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thank you

So after coup and Rawn mentioned me changing from 1st to 2nd person and shit I went to read it.

You're wrong.

"A whore monger"...not saying the or he's, not saying I'm either. Just "A".

Essentially, it was first person entirely. Because all those "a" sentences were referring to myself, then I said I or I've a few times. Don't matter tho.

Good looks boys

A right winger is "I'm a right winger" minus the first word

U start in 3rd bc the 'i' has not been mentioned it's more a neutral tense then 3rd but u get what I'm saying I think @Adonis (that's why I said it still worked)

I feel bad cuz I dropped a vote on inno/fig but i guess it was a landslide. I just wanted to tackle it cuz it had 7 responses.

sorry to the other guys i couldve read up on instead

Also @Mike Wrecka please spell my name right when posting threads.

Pent uP

@zygote and @Mike Wrecka
do new matches go up tonight or tomorrow?

@Coup damn blown away by that no show love homie respect and appreciate it.
@Que whatsup man good to see you around and droppin votes, you gonna hop in the competition at all tho? Should go sign in imo

Sorry for slacking foreal I will get votes in tonight.

Also.

Any care to tell me exactly what grammar errors I have

Because I do fucking spell check godam it lol.

So it most be punctuation.

This is not a rant or me complaining about votes..no way

Just trying to improve my writing.

I got u @Innovator

I tired to b as constructive as possible, so don't take me thing the wrong way.
If u need clarification on anything just shoot a pm n I got u.
Hope it helped.

Ill peep urs @Innovator

Camping now though
@Mike Wrecka @zygote

Clock work nucka. Lego!!

@Rawn M.D.

Thansk man preciate that feed it really does help
And noe I see what im doing wrong.alot of laziness on part tbh.
Alot trivial punctuation mistakes I shouldn't be making.


Thanks again rawn

Adonis thank you aswell.

And pent up who got me curious with his vote lol.

Voting now

great week 1 guys. voting was on point and we actually had one battle end in a 4-4 tie. which tbh feels right for that battle.

When r next week's matches going @Mike Wrecka @zygote

I thought voting was due tonight? I haven't had time n was guna get me voting in later today....

Ya I don't think matches should b closed for votes till next week is going up tbh

I thought I had the rest of the day to vote as well, so I only got one or two votes in, not sure. But ye, it is what it is. ^^

@Innovator yo sorry for not coming with my best effort in this battle. Its been quite literaly the most intense week of my life and i did as much as i.could with how much time i had

To everyone else, i will be comin hard from now on, so suckadick

@Innovator @Figurative

if ether of u want to vote on me and @Pent uP battle in here that's alright as long as he don't object

Or better yet @Meth @Sharp Nine @Mike Wrecka @Knucklehead @zygote @namix @trap can one of u reopen the threads till next week is ready so ppl cane vote that need or want to?

wait

you guys closed a battle as a tie?