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namix 09-12-2013 08:29 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by PancakeBrah (Post 149017)
The King is mathematically affixed; no man has a known plan or schematic that's equipped
to throw hands, I'm Gohan; I'll throw one death stare that'll snap your femur in half with a twitch
My whole team is nabbing at the bit, I'm the touch of God as a weapon of no remorse
Leave you slumped in the yard with a queen attached to my hip while we're stepping over your corpse
Close range, the bullet's frame rate slows when the scope is aimed and leaves a hole when it's done
And as your soul escapes I'll watch it elevate at the same pace as the float off the smoke of the gun
I'll sidestep Pryde's death. Let's talk about me. Sovereign, the King, netcee's Charlie Kaufman indeed
Taking the site over, type cold I stole the deed while GoW tried to breathe coughing off the smoke of his weed
I pen gully tacks, dubbed as rap, writing better than you with something new everyday, slammed
Clear the deck, I say fuck a tap, I'll power clean a whole keg and make the brew do a Cakestand
I said; I'M TYPE COLD I...I'll...I'll a write a verse of the week spazzin', voter's a clown dude's type
I'm bipolar, I reek havoc. Both of my personas speak in third person and rhyme diameters around you like
"Pan a merk you. I'm a 4chan commercial, bezerk, seeing blue spots off of the strands of herbals
Pan is yelling at this imaginary buzzsaw, PAN CANNOT WORK YOU, so instead Pan will just use Pan's hands to hurt you
while talking to Spanish gerbils. Pan will jam his thumbs into your eyes until your glands are purple,
PAN IS CRAZY PAN JUST RHYMED WITH PUR-" "Cake is serious. Cake thinks Pryde's game is broke,
Cake will kick Pryde's wack ass with enough backlash that Pryde'll be back to the time when his typo name was dope
Cake's going to race troll. Pryde will go apeshit and all, Cake will shoot off when dude rages in typeface,
Then Cake's going to shapeshift through walls and moonwalk over Pryde's black self in Michael Jackson whiteface."
Pancake is a King, like Pancake said. You're a raging faggot going through his hype phase.

it was worth the read and showed flashes of strong imagery (e.g. soul elevate at the pace of the float off smoke) and then sometimes your scheme was dope i thought --- when setup strong inners and have like call backs a couple lines down (if thats what they're called), there are a couple times you did that really dope... sometimes the flow wasnt as dope to me as others, but its S&F and i mean the flow never falls off that bad --- good concepts though for a S&F - your concepts are actually more developed than most snf verses i read, but again, i havent read many.

good shit man... i still think rawn's shit was dope though, surprised you dont kinda

Split 09-12-2013 08:44 AM

not a fan of Rawns concepts. feels like im reading Wikipedia with the language set to multis

Rawn M.D. 09-12-2013 09:17 AM

Lol @wiki at least u consistent

Diode 09-12-2013 09:18 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Split Eight (Post 149230)
feels like im reading Wikipedia with the language set to multis

leaned me

except that page would be the @detour page and full of ~ after ~

Dominate 09-12-2013 08:13 PM

Only s&f verse that I remember was Neigh's... therefore that one was the best. He said something about a dulled worn dagger will turn ur ribcage into a pulled pork sandwich... and something like I'm undying/defying all research lying asleep in a cryogen freezer... I'd like to read that verse again if he still has it.. @Neighbor?

Neighbor 09-12-2013 08:41 PM

@Dominate, I don't think I have it.. I never save anything I write

I think it was something like:

Cause full-force damage like Bulletstorm's graphics; gun shots like a bullhorn blastin
Put in work w/ switchblades -
But this dulled, worn dagger'll turn ya rib cage to a pulled pork sandwich

Dominate 09-12-2013 08:44 PM

that sounds right

what was the set up to the cryogen freezer line?

Neighbor 09-12-2013 08:52 PM

Icy demeanor.. 28 Days Later, I'm Vitamin Ether
Undying, defyin all research lying asleep in a cryogen freezer

Thanks for rememberin that, warms my heart <3

Dominate 09-12-2013 09:05 PM

that's it. dope

write more s&f

Geno 09-12-2013 09:06 PM

Neigh. Hope ur working on our s&f collab.

I will actually spend some time on it if this goes down, gonna be soooo fucking illmatic

The youngest boss. 09-12-2013 09:15 PM

COOL STORY BRO

Neighbor 09-12-2013 09:17 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Beretta (Post 149929)
COOL STORY BRO

hahaha

My nigga

You need to pick up that pen, boy

Neighbor 09-12-2013 09:17 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Genocide (Post 149917)
Neigh. Hope ur working on our s&f collab.

I will actually spend some time on it if this goes down, gonna be soooo fucking illmatic

Yeah, I got you

Beyond 09-12-2013 09:18 PM

Nice usertitle Neigh

Don't know where I saw that before

Neighbor 09-12-2013 09:20 PM

Hmmm

You can be Mrs. Swag & Flow or Swag & Flow, Jr.

Geno 09-12-2013 09:21 PM

Would like to see berretta in this as well, neigh.

Geno 09-12-2013 09:21 PM

Gone @mrs or jr though. Lmfao

Rawn M.D. 09-12-2013 09:22 PM

Y'all suck for leaving or boy out these collabs

Frank Metts 09-12-2013 09:22 PM

Its called swag and flow ... verse had both ... good show old chap

@Rawn dope as fuck

Geno 09-12-2013 09:28 PM

Haha. Sry rawn.
I will have something for you soon to.. I'm about to go on a ffucking collab spree again. Fuck it


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