Wat about similes? Cuz they don't like you
see wat I did there? Did ya catch it?

Sometimes 'simple' rhyme schemes are more effective than 'complex' multiple rhymes. Consider some writing to address themes of depression or nostalgia etc. In this situation perhaps move away from multi-rhymes especially ones that are close to each other and back-to-back because the nature of it would detract from the themes to develop. Worse still is when there is awkward wording because of a forced multiple rhyme. Why write something in an overly convoluted way just to meet some minimum requirement of multiple rhyming, when sometimes a simple and concise language with 1 or 2 syllable rhyme is more fitting?

Exactly man, I'm sure there have been a number of votes that may not have changed but atleast been fed better if everything was picked up on. Yes its the writers job to make it understandable but its the readers job to comprehend. Shakespeare didn't dumb shit down so ppl understood better which is why he wasn't as universally known then but is now thought of as one of the greats.

Completely agree, I hate it when dialogue has a shit ton of multies cuz nobody actually believes that is the actual conversation lol

The best writers get their points across clearly and cleanly while not ignoring complexity of content or rhyme.

I actually tend to speak in constant multis, honest, all night long, whether lackin sleep or not tired at all

Ya but if readers never pick Up on tour stuff,, change yvour shit to ogetest contestants vores

"If I'm in the closet then you are below me
Cuz you take the b-a-t outta basement homie"

I must be completely missing your rhyme scheme

Cause it isn't a scheme, its a way of life, didn't really mean for it to be taken in stride

Darn

^

Yes but not all readers are of the same cloth. There isn't a verse in the world every person that reads it will comprehend every word

Sure, but there are verses in which everyone literate enough to be in this league can understand the content relatively clearly.

i shudda quoted. damn.

i like beer.

I like boobs

i see what you did there lol.

The syllables don't match up, though.

Neither do your sisters hips..anymore
Ooooo

I don't have a sister.

geeeetttteeeemmmmmm!!!!!

....anymore

Lol I not gonna say your mom tho that's just rude

My mom is 62. She is 5-8, 185 pounds.

Judging from that blurry picture of your wife, you can do better.

Stop being rational it takes the funny outta it lol

I talked about my boy's mom once. He called his mom and put me on the phone with her and he told me to say what I'd just said to him.

I never said a yo' momma joke again.


That rational shit owns. fuck you Cert. lol.

Yeah the counter joke of "my moms dead" is actually true for me. I bricked a dude in high-school cuz he thought I was joking when I told em not ta say shit bout my moms cuz she had cancer. It shut him the fuck up real quick lol

Btw avy check @Certain

i'm sorry about your Mom YDK. freal. there's no easy way around that kind of pain.

anyway, you look good in a dress.
but i kinda, mentally, pictured you as a C, or a D.
can i get yo numba?

@dead man

Defend your title champion

Thanks man I appreciate that forreal
an lmao that my fiancée aka baby mama, she gotta c cup tho if that wat your referring too lol

oh damn. a baby popped outta that? she's a keeper. wish i had a kid tho, sometimes. i feel like a damn fool watching sesame street, taking shots of whiskey, by my damn self.
SIX Dos Equis! Ah Ah Ah!

@Frank, you know the rules. The extension is granted upon request.

Actually 2 babies lol but I feel you man I was low as fuck when my mom passed then my dad dipped an got on heroin an crack fuckin wit strippers an Shit an bout ta lose the house. Me an Jess got us a place wit her 4year old son....my son I kinda adopted, an found out Jess was pregnant. Now my daughter's 6 weeks old an I swear she got the same twinkle in her eye my moms did lol trust me bruh. No matter how low ya get there always a way back up, sometimes it takes a few years alot of drugs a few deaths an a newborn ta give new meaning, but somehow it all evens out

No I decided to deny it if you dont mind, im strapped for time.

You're an interesting guy.

Wats this...another way Frank tryin to get a win without winning?
Wat a surprise smfh

nah man. that's a reason to conquer. keep elevating bruh.

Swear Frank gonna have 6 wins in a row without droppin a verse an be wondering why he ain't gotta champ match lmao wat a waste of time, in a league to compete but not competing

Fuck yeah man, my mom knew I was workin on a book an ended up having it published a month after she died. Def a big moment lol

thaaats wasup. glad to hear that though. link? i'm interested, an avid reader. if not, title? available on amazon? jw.