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El Muffin 10-05-2020 07:31 PM

Key style at Corleone ( Corleone diss)
 
I’m bored @Corleone

Paco would be upset


Everytime you post you got someone else’s dick in ya throat
I guess it’s all fun & games till the meds wear off & you realize your entire existence a joke
Said he got kicked outta wutang xD & I can quote that
The art of Shadowboxing . Yea Your room hosts “ Celebrity Deathmatch “ every time you smoke crack
Halloween got you saddened .. saw Scream again & the message was glum
“ I used to be a Ghostface Killah :( “ nah nigga ur dead grandmother used to dress you as one
Naming niggas who don’t fw you . What you doing is wild
Yu ‘Swore you’d Take a Bullet for Genocide’.- But then he left you hanging like the Nuremberg trials
Selling knock off shit .. Mannn We just can’t escape the insanity
I tried to put myself in your Shoes-. Until I saw a pic of those mfs & lost faith in humanity
Stop faise flagging the wu , it’s unscrupulous, tragic
bruhh the Closest youve gotten to a Method, Man is stealing rza production style & butchering it , faggot
When I pop off with the A & R . That’s assault rifle . You blonde puss
When you pop off with the A & R. It’s cause yu know of a nigga who knows a nigga who knows Garth Brooks
Saw a moderator critiquing His work . Notably - this fuckers music
We all heard a SKIIIPPP come outta @Sharp . Motherfucker that shit was awful & it’s Undisputed
Your grandfather should be ashamed. He wouldn’t weather denial
So It’s only right you have Paco’s genes. - My nigga , your shit was NEVER in style
“ he went to Sing Sing & he did life “
But His Kids trife. Copped a charge then went to Sing .. Sing. Meaning this nigga snitched TWICE
you a legit weirdo .. I’m sensing a trend ..I hate it here
Your face is weird . not only are you corny - but you look like a fkn corn pop with facial hair (Deadass)
I bet your closet houses immeasurable skeletons
For you to cap on the net - trying everyday To make your irrelevance RELEVANT
All that fake banging - you need to pivot in fashion
I always knew there were bloods in L.A - butttttt I DIDNT know about the ones in Lyrikal AssasinZZZ
“ represented himself in court “ yet you couldn’t even equate to Ted Bundy
Said he had to study his case . That shit is fake LMAO . you a Fucking Case Study
Niggas been put out the Addy but the man is demented
Wishing he could turn back time . Apparently you did uhmmm cause those hands were rescinded
Hush called his gam gam a whore . Left his mind distorted
Coreleone was like “ you shouldn’t have said that “ huffed & puffed then wrote 60 lines of garbage
That magazine shit you tslked? Leave it dead in a box
Instead of a rolling stone interview ask your dad why he clearly dropped your head on a rock
Bro that forum you run is desolate . Buttt I’m open to help
It’s just a shame in every thread I gotta see the Tapatalk Tyrant playing tic tac toe with himself
Resume cloudy trust me bro your rhymes are shit
You could say you were a trash compactor & your credentials would be :” defragged my hard drive in 96”
Nigga swear he has a following . My guy - there’s like noooooo way
SoundCloud straight up Tecmo bowl . Nigga that shit only had like 4 plays
Honestly your corny & we want the story to end
You’re Netcees ‘Laughing Stock’ - so no wonder you don’t have an Audience of “Friends “



Psychopath . Fuck you From the bottom of my heart you the cringiest nigga ever

Stop explaining your punches mid verse like they don’t require a 3 year olds intellect to process you trash ass clown

Goddamn how y’all put up with this dude fr lmaoo

Aero 10-05-2020 07:46 PM

LOL 'ed at faith in humanity

El Muffin 10-05-2020 07:51 PM

Haha thx

May add more . Pics are the only thing that intrigue me but this dude corny n ion like him
Edit: I added more

Lots more lmso

El Muffin 10-05-2020 09:32 PM

@White Earl

El Muffin 10-05-2020 10:12 PM

Lmao hop in this body bag I’m still playing with concepts

Geno 10-06-2020 02:56 AM

Yoooo lmmfaooooo.

This is too fucking great thank you hahahaha. Needed this. Lost faith in humanity fucking destroyed me. Have to read more still lmmfao

corleone 10-06-2020 12:01 PM

I just got at Hush.. a few other cats.. ispaz, and I have a battle in the NBL tonight with sharp.. I'll key a verse to your crap ass battle verse today and lyrically rip you to pieces.. you got alotta mouth, by the way, but I guess thats common for retarded guys like you..

El Muffin 10-06-2020 12:22 PM

Child please

Do what you must .. but I could give you a month to beat this verse & Id guarantee you couldn’t meet the task

I’m not saying that because it’s overly dope either . I’m saying that because your ceiling is much lower than you might expect & I’m putting it nicely

P.S ya granma suck dick from the back

Bomb Bard 10-06-2020 12:34 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by El Muffin (Post 788066)
P.S ya granma suck dick from the back


LMFAO

El Muffin 10-06-2020 12:39 PM

Genuinely don’t like this guy

His existence annoys me . his Fkn sig got a goddamn breakdown/ explanation of a wack ass line in it UGHHHH then he has the Fucking nerve to be like

...


-Cor

Die slow you fucking walking cringefest

corleone 10-06-2020 02:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by El Muffin (Post 788072)
Genuinely don’t like this guy

His existence annoys me . his Fkn sig got a goddamn breakdown/ explanation of a wack ass line in it UGHHHH then he has the Fucking nerve to be like

...


-Cor

Die slow you fucking walking cringefest

thats called you being jealous of me, you faggott.. I just key'd a verse in my battle, towards sharp.. all it takes is 10 minutes for me to type up a verse and get at you son.. that verse you typed up was WEAK as FUCK.. str8 scrodumsack.. when I get the time, I'll respond to this..

El Muffin 10-06-2020 04:49 PM

Your delusion is kicking in

I’m jealous Of no man .. I congratulate success. You on the other hand are a fraud .. it’s only right you get called out on it

BOOM 10-06-2020 05:30 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Corleone (Post 788082)
thats called you being jealous of me, you faggott.. I just key'd a verse in my battle, towards sharp.. all it takes is 10 minutes for me to type up a verse and get at you son.. that verse you typed up was WEAK as FUCK.. str8 scrodumsack.. when I get the time, I'll respond to this..

> it only takes me 10 mins

>> I’ll get at this when I have time

?????

he can’t even keep up with his own lies anymore

Sharp 10-06-2020 11:04 PM

Tecmo Bowl is ether. as someone with a soundcloud account I feel bad for cor after that

Liked how some of this felt like it would work live, fun read all around. bars are smooth, maybe not meticulously formatted haymakers like Resin in a champ match but it all reads smooth and for a long verse, that means a hell of a lot.

fun read

Exis 10-07-2020 12:01 AM

Lol...Why El even fuck with this homo tho? Nigga dug her own grave by sayin' she a Wu affiliate...Dude on the internet beggin' for props.

Cock Rules Everythin' Around Meat...Swallow deep yo, Holla ...Holla swallow deep balls.

El Muffin 10-07-2020 07:30 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Exis (Post 788129)
Lol...Why El even fuck with this homo tho? Nigga dug her own grave by sayin' she a Wu affiliate...Dude on the internet beggin' for props.

Cock Rules Everythin' Around Meat...Swallow deep yo, Holla ...Holla swallow deep balls.

I don’t fw him . I just took the opportunity to see if I still got it

Tbh .. as I’ve gotten older I’m noticing I’m trailing away from the more traditional way of doing things

Swhy I like pics .. All that wordplay bs n generics becomes boring as hell . You can literally use those on anyone

Every bar in this verse is direct n personalized . Not a fan of the stuff in ppls notepads anymore. I just wanted to talk to this nigga

Hush 10-08-2020 09:14 AM

Nice

Exis 10-09-2020 09:07 PM

Dope diss tho...just curious to why you messin' with such a low tier faggot was all man.

El Muffin 10-10-2020 05:25 AM

Just wanted to test the waters n see how I’ve developed after so long

Thx tho man

Dope girl 10-11-2020 02:25 PM

You came out with the heat
You be killing em

corleone 10-12-2020 09:42 AM

quick keystyle..

whoever said you can rhyme and gassed you up to be the attraction you are?,
whoever did it, must of said, joking.. "this catfish'll go far"//
he must of thought to himself.. "I found a guy, who shouldn't be rapping at all",
"it's only a matter of time, before this faggots' a star"//(.. lol)
lets cut to the chase and talk about your losing streak,
first Curse, now me.. it's funny, how us two would meet//
is it a coincidence? or an respect issue, to where us two would beef?,
I say, judging from my experience.. you were always just mere food to eat//
this fools' a thief.. far from a writer, he's never actually written,
he's a biter.. you could tell by the grooves in his teeth and cavity fill-ins// (.. lol, grooves/music)
son said, my existence a joke.. he must be trippin' off coke,
hiy as a mahfucka.. thinkin' he both//
what? you stop taking your meds, your doctor prescribed?,
tryna to pass the bucket down on me cause it's killing your pride?// (.. lol)
always subliminal, with syllables I create in my rhymes,
super lyrical.. my words implicate in your mind//
this dudes miserable, and hatin cause I'm takin' his shine,
he must be, .. breakin' inside, chasin' his hiy//
talking about walking in my shoes?.. is something you could never do,
everything about me, compared to you is unmeasurable//
you couldn't fathom the man it takes to be me entirely,
if I were to ever take a bullet for a nigga, it's honorably//
so if your referring to my comment that I stated at geno,
I was just figuratively speaking, on behalf of my peoples// (.. get it right)
so let's talk about the nuremberg trials..
as you failed to mention, your nazi regime and your used up style// (.. lol)
and for the record, I was really down with WU..
clown on who? nigga, your still a fan.. we can count that, too//
from countless albums and records, like "triumph" to "36 chambers",
all downloaded and saved right unto your playlist// (.. lol, groupie)
groupie nigga.. I couldn't help myself to say this,
but y'all.. el's gotta "Wu-Tang Clan" tat next to his anus// (.. lolol)
and as for biting RZAs' style.. c'mon, let's be serious..
I'd never do such a thing, my style alone's that brilliant//
and was always in style, you doper than thou?,
that could never be.. like mixing recipes to hold over chow//
like edgar allen poe, writing notably foul,
or moses from the bible, gettin' tossed in the nile,
its not going down.. you'll never win this battle with me,
fuck a cash prize, get thrashed and mangled for free//
.. you've always been broke.. since when you ever made some legitimate cash?,
I know your reply to that, involves a dick in your ass// (.. lmfao)
so if infact, we discussed that, prior to this,
why'd you asked me to keep it a secret, on some look out shit?//
son tried to play me like he wasn't embarrassed,
about a few months back on NC.. when he was exposed as a faggott// (.. lol)
I noticed his indirect comments and the role he established,
that contradicted his very goals and entrepreneurial-status//
so if I were to pull your card, and expose you were gay,
could you honestly tell me, you'd have more shit to possibly say?//
.. I'll toggle my aim, with each shot that I spray,
turn your brains to spaghetti, I'll squeeze the semi, and confetti your face//
if you offend me, I'm suttin' deadly, if you out of your place,
come and test me, my dudes avenge me, if I'm gone anyways!// (.. philly!)
your in a "lose, lose" situation.. you can't kill what you can't kill, nor defeat an obsolete creation//

corleone 10-12-2020 10:26 AM

lol.. @elmuffin is the el corn pop of NC.. ^^^ uppin on this corny ass nigga..

Bomb Bard 10-12-2020 12:48 PM

whoever said you can rhyme and gassed you up to be the attraction you are?,
whoever did it, must of said, joking.. "this catfish'll go far"//





Lmfao you are trash

corleone 10-12-2020 05:08 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bomb Bard (Post 788803)
whoever said you can rhyme and gassed you up to be the attraction you are?,
whoever did it, must of said, joking.. "this catfish'll go far"//





Lmfao you are trash

lmfao.. surrreee.. your next tho bud.

Bomb Bard 10-12-2020 05:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Corleone (Post 788824)
lmfao.. surrreee.. your next tho bud.

You bailed on the league when I called you out pussy

corleone 10-12-2020 05:42 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bomb Bard (Post 788828)
You bailed on the league when I called you out pussy

I didnt like the direction the NBL was headed in, when I initially signed up, their were no speculations or anything keepin me from doing what I essentially do, as in battling and etc.. I personally believe that I won that battle between myself and sharp.. and you mean to tell me, I coudnt get one vote on NC? lol smh.. I kinda knew that would happen, judging from my past experiences battling in the NBL but I figured since I called it to the light in the past and I sorta paid my dues in dealing with the bullshit, I'd get a good panel worth of judges.. but it didnt work out like that and I wasnt really trying to spend time on any more verses knowing the crowd.. also, son tried to make a spectacle out of me, like that magazine shit and etc he put out and I lost interest fast.. lol I thought that the whole mag thing was corny as hell, and what was even cornier were the graphics used for display.. their just was no almo for me and its not that I was embarrassed or anything, but it was more like.. ahh this shit is wack and gettin out of hand, the whole dead grandmother ish, and etc.. I mean shit, we're all grown adults here and somethings you just dont say.. I came to battle, and that is that.. and in my opinion, if its anything lesser than that, it aint really worth me gettin into because its not in my agenda to do so.. and I buss my gun, so go figure, lol.. not only that, he tried to introduce me to the league like the fucking target or something and portrayed myself to be some lying, corny ass emcee or somethin.. lol I said.. hol up.. this nigga think shit sweet or suttin, and I definitely wasnt having that.. so I dipped but set the thread if you wanna battle, either way, ima drop a verse on you soon pussy nigga..

UPN Zuch 10-12-2020 06:01 PM

You didn’t get a vote because each person that read both verses thought Sharp one. That’s how that works.

Bomb Bard 10-12-2020 06:14 PM

I’m not reading your stupid ass long post. Pussy

El Muffin 10-12-2020 07:39 PM

Lmao dude thought he killed that shit

N stop stealing my insults . You walking white cheddar Cheeto puff looking ass nigga

El Muffin 10-12-2020 07:40 PM

N what the hell are you talking about

Exposing me months back

Lmao I don’t know you n I just came back

Fucking crackhead hallucinating again.

Mf got odb in his ear telling him to embarrass himself

El Muffin 10-12-2020 07:46 PM

Also your syllable miracle lyriCal shit is ineffective as it comes

You big time trash buddy . Where are the punchlines

Hush 10-12-2020 07:47 PM

Lmaooooo this shit was cold bro



Ima break it down when I’m on my cpu


I’m gone

El Muffin 10-12-2020 07:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Hush (Post 788851)
Lmaooooo this shit was cold bro



Ima break it down when I’m on my cpu


I’m gone

Good looks

Wasn’t really trying as hard to string concepts

Was more or less talking to him but good looks

El Muffin 10-12-2020 07:51 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Corleone (Post 788830)
I didnt like the direction the NBL was headed in, when I initially signed up, their were no speculations or anything keepin me from doing what I essentially do, as in battling and etc.. I personally believe that I won that battle between myself and sharp.. and you mean to tell me, I coudnt get one vote on NC? lol smh.. I kinda knew that would happen, judging from my past experiences battling in the NBL but I figured since I called it to the light in the past and I sorta paid my dues in dealing with the bullshit, I'd get a good panel worth of judges.. but it didnt work out like that and I wasnt really trying to spend time on any more verses knowing the crowd.. also, son tried to make a spectacle out of me, like that magazine shit and etc he put out and I lost interest fast.. lol I thought that the whole mag thing was corny as hell, and what was even cornier were the graphics used for display.. their just was no almo for me and its not that I was embarrassed or anything, but it was more like.. ahh this shit is wack and gettin out of hand, the whole dead grandmother ish, and etc.. I mean shit, we're all grown adults here and somethings you just dont say.. I came to battle, and that is that.. and in my opinion, if its anything lesser than that, it aint really worth me gettin into because its not in my agenda to do so.. and I buss my gun, so go figure, lol.. not only that, he tried to introduce me to the league like the fucking target or something and portrayed myself to be some lying, corny ass emcee or somethin.. lol I said.. hol up.. this nigga think shit sweet or suttin, and I definitely wasnt having that.. so I dipped but set the thread if you wanna battle, either way, ima drop a verse on you soon pussy nigga..

You are a lying , corny mc though so it’s warranted

& as far as there being things one shouldn’t say

I suggest you reinforce your spine cause it’s heartless out here

I knew you was soft when you told hush “ he shouldn’t of said that “ you sound like a stage 1 school shooter n that’s on babies nigga

corleone 10-12-2020 07:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by El Muffin (Post 788852)
Good looks

Wasn’t really trying as hard to string concepts

Was more or less talking to him but good looks


I think @Hush might of been referring to my verse, hence.. he had already commented on your verse, prior. Sorry to burst your bubble, muffin, lol. Thanks to @Hush too, for the commentary, greatly appreciated, especially in a room full of elephants, where talent isnt appreciated.

corleone 10-12-2020 07:57 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by El Muffin (Post 788853)
You are a lying , corny mc though so it’s warranted

& as far as there being things one shouldn’t say

I suggest you reinforce your spine cause it’s heartless out here

I knew you was soft when you told hush “ he shouldn’t of said that “ you sound like a stage 1 school shooter n that’s on babies nigga

I literally have no idea what you are talking about.

El Muffin 10-12-2020 07:57 PM

I want to take the opportunity to laugh @ the “ Triumph” “ 36 chambers “ bit indicating that he had a hand in the making of those songs too . I’m so sick of it dude. It’s getting ridiculous

beyond laughable

El Muffin 10-12-2020 08:04 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Corleone (Post 788854)
I think @Hush might of been referring to my verse, hence.. he had already commented on your verse, prior. Sorry to burst your bubble, muffin, lol. Thanks to @Hush too, for the commentary, greatly appreciated, especially in a room full of elephants, where talent isnt appreciated.

I’m so weak xD

Wait for it

El Muffin 10-12-2020 08:07 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Corleone (Post 788854)
I think @Hush might of been referring to my verse, hence.. he had already commented on your verse, prior. Sorry to burst your bubble, muffin, lol. Thanks to @Hush too, for the commentary, greatly appreciated, especially in a room full of elephants, where talent isnt appreciated.

Your talent isn’t appreciated because you are ass . It’s rather simple

No one knows who you are . No one fucks with you . Your music trash n has no following like wtf is it hard to understand?

The thing is ? Is that’s all ok .. you have a hobby . But-declaring yourself jay z nephew ( or whatever the fick ) and a member of wutang / slum village / interview for front page of rolling stone ( LMFAO)and all this other bullshit .. bro you can’t prove anything you tout about yourself .. & that’s where the dilemma arises. It would be different if any of it were true .. but nah.. it’s just clown shit 24/7 coming out of you . That’s why I don’t fw you . Pretty sure that’s why you are not fucked with. Period .

corleone 10-12-2020 08:17 PM

God damn, you dont know how to take an ass whipping. Dude, I think we're all passed your lies about me and have moved on already. Theirs about a few million people who can both vouch for me or atleast have seen me around, to give myself the benefit of the doubt in trusting that everything in which I say is true. Thats good enough for me. Bye.


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