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Bags, they don't like direct questions. That's why dis thread is sitting untouched for eleven hours...
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there was no self glory in that...he asked why i drop my name after i say sumthin...that adressd him personally..and tha first bar was at bags...
Allen...man i swear i jus had checked your battles..them shyts was straight dirt all yall shyt is basic...shyt like "this battle was over before it started didnt wanna do it, becuz your retarded" - AOB but tha lines woulda been stretched all tha way across tha page and shyt lol yall tha only niggas i know that can drop all stretched bars and still not say shyt...once i read through yo shyt allen i didnt even need to see anymore... but like i said...its a preference..and im not gone even knock yall...stay up Sass |
Flo Matic, you rap like you Hold Ratchets
jus an Act wit tha Cold Tactics, but you Lackin tha Whole Package Okay. 'You rap like you Hold Ratchets'? First off, good looks on capitalizing your multies. They're that much easier to find this way. How does someone rap when he raps like he holds ratchets? Does he hold the ratchets awkwardly and thus you diss him by saying he raps awkwardly? Does his rap sound like a ratchet? Are people that hold ratchets dumb and thus, his rap is dumb? Please enlighten me. Also, you forgot to capitalize the 'rap'. It's part of your multi. By saying 'jus an Act wit tha Cold Tactics', are you trying to hit him with that? As in, insulting him? Because cold tactics seems to be some O.G. shit. Which would be more of a compliment. Or are you trying to infer that he justs acts as if he was an O.G. instead of saying he is an act with cold tactics? Also, the plural of the noun doesn't usually need a 'the', much less a 'tha'. Well, I think you're trying to say he just acts like he's wit tha cold tactics, but then why do you follow it with 'but'? So you WERE complimenting him with it. 'But' he does lack the whole package. If he lacks the whole package, that means he has nothing. But you just said he IS an act wit tha cold tactics? Hmm. i Mold Havoc, boutta turn me back to my Old Habbits you write Fiction, you want Friction, at best you'd get Slow Static You 'Mold Havoc'. Damn, that's clever: You say you're 'creating destruction' -- great oxymoron right there. Good shit. And it's even capitalized, so I knew it was a multi from the start. And the punchline is good too. I mean, it has inners (Fiction/Friction rhyme perfectly too!). And the friction/static metaphor really ties the whole thing together. Props. see, i dont "Expo" lines, i jus Expose Lines to stretch those spines, you drivin into a Text Road Mine So you expose lines to stretch spines? Okay. And all the while your opponent is merely driving into a text road mine? Damn. What is he doing in there? Digging for texts AND roads? Must be a tough job. Also, the 'drivin' connects with the 'road' part wonderfully. I can downright see your opponent digging up roads in his old road mine and then using those same roads to drive home on them. Nice. i set heads on fire, not like Exoduzt when he dropped tha "Burnin Man" im talkin bout tha flash backs Mike Jackson got every time he sipped a Pepsi Can If only this hadn't been old when Royce did it two years ago. :( so what now? you gone jump in this thread and Check Me? dont you think we know you a undercover agent for LetsBeef? I think you mean gon'. As in, the shortened version of 'gonna'. 'Gone' is a totally different word, my friend. As for the punch...Uhm. No. fuck it, Lets Beef, better yet..Lets Meet cuz if i ever seen you in person it would be Less Meat It's 'saw' not 'seen' there. But I suppose you know that. Good move, trying to solidify your street credit with this nonchalant disregard for tenses. So if you meet your opponent, there would be less meat? Why? Are you trying to steal his meat? Take away his hamburgers and leave him with nothing but salad? That IS cruel, but I'm lost on why you chose to make that the focal point of your punchline. look, im not one of these Coward Guys, got pull cuz im Down to Ride battlin my homie was tha only time you thought of Pushin Hom Aside ho·mi·cide noun \ˈhä-mə-ˌsīd, ˈhō-\ down adverb \ˈdau̇n\ ä or ō au̇ Somehow, I don't think that rhymes. readin your verse, i caint even count how many Times i Sighed cuz i never got High, no matter how many Lines i Tried Yeah... We've already told you that this is not quite a novelty of a line. so take ya rhymes off of tha market, you gettin No Sales once i come through swangin these hammers, im like a Folk Tale Oh, I get it. Because Folk Tales are swangin hammers... Wait... They don't! Huh? What are you trying to say then? I'm puzzled. every thing i touch is molten, i got Lava Spits Flo Matic is all Technology, he got Java Scripts Everything you touch is molten? So it's already molten prior to you touching it? Otherwise, you would've said 'everything I touch melts', surely. So you're touching molten things. And what you spit is lava. So you touch your spits? Aight. And the only scripts your opponent has are Java Scripts? Damn. He hasn't even got a single verse? Because all of his lines are merely lines of code? What a nerd... I didn't really want to look at your last two lines, as I got bored... Sorry. :( |
@Sn00p we should hold a LA crossover tutoring tournament tbh
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shyt shoulda happened last week, you retarded thinkin you would Surpass Me you'd get X'ed to become a notch in my belt, ask Y, i told em i had to Ad-Z OHH THAT WASSS DOPE SON AN U BOLDED THE X Y N Z played as fuck lollll |
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As for the insult/punch discussion, how does ending a punchline with an insult make that punchline not be a punch anymore? By that logic, ending a punchline with 'bitch' would mean you're solely insulting your opponent without a punch. I do agree that insults only are whack, but no one here uses insults without punches?
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Sass.
Sn00p would body u w/out even trying tho.. & u come at me w/ that bullshit? lol We can write over here mane.. take ur preschool bullshit elsewhere. |
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fuck it, Lets Beef, better yet..Lets Meet
cuz if i ever seen you in person it would be Less Meat lmaooooo oh God....stop it, I can't breathe, I can't breathe....stop it. |
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tho i am serious ion wanting "expos" on these inquires, min and sn00ps pls, i feel they r just in questioning the meanings/motives behind sum of these outlandish lines |
Oh and there's nothing left to say.
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@Stritka I was just about to change the shit under my name to say I'm the one who knocks lol.
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Tell me that shit ain't fucking dope tho. But word lol.. Walt da fucking GOD. |
lmao sass is ass sn00p would rape that dude, i peeped his verses last night dude has no idea wtf he talking bout
11 page tho? shit it was only like 2 when i left rofl |
Walt's the shit lol.
But I wish these guys would tutor me because they're so ill and dope yo but sadly I'm a just a white boy living in my mom's basement eating left over microwaved meatloaf and I know you gangstas don't play that. ZenLand |
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I think big game is just another gangsta homo thug character made up by V in the same mold of tonio. He's basically tonios caucasian nemesis..
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I think Big Game is Obey
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I literally forgot about Obey til you just said that lol.
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The guy on the far left of that picture in dudes video looks like a guy who runs the drive thru at my local Burger King. I think it's him.
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i'm white and i'd embarrass you on the page.. and obliterate you in a real life battle. suck it up chump.
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ginger Irish faggot.. Sass spits bars, most you ever did is get some pussy achievements for topicals on a bunch of sites that all disappeared |
rofl yeah sass isnt good man
his rhymes is ass and just cuz he lays em to a beat doesnt make em any better step your bars up |
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don't act like you've done shit either g0d.. you ain't even been fire since 04 |
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the fuck does that mean? rofl that shit makes no sense |
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and i dont really brag bout writing cuz id rather just write. but i will say id kill anyone on that site in a battle. and id be willing to prove that. so thats all that really matters. cuz if ur not good ur just not good and shouldnt run around saying how good u are when ur clearly not
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aight i hate explainin bars..but if tha lil white kids dont understand then ok..one time only
Flo Matic, you rap like you Hold Ratchets jus an Act wit tha Cold Tactics, but you Lackin tha Whole Package ofcourse when i said ratchets i meant guns...but yall dont know that cuz of your prep skkol backgrounds..and if i say hes jus an ACT wit his tactics..then tell em he's lacking...im sayin he's not even keep up wit his fake persona..but once again..yall weak as fuck so yall aint get it i Mold Havoc, boutta turn me back to my Old Habbits you write Fiction, you want Friction, at best you'd get Slow Static now if i can cause havoc and or create havac...Molding is another way to create sumthin..once again..ima need yall to catch up..as for Friction and slow static..friction is a form of static right? to create friction sumthin has to come together quickly..and in tha hood if we say "you dont want static wit me" we sayin you dont want these problems..so by sayin you want friction, at bet you'd get slow static is sayin your not even worth my time..cuz to create friction it has to be quick...but yall dont get that cuz yall way too basic see, i dont "Expo" lines, i jus Expose Lines to stretch those spines, you drivin into a Text Road Mine i said i expose lines to stretch those spines...what so you actually believe that im goin to literally stretch a persons spine? thats what we call metaphores...and a road mine...what you rather have said land mine?...seriously yall reachin i set heads on fire, not like Exoduzt when he dropped tha "Burnin Man" im talkin bout tha flash backs Mike Jackson got every time he sipped a Pepsi Can i dont listen to royce...so you sayin you can get metaphores when royce says em but you dont get em when they in front of your face lol so what now? you gone jump in this thread and Check Me? dont you think we know you a undercover agent for LetsBeef? this was a personally and a set up for tha nxet bar...he came to tha site sayin he came over from lets beef fuck it, Lets Beef, better yet..Lets Meet cuz if i ever seen you in person it would be Less Meat so when i said it would be less meat...so really im bouta steal his meat? thats what yall got from that? man if im talkin bout beef and i see you in person it wont be any meat cuz ima whoop yo ass...another metaphore but yall dont have those here look, im not one of these Coward Guys, got pull cuz im Down to Ride battlin my homie was tha only time you thought of Pushin Hom Aside he battled my homie homicide...that bar explains itself...yall are ass readin your verse, i caint even count how many Times i Sighed cuz i never got High, no matter how many Lines i Tried if you think its played then its played..coo so take ya rhymes off of tha market, you gettin No Sales once i come through swangin these hammers, im like a Folk Tale on this one i really fucked up...tha story of john henry was a Tall Tale...i aint realize it tell it was already posted..was kinda hope'n ppl didnt catch it every thing i touch is molten, i got Lava Spits Flo Matic is all Technology, he got Java Scripts this nigga siad he finds his rhymes in a rhyme dictionary...so this was a personal that i was makin a punch out of truth be told, i aint thinkin of him Shootin me Down im sittin here like, "fuck! i guess he boutta Google me Now!" once again...that was tha type of shyt this nigga was on when he came to tha site...so i hit em wit it and everybody knows i dont even Drop OM's i'd rather dig up an old Chain verse and Quote Him Chain is one of my homies...and me sayin that...tather than drop this open id would rather read his shyt my bad it took so long to answer yall questions...but i was doin shyt.. but yall basic raps are jus yall preference...yall spit basic shyt.. |
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