my bad for not showing the other week.

@kannon the verse was loosley based on the movie. And the wife didn't know who she was she was just that jealous of another woman.

For some reason I thought this was like last week and the limit was 16, I went 18, but cut a lot to make it short. Probably was unclear looking back on it.

@kannin thanks for ur vote none the less.....

the line limit has never been 16 bars in AOWL.
but my point stands. if the guy knew that his sister was the one who was just murdered (and he had to know about it at some point if he wrote it down), what changed that made him okay with it one night, and so not okay with it the next day that he killed his wife?
Either way, I hope you both take my vote as critique and not hate. I look for ways to grow through the feedback I receive, and I hope you guys do too.

It was last week.

16 was only for last week but it's in consideration I believe to have a limit??? @Certain and @King Ra.? If I'm not mistaken

He just blacks out in the movie and does crazy stuff. Idk I thought it went.

He "blacks out"?

That's racist.

Hi @Zen

Hi, @Witty. I just got in a wreck. How are you?

Like in a car?

Did u died???

I'm good, trying to see if I can train my mind to develop superpowers.

Actually, yes I did died. Got t-boned at Wal-Mart, my friend was driving though not me thankfully. I hate Wal-Mart even more right now. It sucked.

I wish I could have superpowers. Which power are you trying to develop?

I'm not sure...telekinesis, perhaps.

I'm glad you're not died anymore.

Telekinesis would be rad. Now the real question, would you be a villain or a hero?

Personally I think I'd just like to be able to heal myself like wolverine just so I could win bets with that shit. Like, bet you won't shoot me in the face bitch!! Well, that's a bad example, but you get the point. And the point is you wouldn't die.

But I might have that ability already since I just died and now I'm not anymore.

I would be neither, I just want to masturbate with no hands.

Genius.

oh shit. I had no idea.

That does explain why all the verses were so short last week though.

Loo classic @Witty Sup @Zen and @kannon yeah.... last week was a nice turn out with that short line limit really.

This doesn't sound very thought through.

The way I see it, if you propose a million dollar bet that your friend wouldn't shoot you in the face, there are two possible outcomes.

1) He says, "You're right. I won't shoot you in the face. That's a ridiculous bet and I will not make it."

2) He shoots you in the face, you use your powers to heal yourself, say "HAHA, GOTCHA BITCH, IM STILL ALIVE!" and your friend says "HOLY FUCK. WHAT DID YOU-... HOW DID YOU-... BUT I JUST-... Oh, you owe me a million dollars."

Ha.

kannon presents valid points. I would go with super speed and make millions of dollars playing professional sports.

^ would you have the discipline to use your superpower just enough that your performances would seem humanly possible, to avoid arousing suspicions and accusations of foul play?

Yeah, I guess. But then when I've made like $700,000,000 as the greatest athlete ever and am 50 years old and ready to quit, I'd just run back a kickoff and cover 100 yards in two seconds and never answer another question.

When the new battles drop

Nice

Eh I think you'd get that Lance Armstrong treatment though. You'd be stripped of medals, awards, social status, prestige. You could probably keep the money though.

Lance Armstrong lied under oath and used illegal performance-enhancing drugs that violate his sports' written code of ethics and regulations. I would have a superpower, which is not illegal or immoral.

^^fact

I WAS IN A WRECK THIS MORNING GET OFF MY BACK





...but yeah. You're right....WHICH IS WHY I SAID BAD EXAMPLE. Sorry, I just hate being wrong.

Lol ^^

Voting is extended 24 hours.

I'll vote after work tonight

So until tomorrow night?

Ugh....

Hi

why voting ext? :-/

You'll all understand why when the new week begins.

voted:

Certain
Dove
Dead...


next week I'll be coming back a little more focused...count on it...bitch

I'm sorry bro but i have a very distinct feeling that if dom happened to be in the lead 4-0, you would have voted for him instead.

this is the whole problem with voting in a nutshell. groupthink syndrome

a battle hack or something that could hide all other votes in a thread until youve casted your own would be ideal for these competitions.

@Knucklehead

do these exist?

I've seen those employed. I'm 50-50 on their use.

Also, since every battle right now is a shutout except Defiant-UnbornBuddha, I'm not going to close any of them early. @King Ra., I think that makes sense.