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NOW ACCEPTING FEEDBACK ON MY NO SHOW VERSE
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I will I need to get my 3 votes. In first PM me tomorrow asking for feed and I got you Also, the Open Mic here is fairly active. Posting there would get you at least 3 responses |
I didn't realize diode and I were being unfriendly to eachother... I was planning on giving his noshow piece some feed later lol
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WHY AM I YELLING |
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I just thought I'd say I'd shit on all of you in rock, paper, scissor. Because I'd literally hurl a rock at you of immense size, back slap your faces repeatedly with crumbled paper & surgically remove that thing which you all call a penis and then consummate with every whore in your families. Word.
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Sorry for no-showing :( back in town for Veterans Day weekend and got caught up getting caught up with the homies |
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King Ra seems frisky as of late
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Split, you my nigga though... nigga. <3
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Last season, week 7, I was 5-0 in the championship vs Red Glare 4-1
9-1 at this point last season , week 7 Damn , ive been fucking slacking |
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All arrogance aside though, I still have mad respect for the talent of what I've read from you |
Guys I just took my niece to chuck e cheese for a late birthday present and ended up spending 70 dollars for two shitty pizzas and enough coins so that she was able to win a doll that is worth two dollars but costed 3000 tickets aka 30 fucking dollars...I need a fuckin joint.
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@Mike Wrecka that was good analysis in your vote. The actual characterization/names of the two people were fictionalized, as was their meeting. I completely agreed with the fact this picture was hard to write for, I was stumped until the deadline. The 'Vulgar on the mind'/longer line criticism was spot on.
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