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2tripple0 10-17-2015 07:51 AM

lol im just finished with this whole winning/losing thing...... I think i'd rather just drop in cyphers or places where it doesn't matter who is better than the other........or just voting in general I mean I haven't picked up one vote whatsoever in this league besides like one week where frank voted for me but probably because he felt bad for me.......so yeah im finished with competitive writing for a while at least

sral 10-17-2015 09:50 AM

2trip is staying in a week
Flo Real is out

NYCSPITZ vs Dancake GRUDGE MATCH!

sral 10-17-2015 09:52 AM

Nameflip
Innovator
Soulstice
Half Wit It - all new sign ins

CopyPat is being kept in despite his NS last week

sral 10-17-2015 09:53 AM

Exits, The Law and Asylum are all in too!

JUST TRYNA MAKE IT EASIER FOR ADONIS WHEN THREADS GO UP!

Frank 10-17-2015 10:45 AM

Direct new sign ups to the Championship match.

And do not close it til at least 5 of the new sign ups have voted

Frank 10-17-2015 10:50 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by 2tripple0 (Post 542268)
lol im just finished with this whole winning/losing thing...... I think i'd rather just drop in cyphers or places where it doesn't matter who is better than the other........or just voting in general I mean I haven't picked up one vote whatsoever in this league besides like one week where frank voted for me but probably because he felt bad for me.......so yeah im finished with competitive writing for a while at least

I'm going to mentor you on your next verse. Expect a PM from me when the new threads go up.

Keep 2triple0 signed in

Adonis 10-17-2015 12:43 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sraL (Post 542301)
Exits, The Law and Asylum are all in too!

JUST TRYNA MAKE IT EASIER FOR ADONIS WHEN THREADS GO UP!

Why is Flo real out? He showed and never signed out?

Adonis 10-17-2015 12:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by 2tripple0 (Post 542268)
lol im just finished with this whole winning/losing thing...... I think i'd rather just drop in cyphers or places where it doesn't matter who is better than the other........or just voting in general I mean I haven't picked up one vote whatsoever in this league besides like one week where frank voted for me but probably because he felt bad for me.......so yeah im finished with competitive writing for a while at least

your choice if you want to sign out

Let me know as soon as possible if so. But we love having you here man. Just gotta remove yourself from the votes and keep plugging away. Don't be discouraged my man. I started something like 3-15 with three wins being no-show victories before I started picking up random wins here and there.

Razah 10-17-2015 01:20 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by 2tripple0 (Post 542268)
lol im just finished with this whole winning/losing thing...... I think i'd rather just drop in cyphers or places where it doesn't matter who is better than the other........or just voting in general I mean I haven't picked up one vote whatsoever in this league besides like one week where frank voted for me but probably because he felt bad for me.......so yeah im finished with competitive writing for a while at least

I noticed a lot of your verses are kind of long.

My thing with that is, it feels like you having a hard time putting together a whole concept & staying within that concept. So, how about you try writing a short verse, and mastering being on topic?

One step at a time. That's what I did years ago. One verse I would try to write to that idea. Another verse I'd work on the flow of it.
Another would be the rhyme schemes, being descriptive/imagery, etc...


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