Originally Posted by Blue Bayou
(Post 683341)
THIS is lookin tragic. everyone after tic been pushin average
but thats an incredible accomp u got
for real, without ^him u wouldnt have it
this style of bar has been done quite a bit, but it still hits as it's his only accomp so far here and its league relevant... decent open
The angle was played, this is ok
im advanced and elite, this man aint the beast barc is
anyone calling Body Fluid shouldve seen his pants when the wk started
lol good nameplay, good swag... this could've been better tho with a bad wording or something tie in in the setup
ill dislodge his chin, drop him quick & intrust a drive home
u wont see BST off when i knock him into another timezone
cool angle... the nameplay syllable T-off concept isn't very original tho
nothing he does is purposeful. hes the worst n im killin it
im not Anti Body, i just hope he dont fight off terminal illnesses
lol, pretty good and fresh nameplay
ill pour lead thru ya cornbread bro, believe me
ima wave the stick, then paint ya forehead. no rafiki
cool attack line, fresh and creative
as far as skill in lines, mine will shoulder the load
i won when Bodychecked. everything he tries goes over the board
nah, this could've been WAY better.. ording was lazy and the tie in wasn't there
yall obviously kno im winning n im already gripping on the purse
s'nothin exciting about u n IBS, or me uncontrollably shitting on ur verse
lol this was better them the BST one... cool angle
im sayin ur flop. idve taken u off the show
Hooka stand up to barc? iunno but not this fgt who got the smoke
I did hooka a long time ago... this seemed lazy and the wp not elevated.. meh
I heard ur a legend...truthfully you are mislabeled
But it’s a 1-click fix to ‘take an icon out’ & leave this toolbar disabled
fire open, great tie ins this is a dope nameplay
I got Barbells ringing…but let me stress the facts
I’ll air out his lungs & put enuff ‘pressure oncotic’ until his chest collapse
barbells in the set-up really takes away from this line as its so played.. don't think ive seen the oncotic angle on him b4, worked well as an attack line..
Hands dirtier than tar carryin w/ the firepower of a Targaryen
I’ll kill u & laugh when it’s ur Mother Dragon ur casket before the barbarian
I can appreciate the attempt here, and the flip is cool I love GOT.. but dragon/draggin has been done a million times and bar-buryin isn't any fresher
This Urban Legend came w/a Hook, no hollow beam
So keep that same ‘energy Bar’ & I’ll put a razor in u like myths on Halloween
seen better energy bar plays done on him.. I like the razor/attack line angle u were going for, but ppl give out chocolate bars to kids not energy bars.. a bit nitpicky but I feel its a bit of a reach
The double entendre here is that I aim & lock torpedos
If he ‘opened fire on the corner’ he’s on the curb eating flaming hot Doritos
mannn its crazy how quoted this bar was... it's so bad lol, this is a miss
I worked around the clock for this specific crime
& when the coast is clear, I’ma roll up on Bar w/ 1:40 Cal like Pacific time
pretty cool flip on the timezone concept.. I like this better than his BST bar
I’ve been Baying for blood, so throw in all ur towels geek
Cuz I’ll let Bar Harbor a secret to the grave after I let his Maine valve leak
had to look this up but cool abstract nameplay.. like the concept, but again at the end of a day it's another wordplay flip that's been done many times (maine/main)
I’m violent sir - the official gun whispering licensor
So ‘hold it down & get hit in the chest 2 times’ - I’m Lebron w/ The Silencer
cool idea and attack line, gun whispering licenser is ehh but thi is still a fresh meta and good finisher
Overall pretty dece battle... barc had some pretty cool nameplays and ideas, and the lion king gun meta was cool... but def some lazy wording this week and kind od'd on nameplays
On the other hand BS had the lotb with the opener, that was dope.. like the 1:40 Cal and oncotic attack lines as well... but def lows as well, the that doritos line was horrible and a complete miss and there's probably 6-10 played wordplays throughout the verse that are pure flips and not fresh
Ya I would've honestly voted for Barcotic very slightly.... hahaha fuck me right
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