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i single 08-09-2022 02:03 AM

Shit my bad I thought I already called universe a fagit lol brb I’ll vote

i single 08-09-2022 02:03 AM

Can I get a name change


Pls

Mike Wrecka 08-09-2022 09:00 AM

Ya that Zelph vote doesn’t jibe with me at all

Frank 08-09-2022 11:23 AM

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Frank 08-09-2022 12:05 PM

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jEdZ98-otzk

Universe 08-09-2022 08:43 PM

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=61pqMZr1ps0

Adverse 08-09-2022 09:00 PM

Let’s vote guys, get this last week on the roll

Master Rock 08-09-2022 11:46 PM

Imma vote on that champ match in a few.

Adverse 08-10-2022 01:08 PM

This is the 11th day of Week 15. Whatever the result on these battles is this evening is how it’s going to be, we can’t linger this long on a couple of battles
@Dominate @Eviction @dead man @timeless @White LGI @Objective @Mike Wrecka @Candy if you guys get the chance please vote so we can move on

Frank 08-10-2022 05:43 PM

3 Voters

400 Viewers

Wowzers

Eviction 08-10-2022 09:42 PM

not one of those viewers read those verses LOL

Eviction 08-10-2022 09:49 PM

me after trying to read that shit

https://c.tenor.com/sqdu7pm4Pd4AAAAC/sassy-middle.gif

Adverse 08-10-2022 11:20 PM

Everybody wants to write nobody wants to vote. Literally have 16 people signed in and six voters

Come on now

Dominate 08-11-2022 12:53 AM

I’ve read the champ battle. Here’s the thing.

- There was no clear winner to me
- The verses are very long, so it would take me a long time to analyze them more thoroughly to determine who I really thought took it, but
- I honestly found both verses an absolute fucking chore to read through even once and I have no desire to reread either of them more closely

So, I don’t know what to do with that.

Both are great writers in general and certainly I consider both to be better than I am so I hope they don’t take this the wrong way, but it is what it is.

Frank was technically impressive as ever but the content was boring af to me this week. I have Z E R O interest in hair styling. And the ending was just like oh ok I’m at 60 lines now I guess I’m done?

NYC’s story was more engaging but still not exactly gripping. I struggled with keeping up with who’s POV he was writing from. Ending was weird? And rhymes seemed forced a lot of the time.

Overall, Frank’s writing was better, but NYC’s piece was more engaging. I don’t know what’s more important to me.

Vote = lower the line limits

Universe 08-11-2022 02:48 AM

We don't have writers here... We have self absorbed bloggers. We have tourists. I've dropped more votes while SIGNED OUT than most of the people that have been here for 3 months... combined.

My project X piece got one response and it was the best verse of the year. This shit is standard for topical leagues unless you have more exceptional people like myself, Adverse, and sraL who give their time to other people and enjoy writing votes and reviews because it is just another form of WRITING.

Anyway, the Champ match is 3-2... close it. What's the problem here? You closed my Champ match at 2-1... You've had mine and dead man's pieces gathering dust in the archives for DAYS now and they are the two best verses of the week.

I fail to see the issue here. This is nothing new. Move it along.

i single 08-11-2022 04:06 AM

Universe literally couldn’t be more complete dog shit than he already is lol

Mike Wrecka 08-11-2022 08:48 AM

Good match @Rawn MD

We’ve collabed countless times over the course of, it pains me to say it, a twenty year time span. Pretty cool our battle unwittingly to us at the time of writing basically turned into a “collaboration” Enjoyed it

Frank 08-11-2022 09:24 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Universe (Post 824789)
What's the problem here? You closed my Champ match at 2-1...

I fail to see the issue here.

Newbie, That's the problem! You lost 3-1 to NCYSPITZ. Adverse discredited my vote, remember?
because you bitched? Now it's only right adverse doesn't count yours either!

Adverse 08-11-2022 09:44 AM

I literally miscounted and this guy thinks I discredited his vote lol and the champ match is 3-3 with Rock voting

Universe 08-11-2022 10:16 AM

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QTgG4sakCLE

This is too much fun...

Franklin, your vote was a complete hate vote with no specific breakdowns and clear bias everywhere. My vote was legit with a lengthy breakdown. I provided WAY more evidence of why you lost and those sentiments have been echoed by both Adverse and Dom.

It's over. And it sucks because I wanted you to win. My ultimate goal has ALWAYS been to take you out and being able to do it on the last week would've been PERFECT. But it's not my fault you chose to write 100 lines about a hairdresser and completely shit the bed. I couldn't vote for that. It was fucking dumb. Sorry.

NYC wins with the vastly superior story. And, Frank..
I will agree to the stipulation that votes against each other won't count going forward.

@Adverse please go tally the votes up again... It's not that difficult, bro. It's 3-2 NYC.

NYCSPITZ 08-11-2022 10:21 AM

I count 3-2

Frank I love you but universe’s vote looks good @Adverse

Dominate 08-11-2022 10:50 AM

I look forward to Frank’s vote on next week’s champ match.

Frank 08-11-2022 10:57 AM

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Frank 08-11-2022 11:33 AM

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Adverse 08-11-2022 01:00 PM

New battles will be up tonight or tomorrow I guess.

Ran this league 14 weeks without a hitch now everyone wants to start bitching. It’s lovely I missed it

i single 08-11-2022 01:15 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Adverse (Post 824820)
New battles will be up tonight or tomorrow I guess.

Ran this league 14 weeks without a hitch now everyone wants to start bitching. It’s lovely I missed it

I’ll be in for new battles

Rawn MD 08-11-2022 02:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mike Wrecka (Post 824798)
Good match @Rawn MD

We’ve collabed countless times over the course of, it pains me to say it, a twenty year time span. Pretty cool our battle unwittingly to us at the time of writing basically turned into a “collaboration” Enjoyed it

That’s word

It’s funny how it turned out like that…. Kind of dope we both took a similar direction.


And now that it’s over… @dead man

states Rays up to stake their power
jockying Plaice to Skate or Flounder
left us Flat Fishin’ in problems past fixin

U were right about wordplay

Rays, skates, plaice, flounder are all “flat fish”
But the wordplay was def secondary, I didn’t expect a lot of ppl to get it, I was hoping the content carried, and if someone caught it kudos for them.

But good sht @Mike Wrecka

Eviction 08-11-2022 05:17 PM

If I vote on that champ match I'm only reading like 30 / 60 lines if you aint won the battle in 60 lines no one deserves to win tbh.

Candy 08-11-2022 07:15 PM

il vote

i single 08-12-2022 01:04 AM

Nvm

Pharaohs Army 08-12-2022 03:24 AM

@Mike Wrecka
First half of your verse is so tight and dope. Props

2nd half not bad just not as spectacular

Pharaohs Army 08-12-2022 03:45 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dominate (Post 824786)
I’ve read the champ battle. Here’s the thing.

- There was no clear winner to me
- The verses are very long, so it would take me a long time to analyze them more thoroughly to determine who I really thought took it, but
- I honestly found both verses an absolute fucking chore to read through even once and I have no desire to reread either of them more closely

So, I don’t know what to do with that...

...Vote = lower the line limits

I've felt this way so many times about text matches in the writing leagues.
I don't feel like making a detailed criticism of both verses, of why I didn't like either verse, that could make both parties feel pretty bad. And who was less bad? And longgggg.

@Universe props man your votes are sometimes the highlight of the friggin link. And I may have skimmed that verse you mentioned that you said was the best of the season but I will give it a proper read this weekend.

I've only peeped about 2-3 weeks out of these 15.
I've realized I don't even like topical writing.Or traditional battle verses.
Just wanna write a few songs.

Random notes:
Read the @dead man verse last week.
we hustled our dope relentlessly
while our enemies were shaving up soap, calling it ketamine
benzodiazepine, potent and sniff
if you're on patrol, you know what it is

-best part IMO

I'm not an elitist just reading dead man and Universe. And earlier Dominate & Eviction. When I'm more free I will try to catch up on reading some more weeks of everyone.
I did read this Frank-NYC champ match.
Both great rhymers but both could come up with way better material. Sorry, I don' t have a winner so Rock better explain his vote.


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