It's Weds now here in the UK, meaning you've got a full week to write and post. Plenty of time. Just write and post Friday if it makes it easy for you?

I'm going to let everybody know right now. If I don't drop this weekend I will drop next weekend. I don't have any time to be dropping anything on a Wednesday.

Save your efforts Lars, I'm probably not showing. 20 lines for that pic doesn't seem do-able. I don't write much these days.

No probs

Thanks for letting me know


Bonjour, monsieur!
I analyse the passers by walking on the pier
The black and white patterned stripe uniformity is clear,
but not all is as appears.
There’s a contrast beyond that of our tourists souvenirs.
A deep disparity between the family you can see unravelling,

The love is gone.
It’s sauvignon blanc that kisses her lips in the middle of dinner,

No ring on her finger.

Rosé tinted glasses and faux-fait interaction

Au revoir to the olive gardens and croissant bars.

I’d only really got as far as odd snippets like that at that point haha! I hadn’t even begun putting them together. Just odd musings and pairings of ideas I liked.

Guess I’ll sit this one out.

Yo Pharoahs army, props for voting..What up people let's get some more votes in.

Just let it go, dog.

Everyone that wanted to vote has had their chance and decided not to. It's a new week, new verses to take care of, that's why I haven't pushed it. You can still be champ.

I like the constructive feedback...I received it before and its great to see how I can consider others perspectives and determine where I can make adjusments. I find it valuable. I write because I love writing and I been in hibernation for the past 5 years.

You know you lost, though, right?

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Madd props on the vote, Cereal. I was about to submit an edit of the verse and seen your vote, good thing I didn't.

no probs big guy ;)

I'll allow it if it's something simple. I'm the furthest thing from a stickler there is. I just want to face my opponent at his best


But yes CK. thanks for voting, May this league live through you

Nah, bro it's all good. You're cool peeps and you already know what it is. I got you on the rebound.

On top of that is wouldn't be a simple edit, it's revamped.

oh it always has :)

Haha..I do have some mispelled and misplaced words so I'll edit those, so it doesn't compromise the vote.

I’ll vote up tonight prob

well shit. wasn't sure if this was happening or not! just logged on to drop and hope for the best. good luck this week, everyone.

I'm ready G. Where you at? I'm trying to write something

Leggo

Imma vote on the blas and blue battle...ya'll brothers need to do the same.