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You four ladies are welcome
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I'm not thanking you, heart breaker.
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these verses are suuper sick. can tell it's playoff selection time.
boo on the early vote deadline tomorrow. getting as many in as i can before i pass out. http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=121397 http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=121383 http://www.netcees.org/showthread.php?t=121385 |
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You just earned yourself a contender match Nazi's are some good as writers I must admit. Also, that verse was about Messi right? |
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Leo is a nickname for him as well. Tried to fit in relevant football/ scientific terms |
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I totally agree, the greatest footballer ever imo!
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Leo tha gawd.
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mmlp record doesnt reflect how good he is at all ydk is a scalp considering how few battles mmlp has had he might just be getting to the 20-30 text battle mark thats way better than i did when i started out |
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You've elevated unborn, good shit. |
I lol'd @ read a book though LOOOOOOOL
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MMLP is one of my favourites currently in this league, he's dope.
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Good battle @Witty, so much for me making playoffs lol.
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@Dearg same to you man, and it's not over yet lol plus idk how many wins would be needed to get in this season.
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Well I was also hoping to contend for the title before playoffs but my stupid ass wanted a friendly battle with you and it back fired. I spent four hours on that verse. Kinda disheartening. :(
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Also, did you like the sig I PM'd you?
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When did you PM me a sig? :/ I'll check...was probably fucked up and forgot.
Don't get disheartened bro...like I always told you, believe that you're a beast, even the greatest fighter loses sometimes, just beast your next verse, then the next one, then the next...and don't stop until everybody has fallen. Tell yourself and everyone else that you are the best, then put that work in, and you will be the best. |
I'll try man. Just sucks to put so much time into a piece. Read it a few times to yourself and your friends/family, enjoy the piece then have people point out negatives in it. You'd think after ten years I'd be over that criticism lol.
I sent it at like five in the morning Pacific time lol. |
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Just believe in yourself and kill shit with your next verse. |
Anyone who has any sort of competitive bone in their body will be pissed at each and every loss, I still am to this day, not at my opponent or the voters, pissed at myself for not doing enough for the win...I am super hard on myself lol
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For sure. For sure. I also think people read our verses differently than we do, which is obvious. I think a Video Topical Tourney/Week would be dope. That way we can post the piece for people to read it but also hear us read it the way it was intended to be read.
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Just target your weaknesses and work on it until they become your strengths.
I used to struggle with rhyme schemes, so I worked and worked at it until insanely complex schemes became the thing I was known for. |
@sraL
I'm posting topics tonight bro @rest of league. Get some votes for the champ match please and others. These are crucial battles, 2 out of three anyways. @Godcomplex @Witty @asylum @Flo Real @Anjahl @sacrifice @Certain @Rakontur @Frank @Vividlyvague @timeless @MMLP @2tripple0 @Richard Corey @Ullr @YDK @NYCSPITZ @taggingoffmemoryhatemelater Let's finish the week strong and hard like muh caulk |
getting mine in soon.
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white iverson.....
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lol I don't think anyone gives two shits about me in this league........im not trying to cry for votes er anything but to lose week in and week out has become a bit crummy for a lack of a better word
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alright ill stay one more week er wateva but I just feel totally garnished at this point with ideas and shit........like theres a style I use in my raps/topicals.....and I don't feel it needs to be tampered with.....but if that's the general concent of the lyricists on this site I don't know id rather not participate.......I hope that doesn't sound frenetic er wateva
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Just out of interest, have you been getting more votes/wins over in the league at RB?
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its only been two weeks at the league in rb.......and I won the first battle with a ns opponent and this week witty is winning 1-0...... but no I get the same kind of feedback I get on this site.........just strange because I know what I like about my writing and others just feel it isn't dope enough for one reason or another.....but eghad I just want to write the way I like writing I don't feel like changing for anyone.....but aye like witty said Ill take others opinions into consideration but at this point I feel my rhyming is at a level that I don't see myself surpassing until the day I die at this point anyways......but aye I guess you gotta take your victories where you can
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I dont think you should change
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