battle rap 1
 

My Art of Battling is stronger than a Charge of Calvary,
You call yourself the best? I Call that a Fallacy,
my pistol sounds like a dog Barking Angrily, Discharging Rapidly,
I corner the competition like Market Strategy…
Sharp Analogies, watch me Cock the Hammer you Stop and Stammer,
I Chop Cadavers with more blades contained than Helicopter Hangars,
Pinpoint position like Diagnostic Scanners identifying Chronic Cancer,
Catching motherfuckers out like Polygraphers,
Who’s the best at Dropping Chapters?
You? What an Idiotic Answer, What a Slander, you are Not a Factor,
Microscopic Stature - a speck of Cosmic Matter against Atomic Rapture,
Velociraptor Doppelganger you get your Oblongata Splattered,
Psychotic Battler with Bottled Anger, Top Commander,
Watch your Manners or get your Collar Fractured,
You’re gonna get this work – look at how the Jobless Gather,
I throw MCs aside like Tossing Wrappers, compared to me you’re just a Comic Actor…
Invincible with Lyricals, I’m a sick Criminal that drinks Chemicals,
Rip you in the Physical, flip Individuals like Reciprocals,
my knife sharper than the Visuals for high Definitional Digital…
My unpredictable Compositionals are impossible to Classify,
Rapid Rhyme Samurai, I break you down like tryna Factorize when Math Applied,
Half your Lines Antagonize the other half are Standard Lies…
Amplify the Voltage Effect, stick Bolts in your Neck that look like Frankenstein Awoke from the Dead,
No one’s Exempt, going toe to Toe with the Best? Opponents Fold in a Sec,
Showing Contempt, Focused with Threats, destroy everything like swarms of Locusts and Pests…

Nasty shit zygote. Welcome, good to see you here man

Ill verse, corner competition was fire, not a factor atomic rapture segment was nasty as hell. Jobless line slayed me. And the frankenstein shit was lolz/raw like to.

Ill way to open up this thread. Thanks fam

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Wow, that was dope!

Invincible with Lyricals, I’m a sick Criminal that drinks Chemicals,
Rip you in the Physical, flip Individuals like Reciprocals,
my knife sharper than the Visuals for high Definitional Digital…
My unpredictable Compositionals are impossible to Classify,
Rapid Rhyme Samurai, I break you down like tryna Factorize when Math Applied,

^^^Your whole piece was incredible, but these were probably my most favorite of the entire verse.

Fuuuck. Great first drop.

You’re gonna get this work – look at how the Jobless Gather,

^^^
I like that line a lot, but it felt forced. I be nit pickin though. .

Lexicon here brought out the feeling of brutality here perfectly.

Illy shit zy, velociraptor line made me smile where the teeth show.. Awesome:) way to lay it down.

Pinpoint position like Diagnostic Scanners identifying Chronic Cancer,
Catching motherfuckers out like Polygraphers,
Who’s the best at Dropping Chapters?
You? What an Idiotic Answer, What a Slander, you are Not a Factor,
Microscopic Stature - a speck of Cosmic Matter against Atomic Rapture,
Velociraptor Doppelganger you get your Oblongata Splattered,
Psychotic Battler with Bottled Anger, Top Commander,
Watch your Manners or get your Collar Fractured,
You’re gonna get this work – look at how the Jobless Gather,
I throw MCs aside like Tossing Wrappers, compared to me you’re just a Comic Actor…

^Best section.

Half your Lines Antagonize the other half are Standard Lies…
Amplify the Voltage Effect, stick Bolts in your Neck that look like Frankenstein Awoke from the Dead,
^GREAT scheme/flow.

You know what you're doing. On the same level as your other swag and flow or battle pieces. Just top notch technical ability.

Rapid Rhyme Samurai, I break you down like tryna Factorize when Math Applied,
Half your Lines Antagonize the other half are Standard Lies…
Amplify the Voltage Effect, stick Bolts in your Neck that look like Frankenstein Awoke from the Dead,

That flow was perfect for me... I would have said "when Matt's applied" and "are the standard lies" the it would have read perfect. Awesome stuff Zygote. I like how eclectic your metaphors are especially

Rapid Rhyme Samurai, I break you down like tryna Factorize when Math Applied,
Half your Lines Antagonize the other half are Standard Lies…
Amplify the Voltage Effect, stick Bolts in your Neck that look like Frankenstein Awoke from the Dead,

That flow was perfect for me... I would have said "when Matt's applied" and "are the standard lies" the it would have read perfect. Awesome stuff Zygote. I like how eclectic your metaphors are especially

super sick. the punches are straight killin em. very much enjoy these. ive read every single one ever. they are all dope. this had too many quotables so not even gonna try. awesome

Da god. Where ru zyg

It's really fun to rap this one. But Geno, newsflash it's not 2013 anymore.

Ik. Upped some old ahit just because i felt like it. Been diggin in the nc crates alot. Idk. Its nostalgic. Anyway. Ya. Wow @ 2013

This was a dope read, Zygote. Held good rapping stature, with good multi-syllabic rhymes and rhyme schemes. Most of the lines hold your attention, and it's good to a nice degree. Nice one with this drop, had a lot going for you. Nice. Keep writing!

way too much filler for a battle verse..

Frankenstein was the creator though...

My Battle Raps Mangle Cats like a swinging Battle Axe
You call that a verse? I call it chippin Bubble Wraps N ripping Double Chops
My pee dropping sounds like having a talk with Mommy Trouble Cops
The slyest Fox behind daddy's massive Stacks Frying Jacks
I congregate with possessed dolls eating poison mixed with Ivy Cracks
Watch the Fire Burn when the Sire Come
Giving you anything you want making you feel Right at Home,
Where the Titans Roam,
A Giant Gnome Confined in Foam trying to Inscribe a Poem
I strike you in the head with Lightning Bolts throwing bombs like a Fighting Drone
I'm a reptillian simian increasing degrees to a billion; Zygote Clone
Against me all type of Life is Prone, stabbing at Gideons On with a Knife or Bone
Andromeda Major Mentalist Berater, Blazing at a Hater
Be an Instigator End up Wrecked in Crater
with broken a Neck, Respirator, tazered Next to an Alien Ventilator
When the button's pressed to Make the Paper I take you up without a bet like an Elevator,
Sacred Humiliater, Forsaken Communicater above the rest like Training Decapitator
The Celtic Bro Sent, Krow Bent Medic who Owes Rent,
You couldn't Shake the Torment, I take everything you got in one Epic Moment

^^Are you Zygote?

Rap 1 Coming Soon
Before the end of June
I'll bury you in a Tomb, then have spirits haunt your Room
I'll crash your wedding if you're the Groom
You're Nothing but a Disgusting Ghoul
Now who acts the Fool?
All I Do is spit the Truth
Take-over the Booth, give your lady a Make-Over to boot!
Like big baby said I'm a White Devil
Worshippers Might Revel, unless they're unSettled
I'll get the pot!, you get the Tea Kettle
In my Dreams you Meddle
Doesn't Mean you win a Medal
You're softer than a flower Petal
Don't make me Sentimental,
I was Sent-to-End-you
All I Do is entertain you
Adverbs - I must Explain to you
These Wiccan spells are a Pain for you
I think you've been writing Insanely dude
Ever since This 1
If I Had to Pick one, I Grab the Stick- you run.
I'm just Having Fun, selling and trading one of my Many Guns, telling you lately i've been telling you the Ending Son.

You're far from a Wiccan
Brolly a disgusting Puerto Rican
Trynna square off with a legendary Heathen
Emcees end up Beaten, By a sudden beast, Eaten
Brains leaking down creaking, I'm Freaking
Channeling thoughts till you internally Weaken
Leave you verbally striken
With that not mentally Written
You're not a lion king with linen
You're just a special little Kitten
Not yet fitting, So I keep on power Lifting
Your ass like a cross without an hour Shifting
I'm prolific, into the mythic analytic linguistics
Striving for more than Prohibited Statistics
You guys be the Artistic, I'm trynna pass crack through the Biscuit
Making a dark Living on the side Scripting or Scribbling
God Dribbling made me a Sibling that's Unforgiving
It's in my nature to want to berate or train a Hater
Mister Decapitator, The actual account Fabricator
Hiding drugs in a Respirator, The local thug Annihilator driving a knife through the Savior
Greeting an Alien in a Crater thinking Elohim's Greater than Dearly Major
Confusing this for an Avenger
I'm the rage of October close to November
Making you see the bloody December
Watch a team thoroughly Dismember
An Air Bender, blazing to Ember
Measured in gale with a flaming Temper
Flowing aids and Leprosy Mentor
Striking your epi Center
I'm there right before the Memory Enter
Glowing Leper, corroding flesh exploding mesh Unworthy Letter
I'm hidden under YouTube beats writing before Duppy Sellers
I take pleasure and delight listening to these Helen Kellers
Their criticism is back like Early Settlers
You against me is like a chicken versingone of those 200 lb Modern Wrestlers,
Nothing Pelters, With more steal than Fuckin Welders,
But back to rap talk I'm a giant here to Devour
All I do is betray for Power
Gain then Shower agent not caring about Shady Honor
Slay a Coward trynna Play the Forward like a reigning Connor
Battle type amigo without a bard like David a Donor

Death for my alien haters. Especially traitors.
I'm ahead of you, no fingerprint detectable.
Emcees I find delectable.
Let zygote add the decimal.
I don't even need to put myself on a pedestal.
Lecture you, describe the types of death to you.
Inspecting you, make it seem that I'm a threat to you.
I'm TOO SHIFTY YOU better MOVE QUICKLY.
Responding sickly, granting whatever your wish be.
I know I'm acting pithy. I know you're coming with me-
to freestyle land. Shake and squeeze your hand.
Your rebuttal was fairly bland
&very sad.
Meanwhile, I'm a merry lad who will outrhyme you- very fast.
Cherish what we had. Another month I think our thread was fairly bad.
Take out an-add for you writing, call it free ghostwrites which were barely a fad.
Nary. A tad. You try to scare my like an overbearing Dad.
Won't work, you jerk.. I cannot be murked.
This isn't my first, it won't be the last.
I said-earlier that you're slow and I'm fast.
I'm the only one that passed
you on the Auto-bon highway, on Friday.
We're going to do things my way.
Your alien ventilator will be unplugged, that's what I say.
Choking the life of the host is likelay/
I'm already there. &you just might be.
I'm not the one in trouble, living trifely.
Just 'tryin ta find wifey, and get this dough for the life of me.
You're rebuttal only means you like me, but wanna fight me.
PSYCH,G. Aside from being unsightly, you can't write nicely
OR nightly. Bight me.
I kid. Describe the plight of me.
Grab a heavy stake for my heart and keep the light off me.
(This was Kind-of-clean)

[QUOTE=zygote;378]
I'm Exuberant, Wild
Making this look easy like taking sweets away from a Petulant Child
Not a pollutant, this mutant is Mild
Can't handle the weight of this crown, even Mafusa Tried
I leave you burnt like omens in ovens over looking where Medusa Died
In a black hole evaporating fast for walking straight into it not wondering Whose Inside
But yow thats exactly what happens when you collide with a Nuclear tide
Destroying Im in a nebula ride Leaving your Medula Fried
Me responding is annoying you call it a toying?
I call it a fact on, bi by bye Lucifer Tied
My spits leave a Dude Dried like Dabura Enshrined
I'm calm collecting peace by piece like Buddha Inclined
This verse emit So much hits you thought two of the best Shooters Combined
Well, a bitch working lowkey hooters Declined
I'm rural not mutually Signed off by team brutally Aligned
Millions of syllables stabbing your physical mind
Spooking your Behind
You're more boring than a commercial for books an hooks in Rewind
Than a dick between two crooks Intertwined
Ball disfigured by monsters off opposing the light
Corrupting a Sight
So it's time for you to meet something alone undone Morbid with Might
With no one to describe the Horrible Night
I'm an enforcer, off rite Sorcerer Flight,
the primal source of your Plight
Taught Kakarot how to be Remorseful in a Fight
The snake away, Ghostly heroic thoroughly revived,
What I cause in this postpone bozzo is Surely a Fright
Speak to evil cure to secure from the third
I'm an illegal bird allured only some people heard
The statement trynna reduce the Lord and the wrong use of angelically wielded Pluto Sword
I'm blasphemy arguably, a gruesome Word
Trynna actually 'manually Execute a Herd
Face it I'm too Absurd
With a legion of demons passing through my Gourd
Like em from the Gloom Adored
Leave you and a Roomy Floored
In the back of my choo choo Stored
Unto other news, I'm the one that denied your application caz in 1st place it was YOU that Bored
I'm not against you it was you that Roared
I'm not in plain view caz it was you that Soared
Greetings brother, Sincerely yours; Deadly Venom
The machete Felon steadily ripping ya Melon

Insidious. It's like I'm reading the Leviticus. Ridiculous.
You've got me at a loss for words.
Good thing I have lots of swords.
Stab precisely. You've had it too nicely.
Placing the blame on me. That's a shame on you.
You aren't ready for the roller-coaster. I'm known to boast and keep an open holster.
You're being a clone of who you're supposed ta.
Tell me to stop & it'll be over. Cold shoulder. You can find me up in North Dakota.
Smokin' dank in mid-October.
Hair-trigger reflexes help me stay superior physically.
Night vision goggles give me an advantage visually.
I could outrun a gazelle if you want some imagery.
Nearly perfect paragraphs with definite symmetry.
You address me lividly, &I'll respond vividly.
Leave you in misery; injured critically.
I'm relentless. I'll leave you defenseless then swing for the fences.
Clear all the benches. Grab lead pipes and wrenches.
I WAS quiet but now I cause riots.
I'm other-worldly, getting up early. To hand out beat downs.
They say mine hottest in the streets now.
Too tough to defeat now. Tell me, at least, how?
@zygote's nowhere to be found.
Same as you, when I dump the body.
I've done something naughty. Murder in the 1st-- an ugly option.

Some stupid Moderator deleted this rap like a bitch.

Netcees Moderators
 

A Moderator deleted this Rap like bitch

I'm nigger in deed smoking cigaweed, Ready to Bleed
Triggers a squeeze, The exact type of Emcee they Need
Don't act bigger kid please, I make your itch Decrease
You forcefully freeze When you speak to the Beast
That's when I remorsefully Feast, So Thank your kicker Atleast,
Or get wet in set, half beaten to death and then eaten like Yeast
You chinks get slaughtered for crossing the Wall
No one leaves alive when I'm bossing a Stal
Crack your knees with a bat or Mall for standing Tall
Not a big bid son; I'm all those that don't make the cit Caz they're too Small
I'm wired to Angelical seraphims that shouldn't accept your new Call
I make brimstone from the blue Fall
Smoke you up in Two Draws till you find your Shoe Balls
Damn homie .....noticed how I do Talk Cheap
I'm so romantic I make your mom Weep
So commanding making your dad Sweep
Open to the world making a fag Leak a Crack Black Sheep
I'm racist, making a cracker Jack
Ya secret con, want a Smack
Omni Don tata Rack
With a mutated tataduende in a Lock
Mock a Flock, loose time like someone that forgot a Clock
Wanting the grandkids to rot instead of chopping to Jock
Got you wanting more like dropping a piece by Doc in a Dock
I'm a Python, Malevolent bye fun. so my run? feel free to Bite On
Snapping your spine in segments after embezzling for those Investing
Those wanting to read something unique and Interesting
So keep that posting Caz like illuminated contact in this I keep Infesting
Mentally Affecting with a smile no one is wrongly Detecting
Glue the Bar that I'm Wrecking, Start a Checking

Be sure to tell them Mr voodoo not hoodoo did it
Caz you were irrelevant in it this Pillage by inches
I'm the type to not quickly give up and keep Stressin
We kill those spitefully Addressing, We not Caressing
I'm the site's manager Arresting any writer not Expressing
That thought they thought wouldn't be Impressing those Etchin
And didn't Caz of those that would need heavy explanation Messing
Up the entire equation without Mentioning, I'm reckonings
Severing the Mentoring not Decoding the Lettering,
Of an old criminal Festering
Beheading those not Relating Upon Awakening
I take my chisel in tthi carving lirics in your Physics
Mystic Hieroglyphics, for these Dipshit Analytics
Confusing those artistic with arsenic and Pandemic Misfits
I leave a big bill on ya pocket selected Tickets
Too Scientific, shaking misdirected Crickets

Careful I'll Get Gully you're just a Big Bully I'll embarrass you Fully
Jeez! You're posting Frees on other peoples Works
That's why they think you're a Jerk who went Berserk
With your girl I'll Flirt; you can pretend it doesn't Hurt
Slow down and make sense of a rhyme you can show me what you're Worth
I'll Bury you under Earth you'll be Carried away by Worms
If there were Rankings I'd be First giving you Spankings to be Sure
We can Settle this Now
You Allegedly Frown while I destroy your whole Town
Stick pins in your Head&Body and disrupt your Seven Chakras
You claim you're a beast, but all you spew is Senseless Nonsense
You'll be chasing me forever if you Enter the Contest
Cuz I take part in Several Conquests, which End your Bombast
Boom. hear the Bomb Blast I'm bigger than Comcast
So pick a Weapon from the Armory and Attempt to do Harm-to-me
I'll counterattack Artfully, and maim you Partially
This is what happens when you Start-with-me
Others view you Farcically
ME?-I made a wooden cross with Carpentry 2repel your devilish Heart-from-me
Yes, I slay the Beast when I bring the Heat
This must be the 100th time at Least
I'm in your Dreams you sweat with terror, under your Sheets
By all Means post something innocuous &we can have Peace
Or just disappear again &It will all Cease
I'm world-wide like an Infectious Disease; rapping this verse will Set you Free
So reply with a secret that you've Kept from Me

I'm a traitor, an epic failure
But you Pharaoh, You Act like your the major
When all you are is a lousy hater
So audience once again watch me slash this guy with razors
And leave m right in craters
You forget your own
I swing to rip a piece of your dome
Scratching so much you'll be needing a comb
All you hear is beep then a bomb
Goes off exploding you all around the compound
Caz you're nothing like nothing having nothing bound
I knock your ass in the first round
St.rike without making a sound
Polite just eating a pound
Of your organs sliced and diced
I treat you guys like mice
Feed a whole country with beans and rice
So take this advise homie
Pass the torch slowly
And don't go down with me
El O He one minute team
Shooting strait like a beam
I take you to your dream
Bringing you back like a ray gleam
Everything I say mean, I'm way too lean
Half Chinese needing Mescaline
High off caffeine
Moving like a teen
I'm a mutated gene
Appearing weird on scene
Everything I says obscene
I rain on your cantine to stop you from choking
Like a daughter convulsing Im here to slaughter a dolphin
Hi endorphins, I stabbing you with more pins
You worry about who has more wins
I'm here with old kings
Not into your belongs within other things
Your cute like a birdie that Sings
I'm a puppeteer controlling ya strings
While you spend a whole hour trynna convince
I come in like a sushi chef ready to mince
I'm a prince not in your section
That one that needs not to win this election
Caz I've been your connection
If you were here? No detection
We get away with a loot. No objection or clarification
I'm pale and undergoing physical discoloration
While you die in Proclamation
Infront of a young Explosive nation

^jesodist Verses reading like sinacog weaning off of baphomet jizzum

^What happens you write something so good people trying to outdo each other with shit no one reads. Where you at @zygote?

jesodist stop

Facts


ZyGOAT

Aw come on u know my last 2 joints in this thread r fire.

ban Jesodist

someone deleted my last post here.

The kraken of Lightning
I'm here to address you for al that Whackness your Insighting
You're a gazelle frightened while I'm Igniting
Better know you're fighting with a Titan
My punches collide fracturing this Giant
Bloody guts be splashing like a Hydrant
This vampire sucks and I'm hunting like a Lycan
I'm A fusion between a demon and Poseidon
Slaughtering your dick tip with a Trident
In A bubble oozing wisdom is where I'm Skillfully Confined In Beautifully Binding,
Unfortunately for this Dufus Replying
This beating is one they will be Brutally Rewinding
He writes a couple of rhymes and he think it's Flying
When indeed he is deep in a pit and Frying,
If he better than me? it's a conspiracy they Lieing!
Not abiding
Just a Sad Pig in a Blonde Wig
Unimportant Sig Not a Mad Bid
Striving artist behind a Sad Gig
Push you from a Large Rig
And watch fish gubble the Hot Shit bloated erupting under a Splat Rib,
That's It I'm an Avalanche Amidst
You're a small leak on a Cracked Bib
Struggling to run like a Fat Chick
Epic Evil inject you with pandemic Infected Needle,
My team is illegal trying to Make Authentic People, aided by shaulin monks beyond any Es centric Steeple,
I'm a creature that came in a Meteor,
My race is Superior,
Take me to your Leader you pathetic Imbreeder,
I'm lethal as Drinking a whole Liter of arsenic fuel
As divine as immortal God's in a celtic Duel
I get colder than a Cryogenic Room or a rusty Machete to ya Womb,
Pose where you loom I'll quickly send you to a Tomb,
Spinning like Typhoons Killing your Platoons
Shielding in Monsoon,
They won't distinguish if it's a beast Feasting on Racoons
You're as primitive as a fetus Living in ***coons,