anyone interested in reading/critiquing an essay I wrote?
 

I'd really like to get as many perspectives on it as possible. It's decently long - 3400 words - so, if you are so kind as to read it, I don't expect lengthy feedback or anything, just tell me what you liked/didn't like and why.

I know I've been shitty about leaving feed for a lot of you, so I will gladly give you in-depth feedback for any piece you link me to before you get back to me about my piece. THAT'S MY WORD.

@Certain @Dancake @Vulgar @bane baby @Zen @Pent uP @Diode @zygote @dead man @uh-oh @NYCSPITZ @Eŋg @Witty @anyone and everyone else who might be interested. thanks

Sure

Sure

Sent to both of you, much appreciated.

No!

Ok, I shall read ASAP :D

<3

i got u

sure

email it to me, i can have a look.

ill give it a shot if you still want feed

just know any critiques will be "feel" related seeing as i dropped out after failing the 9th grade twice.

Sent to all of you, thanks again everyone.

Send it bruv.

I will.
pharaohsarmy52@yahoo.com

What's it about?

Dogs and humans. This is a much different/much more developed version of what I sent you a number of weeks ago.

Then yes.

I'm in

Sent

pm it

Pm to me.

sent to everyone in here so far, thanks again for all of your time and effort to read and respond. don't forget to link me to something, either in here on PM, and I'll give some feedback pronto.

@Certain @Dancake @dead man @Eŋg any chance you guys took a gander at it?

I'm gonna be home soon and I'll reply then, I have been reading little bits now and then, almost finished and have enjoyed it very much so far.

whats the subject matter?

sure id like to read it. you dont have to leave a bunch of fucking feed on shit -just swing through and listen to some of me and phils work i have posted in discussion from time to time and maybe just add that youve listened in a reply. that would be awesome -the more listens the better.

i havnt looked at other responses here so maybe i missed the link.. but otherwise ..
link me or PM me your work