Netcees - what text showing are you most proud of? Whether you won the battle or not

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Originally Posted by oats (Post 465786)

already did

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...-(OPEN-4-VOTES)

10-0

Lol 2010 DAYUM

Ayo but

Then ill choke him out and break his legs if he even trys to breathe
My sharpshooters'll give his Hart a run for its money...million dollar dream
Nameplays ain't the safeplay but fuck it lets do it maybe you'll learn a thing
Even if u play sug Knight u couldn't hold bags out of windows workn @ Burger king
And what a startling site to see him get man handled by darkwing dyke
U got outshined by Santana like killa cam u should be laughed off this God forsaken site
Oatmeal huh? they say there's no such thing as a free lunch I'm not concerned tho
Make me pay? Ill bring sorrow to this Quakers state quicker then the death of Joe paterno

my closing lines were SERIOUS.

Resin
Butler
Kung
Pulse
EQ
Oneduh
Beyond
Karpis
Hush
Sephiroth
Alien

Basically everyone relevant in every text age

I don't see a few niggas on that list.

Island
J. Hens
IDeal I think his name was
and a few others from the early RM days.

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Originally Posted by Amen (Post 465792)

I don't see a few niggas on that list.

Island
J. Hens
IDeal I think his name was
and a few others from the early RM days.

island was a few heads on one account, User and Aloe at least

ideal was tangible

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Originally Posted by Strikta (Post 465782)

Revanon was wack af. Lol

word lol

you ever see his live battles?

Word..

Few other niggas.

Even you were around back then son.

lol bags got NO FLOW

THATS 5 YEARS OLD MACARONI FAGOTOTKDMSKWKWOAOA

This thread actually entertained. Me vs. Allen Knight the 1st time on RB was dope, was pleased with that verse. Vs. Orc was pretty good too, minus the crew line.

Never bags bitches been done to death in about a billion+ variations. Smh.

Actually my verse against Broke in the Summer Classic was dope...til he showed up to my house and started stealing personal info. Mufucka knew what brand socks I was wearin that day, smh...

gone @ broke's research... that shit was serious

for me there was the time I destroyed @Dominate in NBL but his riders carried him past me

:)
jk he totally won but that was like the first time I dropped a quality verse

I beat Richard Corey on PR which was cool, even though it was 2013 and he thought my name was bold so like 4 lines of his made no sense lol

plus when I could've beat @Orc as non azn bob but I let the battle stay open and convinced more people to vote, giving him the rightful win. I got the good guy award there which means more than an NBL champ to me

<3

and of course my 8237 no show wins over boredom

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Originally Posted by Bags (Post 465789)

lol you had some serious anger back then. It brings me joy to see our relationship blossom over so many years. looking at you is like looking in a less talented mirror. I love you

and lol@someone saying a line from 5 years ago is played. it's like seeing a bar from 01 and saying "jeez, de-feet, really? rapper/wrapper?! these have been done to death!"

Keep pushin me oatmeal

I'm about to start throwing resume out there and show you nigs how offended I am that I get left off lists that include people in eras I dominated.

beating @Bags was slightly less underwhelming than my demolition of @Allen Knight tho

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Originally Posted by Joe Metts (Post 465901)

I'm about to start throwing resume out there and show you nigs how offended I am that I get left off lists that include people in eras I dominated.

Agreed

Do it!

Joe Metts a sleeper.

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Originally Posted by Dancake (Post 465884)

Beating Frank in the AOWL Season Championship match. I actually didn't like my verse, and sort of felt it was the point between my peak and decline. But to win a season of that league, after investing so much time in this hobby, felt great. Kind of lame, admittedly. But we all post verses for a reason and to see the payoff and the votes and the recognition was a nice feeling.

Before netcees.com crashed, I had an AOWL regular season championship battle with Black that I eventually lost. I was the defending champ but my wins weren't so great, really. The match got tied over and over again, eventually had to be discussion'd for votes. I lost in a close one. But going toe to toe with someone who makes me feel this form of writing is legitimate, especially considering it was early on in my writing career on this site, was validating.

In terms of pure writing pride, it's tough. They're all open mics. First was 'Milk', my first piece here. Kind of weird in content. It's lost to the internet blackhole but I liked writing it, after not texting for 5+ years, effectively virgin to it. Informed my style from then on. Then 'Michael Doopenslooper', which is also lost. It was loosely based on the Batman shooter, but I think it was when I came into my own in terms of an original rhyme style. Then 'Visiting Friends' which is probably my best technically written piece. Then, finally, 'GRIZZLY BEARS' which is probably the best thing I submitted to the open mic. Got robbed of HOF which still bothers me.

This sounds like a lot of bragging but I honestly cringe at 90% of the pieces I write, days after I write them. Plus this whole text thing seems to be seriously dying now so I'm soaking in my mentals.

The best piece I ever wrote for a topical league is a coin flip between that aspergers piece (with the courtroom scenes) in that one short-run league Zyogte ran and 'Sociopath' or some similar title about someone who bemoaned the fellow mourners at his lovers funeral in some season of the AOWL.

Best battle highlight was that bar I had against Destro where ya nigga went like

"Even with your stale delivery you still couldn't deadpan"

So fucking dope.

Word.

hey that short open mic you wrote about mcdonalds cheeseburgers was cool

do you remember?

i really liked that one and om isn't my cup of tea

i fux with @dead man 's shit hardbody tho