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Ghost1 09-07-2016 11:53 PM

I have read some of the feedback given and I feel out of place to be honest


I could offer my HUMBLE opinion on the pieces submitted but I FEAR it may be rather RUDIMENTARY (literally unsure if I used that word right) in comparison to other critiques offered thus far



Let's just call it a wash here


I'll agree not to vote and you all will agree that you are happy having me not do so.....

Ghost1 09-07-2016 11:59 PM

Also let the record show cimm squeaked by w a measly 5-1 robbery.

I maintain my topical glory.

Eŋg 09-08-2016 12:03 AM

a harvard alum should thrive alongside all these pretentious fucks.

Ghost1 09-08-2016 12:11 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eŋg (Post 602015)
a harvard alum should thrive alongside all these pretentious fucks.

LOL I see u owl

PancakeBrah 09-08-2016 12:13 AM

Rudimentary was a correct word choice.

For what it's worth, I enjoyed your verse. Cimmerian's style of uber short, laser precise verses present a problem to even the best in the game, in my opinion. Hard to pick apart.

Eŋg 09-08-2016 12:14 AM

http://www.harvard.edu/sites/default...eld_wreath.png

Quote:

Originally Posted by PancakeBrah (Post 602017)
Cimmerian's style of uber short, laser precise verses present a problem to even the best in the game, in my opinion. Hard to pick apart.

most of the old guard rate him as one of the best. i've read like three verses - can't imagine he always wrote like that.

Ghost1 09-08-2016 12:18 AM

I wanted to do alot more w that verse ..... only had the one day to really work on it


I'm ashamed



Some really inspiring writing tho


Legit makes me want to have done better


Awesome first round

Ghost1 09-08-2016 12:18 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eŋg (Post 602018)
http://www.harvard.edu/sites/default...eld_wreath.png



most of the old guard rate him as one of the best. i've read like three verses - can't imagine he always wrote like that.

Knock it off

Certain 09-08-2016 12:23 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Eŋg (Post 602018)
http://www.harvard.edu/sites/default...eld_wreath.png



most of the old guard rate him as one of the best. i've read like three verses - can't imagine he always wrote like that.

I've been reading him for 15 years. He's pretty much always written like that, to some degree.

This is from 2002:

Quote:

Sip time out of bottled role models, watchful lips’ll bathe,
Crafting hourglass sand castles, and watch‘em drift away,
On a whim of waves, no tidings, riding on the foam float,
My broken homecoming, crystalline adobe’s stone throw,
Twice homicidal, fowl play cliché, cross their own road,
A fork's in it, we meet deep, to feel the bones poked,
Whoa!… settle the stallions round mountainous sunspots,
Plow the forest for my porous Trojan horses in one chop,
Can’t hack it, but I’ll tell the tale with a lumberjack twist,
Clash with, titan cymbals, tremble till the thunderclaps rip,
Easy as a freethrow, Atlas, snap wrist, skydive Icarus backflip,
Saunter pass go, collecting shadows in a licorice black twist,
That’s a peter panoramic view for the few who never knew this,
Luck of St. Patrick, marching in madness, underdog, new tricks,
Can’t teach this, breathe then apply, rubbing the bare skin,
Damn speechless when it seeps in... now that’s cimmerian.

http://www.urbanprowlers.net/vb/showthread.php?t=438
All of his pieces were 12 or 16 or no more than 24 lines, with tight rhyming and unique phraseology.

Eŋg 09-08-2016 12:26 AM

well, shit. that's cool.

Certain 09-08-2016 12:28 AM

Yep. He was considered the best Open Mic writer on these sites when I was still new.

Cimmerian 09-08-2016 12:40 AM

I predict I lose to dead man in the next round. There is a sort of melancholy underdog tone with unique phrasing, imagery, and good flow that is intertwined is his verses. How can you not root for that?

PancakeBrah 09-08-2016 01:52 AM

Strong STRONG pre anti-sway. You're above that.

sral 09-08-2016 07:35 AM

ENG VS PINOT AND ONE OTHER BATTLE STILL UP FOR VOTES!

Cimmerian 09-08-2016 07:40 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by PancakeBrah (Post 602030)
Strong STRONG pre anti-sway. You're above that.

Just being honest since there was a call for predictions.

Diode 09-08-2016 12:49 PM

hey.

Certain 09-08-2016 01:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Diode (Post 602077)
hey.

Would you do your topical pals a favor and vote on Frank vs. big baby?

Frank 09-08-2016 01:35 PM

Add my season 6 championship banner while you're at it

sral 09-08-2016 02:33 PM

ONCE FRANK VS BIG BABY IS FINISHED, WE'LL GET THE QUARTER FINALS BATTLE THREADS SET!

I'm working on the QF mag as I type!

Ghost1 09-08-2016 04:16 PM

ay lars Id like to contribute a video for your mag, what ype of time frame am I looking at to have it to you by>?

sral 09-08-2016 04:43 PM

2 days prob realistically

Ghost1 09-08-2016 04:58 PM

Wordup

Objective 09-08-2016 07:07 PM

Kind of a bad timing for me to see your mention and vote today @Certain. I'll see if I can get better at voting on some if I don't make it this round. I just don't put writing or even logging on in my schedule when I'm not writing any or being active on the site. I'll see if I can do some throughout the tourney tho.

timeless 09-08-2016 07:45 PM

Such good reads in the first round props to everyone involed

Witty 09-08-2016 08:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bags (Post 602129)
ay lars Id like to contribute a video for your mag, what ype of time frame am I looking at to have it to you by>?

Fucking do it right now or I'll punch your face off.

Ghost1 09-08-2016 08:23 PM

U ARE VERY ERATIC THIS EVENING AND I'M NOT SURE HOW TO FAGOT U RIGHT THIS MOMENT

BUT REST ASSURED

THERE WILL BE FAGOTTING

Witty 09-08-2016 08:26 PM

I AWAIT THE FAGGOTING EAGERLY.

NYCSPITZ 09-08-2016 11:12 PM

The preceding discourse is belligerent and absurd

Certain 09-09-2016 12:02 AM

Looks like it will be ...

Pent uP vs. Eŋg
RichardCorey vs. Vulgar
Cimmerian vs. dead man
Certain vs. Frank

Frank 09-09-2016 12:10 AM

Gulp

Certain 09-09-2016 12:19 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Frank (Post 602258)
Gulp

We've done this three times here. You're up 2-1. But I won the last one.

(Aside: I definitely remember battling you back in the day — and I'm sure you won — but I don't remember topical battling you.)

big baby 09-09-2016 12:33 AM

voting against everybody who voted against me.

Eŋg 09-09-2016 03:24 AM

adonis is a @Spoken tier voter.

PancakeBrah 09-09-2016 09:53 AM

That Certain vs. Frank topic is one of the better topics I've seen on here in awhile.

sral 09-09-2016 11:56 AM

I'M HOPING TO SEE YOU ALL GO HAM THIS ROUND!!!!


ENJOY, PEOPLE!

sral 09-09-2016 05:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bags (Post 602137)
Wordup

I plan on recording my video tomorrow and uploading tomorrow night, mag is almost finished and I'll have the video up with the mag.

How we looking your end?

sral 09-09-2016 05:20 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by timeless (Post 602203)
Such good reads in the first round props to everyone involed

WORD!

LAST ROUND WAS CRAZY BUT THIS ROUNDS MATCH-UPS ARE LOOKING TO SHAPE UP EVEN STRONGER STILL IMO!!!

Ghost1 09-09-2016 05:55 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sraL (Post 602481)
I plan on recording my video tomorrow and uploading tomorrow night, mag is almost finished and I'll have the video up with the mag.

How we looking your end?

Got something big for u. Hope to record tonite. Will have it to u tomorrow if everything pans out.

Certain 09-09-2016 05:56 PM

@sraL, is anyone ranking the remaining competitors?

sral 09-10-2016 02:25 AM

What do you mean, you want some kind of seeding now the first round is done?

I wasn't going to.

I could if you wanted it.


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