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Demon Swordsman
 

Hell's Flame
 

I am hell's flame with hell's flame; circumcision penis with claws and maws
Apostle tongue; sought the sun; than apostle tongue; apostle tongue
Apostle tongue; apostle tongue; carve' my niche'; carve my niche'
Carve my niche' in the tree of light; tree of light!
For I am the tree of light! I am the apple of Eazen!
I am a snake slithering serpent! I am a dragon phoenix!
I have six horns; I am a three eyed demon; relinquishing guards
Brew bars from the belly of the beast; than slingshot songs with win(d) thrust
For I am a basilisk tongue; I am a basilisk tongue!
I am hell's servant! I defeated The Light with Darkness!
I am a dark catharsis! Tables and chairs; tables and chairs!
I am tables and chairs! I am tables and chairs!
For I am a king salamander; a prince salamander
A Queen salamander; and a princess salamander; a whole dynasty!

Apostle tongue.

Just thought I'd add another because I don't think you said that enough.

Lol

There's some promise to your pieces, but you do repeat too many of your words, and sometimes not in an artistic way that adds value

Keep droppin tho bro

Cut the dog cat bitch collar off

Yo just curious...Why do you write the same words back to back to back in one bar with pretty much every piece you drop? I actually dig a lot of your shit (concept wise) tbh but that's annoyin' bro...

Rainbow Serpent
 

Blades of gory/glory. say you're sorry; I am blade scorcher from purgatory
Burning story; allegory of a soliloquy pen' game; pen' game dragon'
I'm a narcissist; part the seas with a harp and tree; alarm the seas
Charm the king, and charm the queen, charm the prince and charm the princess
I'm a demon dragon from hell's dementia; sent from God's wonders to torture and scorch
I am a Lord; a lord of fire and sire; a hundred angels with sharp swords kill demons
I am not freigented; I wait enlightned in a cathedral; speaking in demonic tongues to the sky
I always wondered why the sky is blue and not red; for animals and people die in blood
I've loved many times; sunshine and rainbows; heart serpents and rainbow dragons
Yellow fish, and demon birds; meditating boulders waiting on top of mountains
For I am God's only son; a rainbow demon with a halo that is a angel
I've fought in the holy rapture; as a demon and angel...

Hell's Dementia
 

Hell's dementia, early bird gets the worm; I'm a demon king; snake bite
Comatose ghost with a snake bite; armistice armed assassin with snake airs/heirs
I'm a assassin and thief; the chapel with apples is shiek; the battle is shiek
The apple is clean; Adam and Eve; practice makes perfect; I'm imperfect with pens'
I'm eternal; burning through a spiraling burning fire...sire and dire..
Pour armistice's and fire lords with pen' zygotes; armed assassin with charmed molasses..
Grew in the den of lions; where Daniel escaped the den with a Guardian Angel
For I am a halo; a halo of white angel wings; singing in heaven's gates..

Rapture Rap
 

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You couldn't be 'getting brain' even if you were Pinky! You're ''going hard'', and this is easy! My double edged sword see's you in 3D! You couldn't see me blinking; blinking!!
I'm '''going hard''', and this is easy! Bitch, I'm a dog in the sea breeze! Don't get it backwards, I'm a God in the sea breeze! You'll be hearing 'metal rings' like a Slingy!!!

I get pussy, and money; I have '''blue cheese' and the cheddar; mozerella; blue cheese moons and propellers; the '''demon cat''' silenced the beretta!
I'm killing chocolate kids, I'm vanilla! I'm eating blue cheese mozerella; you're like a spider in ''''reincarnation mode'''' Any-Body's Better!



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This czar is black! Armed with black beams the size of stacks of cheese! I have ''''Onyx Raps'''' '''Ala-Bastard Stoned''' - part the seas with a ''''martyr's rap''''!!!
Conquer raps; I conquered platoons of plateaus with somber raps! To phony '''Phat MC's''' you're like a ''''bad poet' you'll never have a '''Heart Attack'''!!!

I have asthma attacks, '''rapture siss'''! Onyx raps with sonnet raps; '''raptor siss''' and ''''dragon siss''''!!!
I made a '''canvas rip'''! '''Rapture raptor's rip blackness rip'''! My guns will '''send you to heaven''', and '''go against God'''; they're ''BLAS-PHEMOUS''!!!


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i'm gonna consolidate these into one thread if genocide doesnt beat me to it

Punchline Palooza!!
 

Womanizer; pussy is bitch maid! I'll carve a drawing of a switch blade with a switch blade in a bitch maid(GET SERVED!)! If this pimp is 'getting served' it's when a bitch maid bitch maid; brings me lemonade!
Don't say that you're not scared, I'm darkness; you've been afraid! You're one of those 'trash rappers who NEED Pussy' you need a HOOKER(HOOK) to ''GET LAID''!!

I'm the demon king's baal great balls of fire; your jack the ripper's whore! You're a big deal? Give me a little more! I'm a musician with the sickest score!
You wack plebs, you think you're dope! You need to be reading Huckleberry Finn some more! Whip you with a belt to get your ass off Grand Theft Auto; now try robbing a liquor store!!

I have a big mouth and rip crowds! You hearing other rappers on the speakers; I've been loud! Forget the 'timer in battle rap' I'm pissed off and I have nerves of steel terroist; I'll let you hear how the tick sounds!
I'm a phat emcee, I have a prick now! You have a trophy for battle rap and a bitch; will I have a trophy wife and a ''BIG HOUSE''!!

Yeah, I have a bitch, a pool with a big house! You try getting high off robbing? Only in battle rap; with my bitch's pussy I'll let you know how a LICK SOUNDS!
You rap like nothing happened to you but bullying! I'm pissed now! During school you were catching a fake fever to skip school; WELL; who's SICK NOW!!

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Drop some feed you anime mutt...

Don't see how this allows you to drop numerous amounts of work...

Go to the cypher next time. I'll leave these open due to 'feed'.

But if you don't feed anything...well that's on you @Sinacog

Raptor
 

Raptor' rap; ravenous rapping; carnivorous rapping'
Shards will be snapping; raps' will be rapping'
Decay of the day; the decay of a cloud nine
The rust off a decayed swingset; swinging on a lime green vine
I'm a nano second; comprehend languages with apostle tongue
I am sung, I am sung; the apostle's tongue sung a hum
For I am a rapper with clandestine speech; preach a siege
Beneath the sea are seas of greed with besiegers intrigue

Rainbow
 

Lmao

Raptor Rapture Apocalypse;omniscient;apocalypse
 

i am a raptor forming a apocalypse from the sacarphagous of conglomerate
I manipulated the holy ghost into killing the egyptian first borns; two wrongs don't make a right
I slaughter plight in the evening night; slaughtering pigs and cows; the genocide of pigs and cows
I ate a chicken's head off and it ran dead into a chicken den; it flew at a 90 degree angle
I am dead inside; alive in spirit and soul and heart; heart serpent; worthless purpose
Seen a worthless serpent bite the apple of eden; he was not prepared for a serpent from unknown lakes
For I am a serpent first born; grabbing dinosaur lizards by the tail; sending them back in time
I broke the spine of the bible with a idol rod; asherah rod from the depths of the sea stream
I am Asherah's boy; licking her clit; than sucking her tits; than sucking her lips
I am conglomerate; sacarphagous; a boy in soul and spirit; my essence is a dog demon boy
I am a dog demon boy; with joy of birds of a feather that never get killed or die
I can fly higher than the tiger alaskan sky; eating pie while counting the styes in my eye
Forming a sandstorm tornado from the book of lips; the book of menace
The book of snakeskin; rape twins the size of tulips; as beautiful as two lesbian siamese pussy cat scissor sisters
I am carnivorous; solemn lips; form a sandstorm from solemn lips; I am apocalypse
Form a apocalypse from solemn lips; I am apothecary; monastery
Form a habituary from legendary serpents; a worthless purpose
I am a worthless purpose; a worthless perfect; solemn lips
The solemn rip; the solemn rips; the solemn stature
I am a raptor alabaster apocalypse rapture; stature of the seven seas...

I am a worthless perfect serpent from adam and eve; i killed the snake of eden
i killed the snakes of eden with a sharp fork tongue; i am a sharp fork tongue
i am a apocalypse from the talk of lips; sucking pussy lips with lipstick and lip gloss
you need to piss off with criss crosses; i criss cross from the form of palms
I am a conglomerate raptor rapper from hell's storm; hell's sandstorm
Hell's sandstorm; i am candor in omniscient beings; solemn lips; solemn risk
I am the namby pamby from hell; hatching demons from their eggs before pregnacy
I am a nemesis to Satan and Lucifer; I split him in half; now he is Satan and Lucifer...
For I am a angel and demon; apocalypse is screaming; solemn lips is beaming
Solemn stature; hold the rapture in golden fingers; than twist a rapture into a raptor's mouth
I am a raptor's mouth; the teeth gounge on obelisks and apocalypse's
Obelisks and Apocalypse's; solemn lips; solemn lips; solemn lips
Solemn lips; solemn lips; solemn kiss; solemn kiss; solemn kisses
Solemn kiss; solemn kiss; solemn kisses; solemn kisses
for i am a raptor rapture from hell's storm; i am hell's storm
welcome to hell; as i cast a obelisk to skin you(t)(h) alive...

i am a heart serpent; a heart purpose; a heart serpent
worthless perfect; slithering slinky serpent from the abyss of nothing
solemn gumption; erupting from the valves of hell; hell's sandstorm
hell's sandstorm; hell's sandstorm; hell's youth; and hell's eldery
hell's valves; hell's serpents; hell's serpents; hell's books
hell's people; hells demons; hell's devils; hell's devil
for i am a heart serpent from hell; conjuring black magic
i am a trajedy in words; bathing in the atrophy of verbs
i am a noun, i am a simile, i am a metaphor
i am a metaphor that grew horns in hell's storm
battle me with guns and ammo; knives and bullets
and i'll gather black magic; and bite the bullet...

for i am a heart serpent eating the heart of a beautiful angel..

bro stop

I think it's time.

Want to duel, Dead Man.

Lol...I AM votin' Dead.

Raptor' Rapping'
 

stop

bb srs

Your best yet

damnn

shots fired?? @Amen overhand upper hook cross punch this nigga talking greazy on your name my G.

Damn,

Shots fired?

More like a shank to your ribs, kid.

..

i see you sin...
you ahead of your time my G.

people still gonna be deciphering your verses down 100 years from.

slow down every now & then, im just humbly tryna catch up in this bitch.

thank you for showing me what is possible young king

i believe!!

smote him under the 5th rib sinny

You believe, in me; but don't believe in God?

Must be a British thing. Go clean your clock, little crumpet.

of course i believe in myself my G

where have i stated otherwise?

...bullshit aside, here's some genuine advice for you to most likely not take...

i wouldn't actually discourage you from just writing down the first shit that comes to your mind (assuming im correct & that is generally how you approach shit), but i'd just suggest you balance it out & try the opposite also.

slow it down. hone your shit, focus a lil more on what you want to convey (whether its a feelin/thought wdeva the fuck) and then put a lil thought into how you'd like to convey it. play with it. im not saying contrive the shit. more just that...

i'll just say this, sometimes the first thought IS the best one. but it's not always. you're evidence of this. & i dont say that with any shade what so ever, i say it with sincerity.

#1 be easy lil nigga

Lmao.

I've read your stuff, you'll lose to multis.

Lol, I write what I want.

Little Sapient.

Time to delete some shit

Time to kill yourself, Pancake Brah.

You're terrible, pseudo analyst teenage ish'.

Dead Man, get your wack posse' out of here before I kill them all.

Rolling Rocks
 

Rollercoaster ride, fortress dive; solemn tides; ultraviolet pride
I am a fortress of light storming to fight into the night of a plight sky
I end the night with diamond pie; eat the light with devil's pie
Devil's pie, devil's pudding, demon's foot on the floor of a nosedive
For I am the light; summon plight from evening skys than see the light
i summon plight in a rummaged night than sea the light fair in a apostle's eye
For I am the night/knight sky; a flying Djinn kills 250 people
I kill steeple needles with sharp thought; conjure plots of polka dots
I am a dark fire blazer; blazer fire with barb wire and red abyssal whips
Sinister rip; ripping' a kid in half with a laugh; than free fall down a waterfall
For I am a demon from hell; conjuring spells from a spell book
I blaze hooks; saint rooks and blazing sandstorms with landforms...

Raptor and Sapient
 

im a rhyme professional; a ravenous raptor serpent from the gumptions of hell
dungeons of hell dwell on the surface of mars; i eat hungry bars than roar at lions of zion
I carb a niche' on a fiber diet that grip lions by the shinbones growing them at a 90 degree angle
i strangle angry angels of edgar allan poe films; than milk a milfy mom a group of psalms/palms
i am the surface of mars; the surface of t rex veliseraptor scab wound that won't soothe
i eat groups of shin gri la zombies then get a hobby of mobb deep with shawtys and hotties
i'm a rapper of extreme recluse; tie a noose than celebrate with destined grace and educate
meditate at several gates than run away for several days and meditate for several days than educate
for i am rapper and zombie; hopping in bodys grabbing a shotty than heading to mobb deep
for i am a rapper of extreme recluse; hold a noose than exhale hungry veliseraptor horns at horny horny men..

for i am rapper and saint(p)ient from hell's coroners..AFRAID OF THE DARK..??

Punchline 40..
 

i have brutal punchlines; eat the lunchline it's crunchtime
kill your brutal spine; than talk in tongue snakes than kill a snake in the grass
i rape and i laugh, brutal snake tongue; ventriloquist moment with snake grass
burn a computer hardrive with a motherboard of rhymes; i slaughter guys in time...

you couldn't be hot with a soft pillow; pawn of knight/ harness light that spawn a night in shining armor to fight your karma/ somber light
pawn of night, songs of righteousness; awesome light; ponder light; you have a bitch dog bite..i have a anaconda bite/

i attack rappers; and your ass backwards; ass backwards ass rappers; attack wack nerds; than surge through rapping words; i'm absurd//
i ill burst into flames to burst you into cocaine flames, i am insane, i am crazy as hell.. i have jedi mind tricks for you wack rappers//

narcissist; part the wigs of narcissistic men spitting phlegm. ink is well spun; i'm hotter than the sun; think and weld up/
pink with gel stuff, ink will well cut. i'm dropping gems like link and zelda//

i'm killing rappers by the second, i have a hundred weapons; i'm killing you white folks killing the rhinos//
i'm a hydrogen bomb, spit a psalm and spit a song// i'm spitting fire like spyro//

Word.

Adventure to a Land on Noah's Ark
 

Once upon a time, there were two animals; who lived in a Ark
For fun they roamed the land for good food
Andrew loved his animals with all his wooden heart, he loved animals
Andrew gave them food, water, and shelter; so they could be safe

One night, while Andrew was sleeping in the Ark
God cried tears of pain, the land flooded with water
Two animals; a lion and a tiger slept in the Ark
Andrew was asleep in the Ark, as they floated to rainbow peace