Us.
 

Ashen faced, passion placed on ration
acid taste, acetate, basket case Assassins
Hand grenades are blasting
Master race in action
Castigate compassion
Relax, embrace abandon
We have this under control
Succumb to the 'whole'
As we plunder your soul
We mine in your spirit
Divine interference
Smile if you fear it
Divisive
In spite of appearance
Your mind has the signs of a clearance
Everything Must Go
Sedentary...crushed slow
This melody, love's glow
Stand in the dark...feel infinity's rush
Put your hand on your heart
And give it to us.

smooth. very nice multis. you still got it Witty

^I concur

This was refined

I’ve been enjoying your recent drops. It’s a cool style.

"Your mind has the signs of a clearance
Everything Must Go"

this wassssss smooooth especially after the nonstop multis bfore. well played, Fox.

This was very wet my friend

Yeah enjoyed this very nice man good drop...

:/

You can do better. This was ok witty, love you

Ope. Nice work witty old boy. Do it more

Dang I aspire to be like this lol

Gotta love how I structure shit the same way yet get hated on...

???

Anyhoo, this was tight...kept shit short & sweet.

Content was nice man, had this real suck me into shit vibe with it...I liked it.

Stay you Wit.

Up.

^^What he said...

Huh

I was reading some old verses and came across 'acid base acetate' in zygote's alpha beta. Not a big deal, you either saw it and it was planted subconsciously in your mind, or it's a coincidence.

Decent but I've read better from you Witty.
More focused on rhyming instead of saying anything cohesive.

You know me if you’ve seen how I write— sometimes I get so caught up on rhymes and it takes me away. I been gettin back into it recently. Like they said, I’ve seen you write better shit but that doesn’t make this bad by any means. The beginning was my favorite cuz you not only had multis, but you threw some imagery and more description in the opening lines moreso than the end. But I always enjoy reading your shit

WOah! this was sick fams. yes i say fam now, and finna. for fun. in real life.
i like this big time breh.
reminded me of wise ways, he post anymore?
crazy how you said so much with so little words, impressive
nice to see you can still rhyme, this was dope

This was one of the best verses ever posted here. I know it's self praise but I would say exactly the same regardless who wrote it.

I am not often happy with my previous work, I usually cringe. Imo this is a masterpiece and I don't believe many people here could have done this.

Unfortunately the shit I'm currently writing could be bettered by a toddler headbutting a keyboard.

Your self praise is warranted here. Coming from the land where law of Jante is king I still find you to be proud of this work in order.

"Castigate compassion" was great, the switch up in flow surprisingly sudden but not unwanted. Closure simple and poignant while maintaining a complex flow without seeming cluttered or excessive. Content and the heart of this piece as a whole is dope af, too

10/10, will read again. Left inspired

Thanks my friend.

For me, this is the best thing I've ever written. Apologies if I came across as arrogant. I'm just very proud of it.

Fluid

This was a treat to read. Loved the descriptive tone throughout, the „we mine in your spirit“ was really unique and a highlight to me. Great rhymes. What else is there to say + Mr Fox.

Thank you @Alice

I hope you're well.

Up because fuck off that's why.

What. I love the way it rolls off the tongue. Super lit.