eh, im just not in the mood

@Split Eight to me a lot of ur stuff is kind d of abstract (out of that I've read, bc that's all I can speak toward) and abstract writing allows for more open interpretation

but I'm generalizing and speaking from opinion on only what I've came across
So I may be wrong

but I feel there is nothing wrong with abstract writing, but the writer needs to b aware that people may take things differently then intended bc of its nature

@zygote I knew nothing about the dogon either before I got the topic but I'm happy I received it. I did 3 hours of research over the span of a few days to get a feel for their culture and it was fascinating. Many of them have been converted to the Islam and tbe remaining followers have declared the religion would most likely be extinct by the end of the century.

Dunno whatcha saw but my flow was clean to me

I votw according to my preference.

I honestly dont give a, ,shit about anyones opinion on here...except when im
Given constructive criticism of my writing.


I have never actually read another person vote...merely look over them.

I think thats the probelm. ..people are so afraid of others judgement that they conform
To a guideline of what is voted on. Id like to think my votes are unique to me.

That's how it shoulf be?

^^thank you

I eventually read everyones' votes. I like to see how they dissect a work. I had to do it so much in AP Lit that now I can't not do it

I agree youre a good/ insightful voter, FAT

but people are so hooked on not conforming/ dickriding/ sheep voting that they spend way too much time policing it, which in a twist of irony makes them succumb to it

as in I dont think anyone here is "scared of judgement" or just regurgitates votes... but they DEFINITELY let ideas/ emotions/ opinions affect their votes in very noticeable ways

ways that are especailly easy to notice when u read everyones votes every week lol

Word man I agree...

Story I dont agree with ypu sir. I see nothing wrong with cakes voting.


We should come up a guideline to voting.
Something every one can agree on.


A compliment sandwich.

Start of with a positive of the verse....counter with some thing bad.

Then adhere to that bad and try to advice with ways to improve that bad.

Then you can input your personal opinion.

I think something like this is necessary.

Fuck that. Explain your vote. Nothing more should be necessary.

Sometimes that takes one paragraph and 100 words. Other times that takes 20 paragraphs and 1,200 words.

I had a lot joking nonsense, to be fair. It was a good battle, though. Deserved an in-depth break down.

I never said cakes voting was horrid or none in any sort of other voters I am just simply thankin you

Cake doesn't vote on my battles anymore </3

Damn, you're dropping some crazy fucking votes tho, props

that sarcasm is very subtle my friend.

lol people are bitching about my voting?

this can't be real life.

I read a verse write my critique

read next verse write crique

sometimes I do a compare n contrast sometimes not it depends if needee

vote

then peep other votes to see how my thoughts relate to others on what I got out of it

that's all

Lol

pancakebrahs votes and breakdowns of verses are amazing. props cake. you are a huge asset to this league for many reasons, but most of all because of the essays you write about each persons verse.

^^ that's truth right there

I usually try and give quite a bit of feed but this ain't my week. Its Fiesta's aka party week for my entire town. Let's all take a moment and make a quick prayer that I stay out of jail.

Thanks friends

Also I feel like nobody is voting yo. Are we enforcing this shit @Mike Wrecka ??

Adonis where u stay at

n jail ain't a fiesta
but I can tell u how to make some hooch if needed

I will vote

Just downloaded Acid Rap.

Rejuvenates my faith in rap, so far. OutKast+Bob Marley+Super Mario+ASAP Rocky+Lyrics.

Someone post a link for acid rap

piratebay.org?

i just torrent off that tbh.

Are they a rap group or is it one dude doing some shit? I mean step up your boarding game and educate me

Ain't it like jungle kinda? @Split Eight

10day is great as well

Love Chance's syncopated style

Something I always aim for over str8 multis

In Santa Barbara cali.

Most beautiful town in the world no jokes.

But I know how to make hooch fool. I got a brother I met a few times whose spent over half his life in prison now. Hate that mother fucker but we made it once. Too much sugar but it was good. We made it with Oranges in a bag for like 6 days I think

Yea but u need bread too fyi

sugar bread fruit n bag n time

n I unno I'm from south Fla we might rival u as to aesthetics
but we don't have whole town parties that'd b dope tho
(west Palm Beach tbe)

@Adonis

@Witty

talk to me cat, what happened ?

See, to me he's Lil Wayne plus Eminem plus Drake plus Beastie Boys.

I see the Eminem thing. Lil Wayne nah, maybe Schoolboy Q. Drake and Beastie Boys are worth investigating.

Elzhi+ Tame One+ Earl Sweatshirt+ MF Doom - Mac Miller

Earl Sweatshirt is a good one. I don't see MF Doom at all, though.

I don't see Tame One, either.

The town is a very old one, actually was Mexico back in the day. But Fiesta's been around for centrury's every year we party. They close down blocks and have massive beer gardens and bomb ass food gardens and play music (mostly live) and just have dancers a plenty

There's also a fairly big College here in town too, well there is place Called IV or Isla Vista where all the dorms and all the kids live. That tiny town during Halloween has something crazy like 100,000 people show up in like 2 square mile radius. You can Youtube that shit but basically just drunk fuckers yelling YAAAAAAAAAAAA or WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

We go hard, zall I'm sayin G

That's dope tho