would say these garbage ass lines all day. No wonder he took up battling when he was here.

Shit's so unbelievably corny that I'm glad my writing sees more than netcees.co. Well at least the non rhythmical rap ones.

yea the production on it is crazy

celph apathy and paz murder everything

esoteric is wack

everyone else is aight

Yes. It's not the wordplay, necessarily, it's the way you have to word it to have that, 'ohhhhh' reaction. A lot of Eminem's newer wordplay is overlooked because it isn't worded out in as much of a dumbed down, easy to digest way. I hate battling.

I'll send a fucking axe at you if you insist on a fuckin accent

eminem plays around with really corny concepts now. I guess that's why they call it window Paine. Ugh

A,B? Lets C!

i reread that line. it was okay. I guess. Its just common dialogue/idiomatic language fused into one. Mildly simple. I think we talked about this before. Lets have more nerd writing talks. txt me

Eso been a basic bitch for awhile now.

Most wordplay is just happening upon it. Jaw droppers being a term used for a wow line, combined with calling it boring and yawning being contagious mixed with the slang of sick. It's a lot happening in one concept, in my opinion. Good wordplay is worded correctly is hard to come across, in my experience. I'd say 19 out of 20 'punches' are extremely corny and being forced just for the sake of putting out material. Filler, if you will lol I really don't wanna get going about how over done battling is. Battling leagues lol Battling is meant to be personalized. The scale with which battling is done is ridiculous. Especially in text where everyone wants a punchline for every bar. That's why battle verses are stale. There's no room for expression or personality because you're so busy trying to pack as much into a verse as possible. Shit is just corny, really.

Eminem's style has changed. The window pain line and plenty more are terrible. MMLP2 is a bit better. He builds on plays and carries them for multiple lines. Pitching a bitch. It's more subtly clever than some wowing type shit.

Stan'ing hard.

celph needs a full length, solo album already.

he speaks....
 

Like this one as well. Care to snf?

I think paragraphs are corny and that punch is the best thing dull ever written

The irony huh

Nerds

yea his flow is fucking wack now too especially compared to the whole aotp crew

You're a broken record. Battling is sorta corny, though. And if you think that's the best thing he's ever written, well my opinion of you hasn't changed. I already knew/thought you were dumb, or moreso uninformed. Discussing how to write or how something is written is considered being a nerd? I guess so, but I know how to do it better than you. My favorite thing you ever wrote was the third person line you used and I thought that was okay. Not defending dull boy, well I kinda am. It's the content in the paragraph, not the paragraph itself. It's just writing without a stanza. It's just writing this paragraph right here. IT's just writing. Nothing really complex about it. If you fail to catch on to things then you're not as good as you think. But who is? Ah well. Continue

I gave u a chance and ur swag n flow verse sucked... Ppl say its gay and refuse to vote cuz of ur homo tendencies

So ur critique is null

Basically I'm better

Continue

sways evident. Its only gay if you're gay. I didnt say anything gay. But, they're just uncomfortable that you got beat by a baby with homo tendencies. I won't say much about your verse, because I'm gay.

You're pitiful. Continue being 40 and buying shoes and making less money than me and have your people still be buttfucked by Che Guevara even after death. Even changed your avy after I dissed your weak ass race with a giant Argentinian cock. Beads of sweat of little commies drip off my whip made from the butts of big booty camaraderie.

Popcorn gif needed.

Lol

Lol u don't make more bread than me

I write better

And ure a racist faggot

I win

tehehehe I do, which doesn't necessarily matter, but given the age difference of two decades, the hilarity..is... And I'm not racist, just letting you know your egotistical culture which got butt fucked by a a more dominant culture was embedded in you from birth giving you delusions of grandeur. Actually maybe I am racist. But I'm allowed to be cause me and mustachia roleplay and I'm Che and she's my little slave then I pretend my weiners a gun and kill her with a buttload of cum bullets. The same cum bullets your people ate cause Batista got overthrown for doing virtually the same thing his successor did; and he was actually a full blown commie. The same cum bullets two potential voters thought were homosexual.

And @Muff actually got my other open mic verse mixed up with my one towards you, because he mentioned lines from my OM in our battle loll. which means he probably didn't read it, he just saw the word cum and got freaked out. Which says more about the potential voters/commentators than they do about me. You pulled a destro and were like omg vote everybody vote dude. Which you probably did cause you been making threads about the battle which I really don't care about, but it's like life & death for you so I'll play along. Plus muff's pretty cool.

I actually wrote that as a cipher collab with wise except shorter; and I just added random shit to it cause you're not an attraction.

Che's european spanish blood probably runs through you right now and you feel conflicted. It's alright.

happens

I'm not reading this

Good job, racist

Lol u sooooo mad right now

Sooooooooooooo mad I bet u wanna be hitler so bad right now

Hahaha

U suck so bad right now

U are so gay right now

Double posts

Man U maaaaaaad

Hahahaha

Soooooooooo mad right now

U like the Incredible Hulk without the incredible right now

This was a major improvement, @Neighbor. You're on the right track again, perhaps finally rebounding from the rhabdomyolysis.

not mad at all. Was pooping while I wrote it. Didn't even intend nothing malicious either. Just wanted to get under your skin. You're consistent though.

Consistently stupid. lol @ incredible.

That's a battler comeback.

You battlers are madddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd amazing at battling and being insulting.

Roast comes and you guys suck.

Means you suck at that facet of writing. You just say generic things. Come to think of it, no wide known 'battler' is actually funny. They just start lines off like

Ya slut sucked me off hard that ___
And if anybody is reading your lines then _____
And you're like the incredible hulk without the ______

just ass. Give up.

Unless @Batty is a battler then I take it back. @Vulgars kind of funny when I dont need wiki or imdb to decipher a reference. Idk man I think I just found something out

The top 20 battlers here are better than u

Fact.

20 u wack bastardized cum writing homo

Maaaaaad wack

ok sry.

Double post again

I beat ur boy vulgar who is the best of the bunch

U now extra maaaaad

U maaaad wack ass nigga

Hahahah

I just said he was funny, I didnt say he represented a demographic. And he isn't the best out of the bunch...but ok. Didn't pancake beat you or something?

Yea I beat him in a topical as well so he beat me in my strength cuz ppl don't know played shit but its ok I beat him at his strength too

And vulgar is waaaaaaaaaaay better than u

Don't front now

Plz say otherwise u clown angry ass nigga

otherwise u clown angry ass nigga. vulgar isn't, though. And you beat pancake in a topical how long ago though? You wouldnt beat a pancake 2014+ in a topical. Don't care what vulgar says about hybridizing. He just felt bad for you guys in that one thread. But yeah, pancake spanked you, I remember.