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Coup 07-27-2013 12:56 PM

edit
thank you

Adonis 07-27-2013 06:09 PM

So after coup and Rawn mentioned me changing from 1st to 2nd person and shit I went to read it.

You're wrong.

"A whore monger"...not saying the or he's, not saying I'm either. Just "A".

Essentially, it was first person entirely. Because all those "a" sentences were referring to myself, then I said I or I've a few times. Don't matter tho.

Good looks boys

A right winger is "I'm a right winger" minus the first word

Rawn M.D. 07-27-2013 06:14 PM

U start in 3rd bc the 'i' has not been mentioned it's more a neutral tense then 3rd but u get what I'm saying I think @Adonis (that's why I said it still worked)

Pent uP 07-27-2013 07:12 PM

I feel bad cuz I dropped a vote on inno/fig but i guess it was a landslide. I just wanted to tackle it cuz it had 7 responses.

sorry to the other guys i couldve read up on instead

Pent uP 07-27-2013 07:13 PM

Also @Mike Wrecka please spell my name right when posting threads.

Pent uP

Rawn M.D. 07-27-2013 09:02 PM

@zygote and @Mike Wrecka
do new matches go up tonight or tomorrow?

Nigma 07-27-2013 09:58 PM

@Coup damn blown away by that no show love homie respect and appreciate it.
@Que whatsup man good to see you around and droppin votes, you gonna hop in the competition at all tho? Should go sign in imo

Inno 07-27-2013 11:16 PM

Sorry for slacking foreal I will get votes in tonight.

Also.

Any care to tell me exactly what grammar errors I have

Because I do fucking spell check godam it lol.

So it most be punctuation.

This is not a rant or me complaining about votes..no way

Just trying to improve my writing.

Rawn M.D. 07-28-2013 01:19 AM

I got u @Innovator

I tired to b as constructive as possible, so don't take me thing the wrong way.
If u need clarification on anything just shoot a pm n I got u.
Hope it helped.

Adonis 07-28-2013 10:45 AM

Ill peep urs @Innovator

Camping now though
@Mike Wrecka @zygote

Clock work nucka. Lego!!

Inno 07-28-2013 12:07 PM

@Rawn M.D.

Thansk man preciate that feed it really does help
And noe I see what im doing wrong.alot of laziness on part tbh.
Alot trivial punctuation mistakes I shouldn't be making.


Thanks again rawn

Adonis thank you aswell.

And pent up who got me curious with his vote lol.

Voting now

Mike Wrecka 07-28-2013 04:39 PM

great week 1 guys. voting was on point and we actually had one battle end in a 4-4 tie. which tbh feels right for that battle.

Rawn M.D. 07-28-2013 06:00 PM

When r next week's matches going @Mike Wrecka @zygote

Fig 07-28-2013 06:07 PM

I thought voting was due tonight? I haven't had time n was guna get me voting in later today....

Rawn M.D. 07-28-2013 06:08 PM

Ya I don't think matches should b closed for votes till next week is going up tbh

Objective 07-28-2013 06:09 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Figurative (Post 105680)
I thought voting was due tonight? I haven't had time n was guna get me voting in later today....

I thought I had the rest of the day to vote as well, so I only got one or two votes in, not sure. But ye, it is what it is. ^^

Fig 07-28-2013 06:12 PM

@Innovator yo sorry for not coming with my best effort in this battle. Its been quite literaly the most intense week of my life and i did as much as i.could with how much time i had

To everyone else, i will be comin hard from now on, so suckadick

Rawn M.D. 07-28-2013 06:24 PM

@Innovator @Figurative

if ether of u want to vote on me and @Pent uP battle in here that's alright as long as he don't object

Rawn M.D. 07-28-2013 06:26 PM

Or better yet @Meth @Sharp Nine @Mike Wrecka @Knucklehead @zygote @namix @trap can one of u reopen the threads till next week is ready so ppl cane vote that need or want to?

Sharp 07-28-2013 07:02 PM

wait

you guys closed a battle as a tie?

Rawn M.D. 07-28-2013 07:07 PM

@Sharp Nine that is covered in th e original thread scoring done by points so ties can happen but still if ppl wanna vote n next week ain't up then let them

Sharp 07-28-2013 07:08 PM

im not running anything lol im just updating records if needed

Mike Wrecka 07-28-2013 07:28 PM

yes @Sharp Nine, this league runs on a schedule. Battles will end when the voting period is over regardless of amount of votes. matches resulting in ties are awarded one point as where a win is two points. this is an innovative idea that zygote had and I personally love it. that way the league runs on schedule without having to wait for matches being delayed by voting.

Mike Wrecka 07-28-2013 07:31 PM

sorry guys I actually said voting would end Saturday night. we need time to get the contestants records figured out before posting the mag on Monday.

I gave you guys until sunday afternoon though. but since it is week one, no one will be docked anything for not voting. I think in general voting was strong. if you didn't vote this week vote extra hard next week.

Inno 07-28-2013 08:36 PM

@Rawn m d.

Actually was voting on your battle..then my power went out
When it came back the battle was already closed.

I still have the vote saved...I think
@Figurative

No prob my nigga

Rawn M.D. 07-28-2013 08:41 PM

just out of curiosity what was it @Innovator

Inno 07-28-2013 08:44 PM

Lol tbh I had it a tie when I was voting.

And I was gonna post it and come back to
Give my final vote..but as is I had it a tie.

Rawn M.D. 07-28-2013 08:46 PM

lol word

Objective 07-28-2013 09:38 PM

(10 v 7) @Boredom v Objective. TASK: Cyberfeminists.

Cool task, looking forward to this shit. You ready to slaughter this week with feminism Boredom?

Meth 07-28-2013 10:17 PM

Lmao at the people bout to have a x-x-x record


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