I fed your verse, which it turns out was absolutely dreadful. I only wish for you to improve so that you might one day be considered good at something you put so much time into. Now continue dining over okra and exotic fish, and shut the fuck up.

I fear this analogy isnt very well suiting as the days progress...


Its as if I am a humane person feeding a stray dog...then that dog is waiting at your steps everyday hoping that you would give him the same attention you did the other day, soon the person realizes the mistake & loathes every passing moment where the stray whimpers seeking attention, its a burden.

There he goes again...whimpering..perhaps this is why the saying of biting the hand that feeds you came about...is it not? whatever it may be it is disrupting my high, I thought I would help correct the stupidity that is in our presence...


what a lovely evening this is turning out to be....after a barrage of feed to my domain, I am drawn back to a childish dispute, its quite hilarious...

oh my...you think I put time into such a piece...did you not know I drop in the cypher/freewriting cypher/at least 3 to 4 random pieces a week...

did you not know that I havent sat down to write a serious rhyme since @Vulgar s tourney?

how could you not know any of this but you seem to recall a piece called Criss Cross Applesauce that was written several months ago?

how could you think that I would write anything worth reading in the OM? that desolate landscape that you ruined with your presence...

the more you focus on me...the more attention you bring there...and this....this is why I laugh...

you actually take yourself serious and its making my sides hurt....it truly is

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^ if you know what it is.. feel free to edit and use it... if you dont... yea...


EDIT: meant to put this in the chat thread

Ohh, it's times like these where I am so disappointed that @Cimmerian no-showed you in the semis because he would've slayed you so easily and we could have avoided this whole episode where you felt like you were worth listening to. Such a shame.

Now please stop, I didn't know there could be anything worse than your verses but evidently its your trolling abilities. You say I take myself seriously, then you must've missed my verse when a man killed a special needs child for eating a peanut butter sandwich. Or the guy that drank a cup of piss to get his soul back. Or the Ultimate Warrior spaceship. I only despise you because you act like such a little bitch, and tonight's episode only proves that it's all part of your little song and dance to try to agitate. If only you worked so hard to elicit such reactions with your verses then we wouldn't be in this mess and Netcees wouldn't be forced to read the garbage you regularly churn out.

You think what you write makes you down to earth....?


thats funny because at every turn you want to grab my attention...I have not mentioned you all day...and yet here you are...you fail to realize that no matter what you say I have beaten every opponent to get to the Finals....I toyed with the idea of no showing long before I got there & you...you tried your hardest by adding to your story whether it be videos or old verses...you say you dont take yourself serious but here you are...on my nuts hoping I would stoop to your level & write something vulgar regarding your sexuality or your lack of male genitalia...& all you can do is focus on OM verses when I have toppled better writers than you, I have defeated this leagues champ twice right @Godcomplex...Idk what you are trying to prove here besides the fact you are a sore winner....you truly cant sleep because you havent beaten me...I told you I would let my pen speak here...but you would rather continue to fabricate a 48 hr extension for me and all of these other hilarious excuses you could fathom...you would rather react as a Christian would to a nonbeliever...I hope you find peace in that overenthusiastic mind.....



I find it funny that you have the nerve to question pungency by focusing mainly on smell
when your finals verse had an android speaking like it was in a play of some sort...you sir...are an idiot

now....if you dont mind I have to prepare to get all the silliness out of my verses so I can focus on my good pal @Adonis


and before you try & come up with some ridiculous response perhaps you should count to 10...have a drink...enjoy your moment in the spotlight....but thanks for sharing it with me...you have boosted me into parts unknown & it irritates you so bad...so so bad,,,

Yea, you stopped speaking English a while ago. Bye kid.

Fabricate is a big word for you huh? e's ok child I have forgiven you but do not thank me....thank the powers that be that let me know your verse is subpar to mine

Please don't bring me into this squabble and since I've been mentioned I don't think I'm a better writer than Pinot. That's all I have to say.

Silence Buddha....I hope we meet again in this league writing against you makes me focus when I don't need to.

Good work @asylum

thanks Frank. I'm very pleased with how this came out.

:)



Silence is a virtue, and I'm glad you are here, Frankly

@asylum

I almost forgot, I read you bringing back the groups and or conferences. In theory this is awesome, but in reality....


1. People sign out and in at their own leisure

This will jumble and create and uneven amount of participants in the groups as the season moves on.

there are more reasons why this will not work, but that is the only one I need to say. I highly advise against it

Okay. I'll take that into consideration. If there can be some kind of variable inserted into the equation to account for this fact, I'll consider going through with it. but what you say makes perfect sense and I truly appreciate your advice. Good point.

If its uneven just send them my way and make sure they show...right @Adonis



















cue a crybaby in 3..........2...........

This was a great read.