Track review: "Every Day" by Infinity Tha rellik
 

https://soundcloud.com/isaac-meyer-3/every-day

Hello, @Infinity Tha rellik. Let’s start with presentation. Who do you think your audience is? That little pubic patch covering your triple chin doesn’t make you look good. You should consider removing your image from your rap to get a more fair shake from strangers on Soundcloud.

Song comes up. First thing, you don’t know how to mix your vocals. But I get it; you’re doing this on the cheap. That’s why the beat is so simple and also needs to be mixed. The first sign of a total amateur is that tinny sound that dominates these drums.

Then you start rapping. First, let’s look at the lyrics:

“I’m a motherfucking beast on the microphone.
You could all run and hide and then die alone.
Think the Lord’s showing favor, you might be wrong.
I can get you anywhere, even inside your home.”

Honestly, I thought this was a bad hook until you kept going. It’s so simplistic that it made me think you were starting with your garbage hook, something that could be repeated, rather than an actual verse attempting to brag. First, you know how you had to speed up awkwardly at the end of the last line? That’s because you needed to balance your syllables. That wasn’t Ludacris dropping a quick double-time. That was “Oh, shit, this line is two syllables too long for the beat” as though you never realized it in the 85 times you practiced this shit in the mirror before grabbing your iPhone headset to record it. A more glaring point where this happen is when you say “That’s why rap is easy and I’m deadly as cancer.” Along with that line not making any sense, it actually would have flowed properly if you had changed it to “rap’s easy” instead of “rap is easy.” They mean the same thing.

As far as your delivery, it improves as the track goes. You sound like a feeble little bitch to start, like you’re sweating at community college rec center open mic night having never performed before. But you start to figure out how to be a little confident, which is unjustified because the lyrics and flow continue to be bad.

For a song with the attempted quasi-hook of “I do it for the city every day,” you really don’t seem to be putting on for your city at all. Young Jeezy did a song with a similar theme. His song not only was 931 times better than yours, but it also embodied Atlanta rap. That’s his city. He showed us, rather than just telling us.

But the biggest thing here is all this bravado. To use Jeezy as an example again, his delivery really makes you believe him. He swaggers. Even when your delivery perks up, you sound like you might be able to pass if your lyrics were smart. Instead, it’s a lot of very nonspecific tough talk that is neither clever nor original in any way. No one believes you. Actually, I take that back. Someone believes you. You said it yourself, though:

“If it’s just me, then it makes it even sadder.”

Nessys respects the sacrifice you made in enduring this.

Not going to listen but I cannot say I enjoyed the lyrics you quoted much at all. I respect your critical opinion and thus cosign the review sight unseen.

Stay hustling relic.

We're all going to make it someday.

Solid analysis. Going to fuck off for a little awhile. Need a breather.

RIP.

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Solid work

repped for the public service

Lol..I can't be mad. Someone actually listened. Thanks for the peep.

I'd actually like to know what you thought about Number One also.

I've heard much worse and still haven't quit.
Plus, I know you're not gonna listen and formulate your own opinion.

read certains review. I believe him. shocker fin wack. move along people nothing to see here./

Really solid thread here certain

figured Id humor myself and listen....


the hook was kind of goofy for me, the mic work sounds real computer spit verses.
the hats throughout the song feel very soulless & so does the belief in your voice.
then that random mumble of more money made me laugh because...what?!?!
it reminds me of the locals around here that make these real hype tracks to a bass that should smoothed over.
maybe if you didnt spit your verses so fast I could see the appeal in what you created.
crafted a different intro do something different in acapella and let the beat ride in.
not sure how long you been doing this but its much better than what Ive had the opportunity of listening to with such...Im not sure what word Id use here...Im thinking amateurish but above that a few notches.
anyway you should change your name to Oscar, Isaac...
you got the drive bwoi





even if it is standard...ba dum tss

Might give a listen tomorrow.... Either way keep creatingand doing you @Infinity Tha rellik don't worry about what others say just keep doing you bro.....I've done a couple audios and peeps wasn't feeling it but ya can't let others stop ya vision just keep reaching for the top you will find someone or something that moves you

Please tell me this man did not ask me to listen to a second track of his.

never underestimate his ignorance and lack of civility

You took the time to listen to one. I didn't sit here and get all in my feelings and tell you "you don't know what you're talking about" and I respected your opinion, did I not?

But if I've got 2 new songs, it kind of irked me I didn't get an opinion on the second when I thought that was actually a superior song.

Just sayin tho...

And appreciate the other feedback from Mr. J.

Think it's hilarious that just because of y'all's opinion of me, 13 posts and only 2 people checked it.

I thought y'all were hip hop heads?

Let me first ask you if you think you are a better rapper than Kendrick Lamar.

Honestly, when you asked me this question originally I didn't know how to reply. If I came off too braggadocios then I knew I was gonna get shitted on. But I also didn't feel like I could totally dismiss the question either. I actually thought about it a lot.

Realistically, I can't say I am because I don't make any money off this shit.

But Kendrick doesn't make his own beats. So am I a better producer than him? Absolutely. As a dual threat, I'd say there's no one in my city fucking with me.

I got a couple homies that I'm working on a project with that are better MC's than me lyrically. But when it comes to polish, I've just been doing this for too long not to be.

I recorded this shit in less than an hour and mixed it even quicker. This is what happens when I'm without a mic for a while.

"The Eulogy"
https://soundcloud.com/isaac-meyer-3/the-eulogy

You hate on this song, you hate Hip Hop. You hate me? You will never expect me to come like this.

Best beat I've ever made, best all around song I've ever written and it's the realest shit I've ever spoke on record. This is my 9th Symphony. This is my instant classic. This shit got my head so big right now it doesn't even matter what anyone says anymore because it's all right here.

There's literally NOTHING you can say about this shit that's bad. And if you do, I know you're lying. I'm THAT confident in this song. You don't even know what's about to happen.

3 minutes, 36 seconds isn't that long to take out of your day. You don't even listen and say some stupid shit just makes you a ultimate faggot.

I am the best MC on this board. I'm the best MC/Producer in my city. And if this gets out there's no one on God's green Earth that can deny what I felt when I wrote this.

^beat is decent. I could tweak it in a few places to make it pop more....but it's pretty dope. You just aren't a good rapper though. And your pen game is real lazy...even with the style your going for. Which is a style I mostly listen to.

I appreciate the look Poet. I know you're never gonna like my rapping so I just take it when you say I made a good beat. LOL

its a good beat, it just sounds basic for what it is. I'd put some sort of breakdown/intro/outro with a LP or HP filter with the exact same sounds/sample you used and do a change up with the bass at somepoint and bring is some sort of pad synth and your straight hahaha. But for real....it's a good beat. Good shit.

i think its cool man the drums are kinda wack and the overall sound is a little generic but if you had 1 verse and then the other 2 were more interesting rappers i think people would listen to it, spice the hook up a little

i fuck with it, hooks dope, i dig the beat. your best track for sure. good shit fin

improvement of any craft is two-fold. First, you have to not suck. Second, you have to be good. These are distinct things. This track doesn't suck, but it's not good. With some production polish and cleaner audio, I could see it as a filler track on a mixtape.

I'm sure it's your best track so far, but that's an empty accomplishment. I just watched a documentary where a young Eminem was convinced he couldn't record anything better than Infinite. Obviously, that's stupid. Did Eminem improve as an MC after Infinite? A little, but mostly he improved as an artist because he realized his style. You haven't realized yours.

I appreciate all the listens. It means a lot.

Eminem didnt record anything better than infinite. Although rock bottom was pretty dope and probably could be seen as better. Post infinite was the commercialised clown around em that dre created. It was always in him, he had humorous bars, but so did plenty of people. But word

Finny your biggest hurdle is your ego. Thats literally the reason you get hate and people not as good as you dont. Even posting that track i understand all the feelings you go through, when i make something worth posting its basically the greatest shit in the world at the time, unless i mention yea this is some quick rough shit or something. But ill try and keep my ego under wraps because people who post on the internet are miserable in general and if they see someone feeling themselves its the extra incentive for them to pick it apart know what im saying. If you post undeniable heat you wont have to sell it as undeniable heat. Itll stand on its own. But word good shit man, and look at this post as a positive since its critiquing how you post, not what you post. Keep banging out

I hear you bro, all I was saying is that anything negative I wasn't gonna pay no attention. And I'm pretty surprised there really wasn't even anything that terrible said. LOL

But yeah, I got some other shit coming too just gotta get it recorded.

You should pay more attention to the negatives than the positives, that's how you get better. Positive comments are nice but ultimately worthless.

lol

The funny thing about music is that's it's art. It's open to criticism for sure, but if it's used primarily for expression then there's really nothing you can say negative about it.

THEN MAYBE DON'T POST IT ASKING FOR PEOPLE'S OPINIONS IDK GUY

Art still has a technical aspect which can be measured and critiqued. There's always room to improve, no matter how good you are.

for fuck's sake

*clap emojis*

what are you recording with?

I'm just using a shitty stage mic right now. Once I get the whole album hammered out as far as what I want to do, I'm gonna go to a real studio and re-record it.

At least, that's the plan.

Fucking sucks

You'll never realize your style cus you don't have one faggot

Oh well then.. I guess diode and the random dollar sign infested guy with a gun gif as an avatar didn't like it. I'm going to go blow my brains out now.

It's been almost 20 years and I've heard every bad thing imaginable about me and my music.

At some point people just need to realize my "style" is what it is.

Don't like it? That's fine. I'm still going to keep doing it because I enjoy it.

Thx tho.

Didn't even listen to it bc I know your "style" thx girl

Take 3 1/2 minutes out of your day to at least give credence to your bashing.

"Wow, this guy is the worst rapper ever, he sucks. But I don't know for sure because I was too chicken shit to even listen."

Lol what a loser. Dude so scared he might actually like a song of mine he can't even listen and give an honest opinion.

I'd rather be a hated and despised individual for wanting to be creative and take a plunge than sit there and boo from the sideline. Wait... Not even the guys who go to the game to boo are as bad as you. They at least went to the game.