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UnbornBuddha 10-28-2015 03:35 PM

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Originally Posted by The Law (Post 545890)
Big deal he went some lines over. It's no different than stretching deadline dates so people can post their verses. Just have him delete a few lines, or just run with the battle.

There is that rule for a reason if it isn't going to be enforced why even have the rule? Also, if you knew Frank you would know that if you or I did the same thing or posted after the time, an extension essentially, he would call you on it. treat others as you will like to be treated because others will remember it. In fact, before the match he basically told me will not allow any extension for me. So, I will also not allow him to go over the line and word limit. And deleting and modifying your verse is not allowed at this point.

2tripple0 10-28-2015 03:47 PM

lol point game set match

The Law 10-28-2015 04:37 PM

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Originally Posted by Godcomplex (Post 545900)
There is that rule for a reason if it isn't going to be enforced why even have the rule? Also, if you knew Frank you would know that if you or I did the same thing or posted after the time, an extension essentially, he would call you on it. treat others as you will like to be treated because others will remember it. In fact, before the match he basically told me will not allow any extension for me. So, I will also not allow him to go over the line and word limit. And deleting and modifying your verse is not allowed at this point.

I gotcha, I understand where your coming from then. But in most cases I'd just let it slide. It'd be the same for due dates tbh which would fuck a lot of people if their wasn't such a leniency on it. Maybe it's just me but it's whatever, extra lines or due dates don't mean anything if you bring the better verse.

Nigma 10-28-2015 07:34 PM

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Originally Posted by The Law (Post 545913)
I gotcha, I understand where your coming from then. But in most cases I'd just let it slide. It'd be the same for due dates tbh which would fuck a lot of people if their wasn't such a leniency on it. Maybe it's just me but it's whatever, extra lines or due dates don't mean anything if you bring the better verse.

just wait till you get to know frank lol

a couple weeks ago he went over the line limit and nothing happened. the following week his opponent went over the line limit and he tried to have him dq'd.

i actually thought he was gonna kill himself after the last L he took tho, guess we should all just be happy hes still around. if you take him with a grain of salt hes pretty entertaining

Adonis 10-28-2015 08:13 PM

battles closed in T-minus 4 hours

Adonis 10-28-2015 08:22 PM

I counted 710 lines which is 60 over 650 maximum line limit

Buddha rightfully had the choice to request DQ and thus is granted the victory

EtH 10-28-2015 08:29 PM

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Originally Posted by Nigma (Post 545954)
just wait till you get to know frank lol

a couple weeks ago he went over the line limit and nothing happened. the following week his opponent went over the line limit and he tried to have him dq'd.

i actually thought he was gonna kill himself after the last L he took tho, guess we should all just be happy hes still around. if you take him with a grain of salt hes pretty entertaining

With the amount of salt you need to deal with Frank you're gonna end up with cardiac arrest.

To be fair I was only fucking with him on the line limit since he sharked me.

Nigma 10-28-2015 09:01 PM

i have lines written @Witty hope to see you on the battlefield

asylum 10-29-2015 12:09 AM

@Spoken thanks bruh. I really wanted to write for nothing this week.
You really came through man. thanks so much.

sral 10-29-2015 06:53 AM

Jesus fucking Christ, can't you guys just write a verse, within the line limits, and post it on time?

This shouldn't really be difficult.

You've done it for years.

I'm a grown man, married, with a full time job.

I help mod to help you guys out and give you a place to write competitively. I'm not a babysitter here to resolve your petty differences and attempts to get sneak wins over one another. That's childish shit. We shouldn't have to be making judgements like that week in and week out. You make this a bigger deal than it ever needs be.

Chill the fuck out with that shit.

Frank 10-29-2015 11:01 AM

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Originally Posted by Frank
RULES ARE 48 LINES OR 650 WORDS


Quote:

Originally Posted by Frank
Emily groaned, as her Mother shook the thermometer, the silver mercury, jellington froze1
She inspects the cold thermometer with perplex, in woe - When it explodes, metallic splatter freckles her nose2
The Upstairs Bedroom Flickers from the sidewalk looking up... light bulb embers aglow3
Mother looks out the window distraught, in discrepancies shadows
As a Priest walks up behind her offering sentimental console,4
Emily moaned, tied to the bed post - daintily, scarred wrists red in the rope.5
Feminine mope that fluctuates between whimpering and viciously screaming from the deepest depths of her throat6
Shrieking in a octave, swelling the node. Its voice isn't human - Demented in tone, the sound registers unknown in my temples lobe7
Bassy without treble: It spoke in espanol, ancient: ancestral menacing, troll-like tremblingly low.8
Demonic. The mother vomited on the Priests Shoes - Putridly, she bellowed on his soles.9
Decrepitly gross. All the while, Emily still is in the fight of her life for the possession of her soul.10
The Priest had seen enough, He cleaned off his heavenly robe as Emily rose from the bed with suspense in her toes.11
She dropped back to the bed and contorted her anorexic figure into a pretzeling pose.12
Her Mother, A devoted Catholic woman slapped Emily ferociously in attempt for her to get a hold13
Of herself. But she was back handed back with a supreme power that sent her reeling backwards, almost out of the window that never was closed14
Emily’s eyes are Blacker than the Cat that steps on the coal, in the living room by the fireplace: its eyes orientally doe.15
The Cat Jumps up on the bed purring, & Emily begins petting it slow16
The Priest considers unlocking the metal bolts, but he's hesitant though, understandably so: she isn't Well17
"Emily'' Mother says with a wretched tone: "Let it go!" - Emily is simply petting the cat without any bad intentions18
"Let it go!" The Priest looks at the mother absurdly - As if she is the one who needs an Exorcism19
Emily Jokes "Uno es demasiado duro en Emily" twisting its neck around - her eyes rebelliously roll20
The Lights Flicker On The Top Floor Window, The neighbors begin to exit their homes21
Emily groans, wrestling her own demons in the depth of her bones,
she ferally foams at the mouth yellowish throw-22
up - like basement mold residue, it simmers like boiling hot water when the kettle gets froze.23
"Never fret" The Priest gets on the phone - A maniac in shackles in the background: Emily Rose24
The phone rings in his ear consecutively...
"Hello"25
It is Saint Francis, The priest had to call his good friend, Especial - The Pope26
Emily Rose speaks disrespectfully: urinating, excrementing her clothes27
Emily Rose heckles the Pope - sticking her tongue out violently venomously so28
Green skin speckled like a leper, it spoke29
"Mother, Who Are All These people?" She says in English no longer in Espanol.30
Mother runs over as Emily begins talking pig Latin in a deadly medley provoked31
The Pope throws Holy Water at It, splashing the blessing32
Emily’s soaked, Its mannerisms become gentle, her shoulders no longer depressing and sloped33
Emily drones out looking around for her sanity, as a satanic force re-enters its host34
Tearing out her hair, dreadfully, Emily Yells wilder than A kennel that’s closed35
The Prayer group opens the bible - to quote chapter 7, verse 11: it goes36
'So if you who are evil know how to...' Emily rose off the bed again,
then fell like a stone37
mother looked on neglectfully - without a shred of hope.38
Emily Rose had been diagnosed with Schizophrenia, they were told she was mentally slow:39
Her temper would grow until she became torrentially uncontrollable and detrimental to folks40
But Mother was a monster; she resented Emily for reasons consequentially unknown41
- Stirring Cyanide into her Alphabet soup.. settling to the bottom of the end of the bowl42
The Pope notices the mother looking Rejected; Instrumental to the whole thing - it hides the medicine in its coat.43
Revenge in its motives, it revels in Emily’s groans - it endlessly loathes44

Parental control
The power of Christ compels you: Emily’s Atoned45
Better the devil you know, than the devil you don't 46



Frank 10-29-2015 11:02 AM

@Unborn Buddah

The Law 10-29-2015 11:42 AM

Damn man two wasted verses on my part.

EtH 10-29-2015 12:24 PM

I made it 4 lines in before thinking "Wait why doesn't this count as a line?" :D

Nigma 10-29-2015 12:48 PM

Is next week playoffs?

UnbornBuddha 10-29-2015 02:13 PM

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Originally Posted by EtH (Post 546107)
I made it 4 lines in before thinking "Wait why doesn't this count as a line?" :D

My thoughts exactly, lol.

No hard feelings Frank, rules are rules.

timeless 10-29-2015 02:26 PM

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Originally Posted by Godcomplex (Post 546135)
My thoughts exactly, lol.

No hard feelings Frank, rules are rules.

Looks to be that's the one and only line he missed counting. So that would make 47, still one line short of the limit.

Battle should be opened and you should get over it bruh

timeless 10-29-2015 02:27 PM

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Originally Posted by Nigma (Post 546111)
Is next week playoffs?

Pretty sure we're on week 14 so two more weeks then playoffs

Adonis 10-29-2015 02:31 PM

Pretty sure this is week 15 so next week would be the final week


And no timeless. A rule is to keep your verse under 650 words which he did not.

48 lines or 650

So you can't post 651 with out permission from competitor but you can go over 48 as long as it's less then 651. This has been known for years, how about not pushing the name of the rule. I'm done

EtH 10-29-2015 02:31 PM

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Originally Posted by timeless (Post 546141)
Looks to be that's the one and only line he missed counting. So that would make 47, still one line short of the limit.

Battle should be opened and you should get over it bruh

There's actually loads of examples he did it. He counts two lines as one line because it didn't have the scheme or something. Anyways, I don't really care. I was only winding him up since he tried to get me DQed for being like 4 lines over the other day.

YDK 10-29-2015 02:34 PM

*looks around, doesn't see playoffs starting yet. Walks back out*

Razah 10-29-2015 02:39 PM

petty.

Razah 10-29-2015 02:42 PM

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Originally Posted by YDK (Post 546146)
*looks around, doesn't see playoffs starting yet. Walks back out*

Lol, that's how I feel.

It's pretty cool having a guaranteed play off spot.

*disappears*

UnbornBuddha 10-29-2015 03:41 PM

@Mr. J, what happened with the mag?

timeless 10-29-2015 03:51 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Adonis (Post 546144)
Pretty sure this is week 15 so next week would be the final week


And no timeless. A rule is to keep your verse under 650 words which he did not.

48 lines or 650

So you can't post 651 with out permission from competitor but you can go over 48 as long as it's less then 651. This has been known for years, how about not pushing the name of the rule. I'm done

Thought it was one or the other. With franks absurdly long line writing, figured the line limit was what he seen and was going for. I can see both sides of the argument, wack it got dqed tho.

YDK 10-29-2015 04:44 PM

We need to start a new petition. Instead of vote r!can it should be dq frank

Adonis 10-29-2015 07:15 PM

We are currently in week 14 so Post season sign ups will be up immediately following this week.

Adonis 10-29-2015 07:51 PM

I've already begun working on the next mag which will not include shit from last week from me personally as I don't have the time to re-read shit, sorry.

@Mr. J @The Law

Not sure if J still plans on posting shit but if you'd like I can incorporate whatever you have into this one? Up to you


Anyone down to do a power rankings? Top 5 with a short bio behind reasoning?
@EtH @Nigma @MMLP

Always nice to have new voices sprinkled in

asylum 10-29-2015 08:12 PM

since it doesn't matter and I got noshowed.. my verse has fictional characters but I can guarantee you with 100% certainty there are in fact people being kept in a zombie like state in Haiti being forced to do slave labor.the state is induced with a variety of extracts and chemicals and the victims are in fact buried for a period of time before being exhumed in the state. the people who do it are called Bokurs. if you're caught, it is technically the legal equivalent of murder. also, the dirt cookies are an actual thing happening. People are being told the dirt "comes from the mountains" and has large amounts of minerals and nutrients inside of it.

Nigma 10-29-2015 08:12 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Adonis (Post 546316)
I've already begun working on the next mag which will not include shit from last week from me personally as I don't have the time to re-read shit, sorry.

@Mr. J @The Law

Not sure if J still plans on posting shit but if you'd like I can incorporate whatever you have into this one? Up to you


Anyone down to do a power rankings? Top 5 with a short bio behind reasoning?
@EtH @Nigma @MMLP

Always nice to have new voices sprinkled in

I'm heading out of town tomorrow and won't be back until monday unfortunately, going to see me some Nitro Circus!

Adonis 10-29-2015 08:39 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by asylum (Post 546318)
since it doesn't matter and I got noshowed.. my verse has fictional characters but I can guarantee you with 100% certainty there are in fact people being kept in a zombie like state in Haiti being forced to do slave labor.the state is induced with a variety of extracts and chemicals and the victims are in fact buried for a period of time before being exhumed in the state. the people who do it are called Bokurs. if you're caught, it is technically the legal equivalent of murder. also, the dirt cookies are an actual thing happening. People are being told the dirt "comes from the mountains" and has large amounts of minerals and nutrients inside of it.

Good shit man. Just did a bit of studying on this Bokor thing. They use some form of puffer fish extract that makes the being appear dead then the Bokor digs up the body and drugs them to keep them in a hallucinate state essentially controlling them. Voodoo is a fickle bitch my man. Can't wait to read your verse now

Adonis 10-29-2015 08:42 PM

Next week will be the final time you can request a grudge match, so if there is anyone you would like to match up with mention me

Nigma 10-29-2015 09:44 PM

id like to grudge match myself cause im a gigantic faggot

Adonis 10-29-2015 10:14 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Nigma (Post 546336)
id like to grudge match myself cause im a gigantic faggot

http://www.netcees.org/showthread.ph...ghlight=adonis


<3

Adonis 10-29-2015 10:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by 2tripple0 (Post 546089)
"Onions kill my kind so don't call me a vegan." - lmao




Best line of the season right here, solid quote @timeless

it's so nearly quotable

Nigma 10-29-2015 10:34 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Adonis (Post 546361)

at least i got franks vote

Frank 10-29-2015 11:19 PM

Open the battle?

@Godcomplex

Adonis 10-29-2015 11:28 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Nigma (Post 546373)
at least i got franks vote

True

I bring this battle up often because it a memorable one for me. I read it now, love the concept and execution but piss poor wording. I can edit the fuck out of this into something truly lovely. My book will be awesome

YDK 10-29-2015 11:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Adonis (Post 546406)
True

I bring this battle up often because it a memorable one for me. I read it now, love the concept and execution but piss poor wording. I can edit the fuck out of this into something truly lovely. My book will be awesome

You tryna copy my published author steez eh?

asylum 10-30-2015 01:31 AM

voted on all matches.

dafuq happened to mr. j? I'd be down to chime in on mag work but a top 5 from me would be extremely uninformed, I didn't even read this seasons verses the whole time let alone participate. I could pull predictions tho.

edit : I've been thinking of writing professionally myself but my main character would probably wind up dead within the first two pages so I don't think I could pull it off.


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