Fracture I gave you some feedback on your Open Mic
 

http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=149737

I appreciate all the thoughts you have to dedicate something to me, I'd normally say I am flattered. But in this case it fuckin sucked so I responded with how you should be able to write.

You can thank me later

I won't be held accountable for your actions after you read your eulogy. Maybe you can make YouTube video about it so no one can watch it

I mean honestly man not a single punchline connected. LGI Trolling, just gassing you up.

Punches are structured way different now. Might have to switch some stuff up a little bro. Most of, if not all, honestly would have to double check, your punches are way too much of a statement punch. And unless it's a super Haymaker the voters don't go for it and it's too simple. Has to have complex schemes to complete with the best here.

Lars didn't do much better. And I am no top tier expert but I can tell you that verse would get zero votes in a battle here. I'd like to see if you can develop a new style, structure better, etc. Good luck

I have no idea who you are man

Nor do I care for whether anything connected lmao, I've seen the lvls here and your gassing yourselfes, I am not looking for constructive feedback on something wrote up literally off the top of my head in 20 mins.

So unless you're referring to yourself and this a baron or Lars alias trying to be smart plz just stfu

Nah, he’s def right.

I won that exchange too. 2-0

Bobby D trash

this the guy claiming Prowlers?

What you're agreeing that you suck?

2 and 0

Yes you keep typing out the shape of your body and head together it's great way to abbreiviate

Thumbs up for you baron

lmao Bobby went off at the end.. on a complete nonsensical tangent

hot garbage

I would trash your existence if I ever I saw such a deadbeat persona

Lmao how many aliases do you have baron?

absolutely god awful response by Bobby D

lol @ claiming he wrote in 20 mins

Now we know how you won all your battles, by copying cane and creating aliases


Lmao you're the worst

Man I haven't read a text verse since 2007

But bobby definitely won

Baron 6 alises over 6 years ?


You're literally the saddest of all men ive come across on a message board

I'm literally dying in laughter

lmao they were just throwaways i had from the night before tbh

i won’t use them elsewhere so just dropped them for you anyway

Just baron talking to himself lgi I wouldn't even sweat it

Lol just realized everyone in here is Lars

Lmao Is this behaviour normal for him or have I finally made him crack!? Lmao

Hard to say. Every time I try to find out who someone is it ends up being Lars, though.

LMAO

netcees is 3 active guys


The rest just baron aliases, he probably giving himself feedback on his own verses and replying to his own threads on a distant internet board far away

I'm starting to think I'm larz to


I'm off to write a poem about the tragedy of not using proper grammar

Hold on

Incredible is larz?

Lmao yes it couldn't be anymore obvious how he just logged in and out of those accounts made all those posts in 10 15 mins

I mean it doesn't take long to figure out only stupid dickhead would write something as pretentious as that.

He even tried to make it look legit giving himself feedback lmao

I'm laughing most at that he's so stupid his first 2 lines actually diss himself...and he's still too dumb to realise he had a great concept and used it against himself lmao

Then says it's throw away ....no kidding lmao

I thought Incredible lived in Tampa or some shit

Imagine the ultimate shock when zook realizes booby d is lars too

roflzzzzz

no wonder you waved the white flag wanting me to leave you be

Baron wishes he could have a day in my shoes

He'd probably drown though

Glad you enjoyed your demise

Good night baron enjoy chatting to yourself

This a weird convo

I'm completely lost

Bro are you kidding me? I only gave my opinion because you said

"so I responded with how you should be able to write"

And you are way off by a huge margin for how you should write. I literally just gave my thoughts on it.

But figures another textcee who gets offended when you say something bad about their verses.

Barc is that you?


P.S. everyone on this website knows that I'm not Lars.

I know you dudes are like kinda old riends but this is is mad gay... its alrough thoiugh

My writings are masterpieces

Ungrateful fuck

its pivotal...
i'll drop bobby... d DIGITAL!.... RZAAA ORIGNAL

AHH CHECK THAT OUT

yeah i'm pretty sure i'm fine/ crazy some peple talking ish to me but those pei-le really know... but yeah middle of nowhere michigan...

I just laid all out fire on this drip and you're talking to yourself ouch

keep goin... some tyson type shit


got now i'll match you

http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=142606

what really? here's you talking to yourself in the mag acting as if you're best friend with Lars, and there is Lars asking as Diablo his alias, which he's made known in this thread then asking to tag himself in it as Lars as he was the one being interviewed. LMAO wtf?

So either lars is constantly using aliases to build his credibility

Or you two are actually best of friends in which case the same still applies stfu

Inc isn’t lars… he’s posted videos of himself.

Booby definitely making me respeck upn way more than I did before