I was surprised you used proper grammar with the cold, dead, hands and then you edited it?

There should be no comma after dead
It was a mistake
It is now correct

I think it should either not have any or be the way you set it up first since cold is a modifier

You think wrong and are wrong

No I am right

You can think that, it’s your right
But no, you aren’t

@Amen for expert opinion

My bad @Ryno

Lemme fix this

Thats tiny, but just squint

I need someone to sign in to battle @Ryno
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Hmmmm aight aight I’ll look into what I thought

It’s all good man
I went to school for the shit and I read so much as a kid that it’s just like second nature for me now
I’m usually right on grammar issues without even really knowing why

Usually though, the best way is to just think how you’d say it. In that case, you’d pause before “cold,” but not “hands.”

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Yeah I was thinking the first way you had it was like cold hands and dead being a modifier to cold but it’s actually two modifiers to hands

Majority of my commas aren't needed or in the proper location but it's a habitual key stroke I don't care to correct, LOL.

Can't this week @Hush - maybe next week man. Hectic schedule this week with work, travel time and Coaching, lol. I'll definitely try and drop as many votes as possible, tho.

If no one else steps in, I can do two battles this week just lmk

I’d just focus on the one if I was you lol

That’s a yes ?

Awesome


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