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Sharp 06-15-2013 11:26 PM
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Originally Posted by MAINESPITZ (Post 77030)
pls eat a dick retard
theres that superior wit we all are clearly afraid of because we can't match

Atomic 06-15-2013 11:28 PM
sorry i didn't realize every post had to be text based. ur virginity is astounding

Sharp 06-15-2013 11:30 PM
dont be mad

be glad

YDK 06-20-2013 06:35 PM
Tyson an my battle's ready for votes

Lecture 06-27-2013 12:28 AM
So much estrogen in here.

Objective 06-27-2013 01:37 AM
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Originally Posted by Lecture (Post 84958)
So much estrogen in here.
Word.. But yo, where does that avatar of yours come from? Shit's dope af. Tell me it's based on a show/movie or somefin'.

Coup 07-07-2013 09:40 PM
@Storyteller @Rawn MacDon

Topic
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line max 20
due Wednesday the 10th
inbox your verses then I'll create a clean thread with numbered verses: v1, v2, v3 anonymously.


understood ? cool.

Rawn M.D. 07-07-2013 09:44 PM
Word alrigt

Sharp 07-09-2013 04:16 PM
yo @Animosi T

you aren't bad but you're basically doing longbar which went out of style on any good text site awhile back. the only thing you didn't do too well was wording. think of each bar as a joke, setup and punchline, overwording it will make it less effective. hang around, there should be another 101 thread soon or if not i'm adding more assignments to the nameplays one to give you guys something to work on.

Animosi T 07-09-2013 09:25 PM
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Originally Posted by Sharp Nine (Post 92092)
yo @Animosi T

you aren't bad but you're basically doing longbar which went out of style on any good text site awhile back. the only thing you didn't do too well was wording. think of each bar as a joke, setup and punchline, overwording it will make it less effective. hang around, there should be another 101 thread soon or if not i'm adding more assignments to the nameplays one to give you guys something to work on.
I actually posted in the Nameplays thread. I want to learn, I felt like just quitting cuz I kept losing, but I see what you mean. I am getting better at punchlines, but occasionally make the set up weak. I thought people used long bar a lot. I see it often on Rap Royalty

Sharp 07-09-2013 09:49 PM
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Originally Posted by Animosi T (Post 92277)
I actually posted in the Nameplays thread. I want to learn, I felt like just quitting cuz I kept losing, but I see what you mean. I am getting better at punchlines, but occasionally make the set up weak. I thought people used long bar a lot. I see it often on Rap Royalty
yeah... RR's isn't really good. they have maybe one good battler there. i mean, at the end of the day do you, but looking through the summer classic i feel like that style's a lot more effective than longbar.

I'm gonna add stuff to the nameplays thread, and i'll be more active about giving feedback and examples if i cant get knuck to be in there

Animosi T 07-09-2013 09:53 PM
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Originally Posted by Sharp Nine (Post 92288)
yeah... RR's isn't really good. they have maybe one good battler there. i mean, at the end of the day do you, but looking through the summer classic i feel like that style's a lot more effective than longbar.

I'm gonna add stuff to the nameplays thread, and i'll be more active about giving feedback and examples if i cant get knuck to be in there
Yea, check my punchline in that thread.

I think RR has a lot of good battlers tbh, I think the style just depends on the forum, some like long bar, others like the quick punch. Do you mind if I ever message you for some tips?

Sharp 07-09-2013 10:00 PM
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Originally Posted by Animosi T (Post 92292)
Yea, check my punchline in that thread.

I think RR has a lot of good battlers tbh, I think the style just depends on the forum, some like long bar, others like the quick punch. Do you mind if I ever message you for some tips?
not at all dude, always happy to help. i know vinny's good but most of RR's top guys couldn't hang very easily tbh. most of the vets here are old longbar heads who made the switch too.

Animosi T 07-09-2013 10:01 PM
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Originally Posted by Sharp Nine (Post 92294)
not at all dude, always happy to help. i know vinny's good but most of RR's top guys couldn't hang very easily tbh. most of the vets here are old longbar heads who made the switch too.
Shiiiit, that would be abandoning everything I've been thought. I see what you mean, I just don't know how i'd write a punch in fewer words. I like to use personals, so the bars always end up long to fit everything lol.

Sharp 07-09-2013 10:07 PM
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Originally Posted by Animosi T (Post 92296)
Shiiiit, that would be abandoning everything I've been thought. I see what you mean, I just don't know how i'd write a punch in fewer words. I like to use personals, so the bars always end up long to fit everything lol.
its easier than you think, if you want to. i'll shoot you some feeback on your verse in a pm when i get home.

Animosi T 07-09-2013 10:11 PM
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Originally Posted by Sharp Nine (Post 92297)
its easier than you think, if you want to. i'll shoot you some feeback on your verse in a pm when i get home.
Sure that'd be good. Either on my verse in our battle or the punchline I wrote in the nameplay thread, which ever one you have time for :)

Meth 07-09-2013 10:37 PM
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Originally Posted by Animosi T (Post 92298)
Sure that'd be good. Either on my verse in our battle or the punchline I wrote in the nameplay thread, which ever one you have time for :)
You don't seem like a faggot.

Therefore, Meth is happy to help you as well

Spoken 07-09-2013 10:40 PM
Meth help me on mine
@Coup and @Rawn MacDon I I hadn't stumbled in this thread I would have never known the topic lol I didn't receive a notification for some odd reason but I'll wrIte now and have it sent you to coup in the AM

Animosi T 07-09-2013 10:44 PM
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Originally Posted by Meth (Post 92308)
You don't seem like a faggot.

Therefore, Meth is happy to help you as well
Thanks man, very generous of you. Will PM if I have any questions!

Coup 07-10-2013 06:23 AM
@Storyteller @Rawn MacDon

..if you got yours send it


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