I was actually about to ask @Seth Scheinberg
I can write up a basic thing on the next level of personal stuff (like previous loses, boarding, writing style and basic appearance)

I want a class with professor nine

Gimme da green light Seth

Lemme put my half of an education degree to work

I wanna try this out, any mods available?

Generics pls

Generics 101

Think of something that has or could have a double meaning

Flip accordingly

When you flip, don't use a reference too esoteric
Be like sharp9's advice... smartass n generic

Well, yes and no. If you can explain your reference well within a bar it can hit, but you should use your judgment for that

Jeesus I suck at punchlines, been thinkin for like 20 minutes

Leavin smoke behind like Wiz smoking as I dice this queer
This isn't natural, cuz i'm hittin harder than barry bonds on twice the gear

This is more of a boast that integrates the two names involved. not a bad flex kinda line but its not much of a punch tbh. you have the concept of integrating a name, but the next step is to work it to make a punch. a nameflip is more of a wordplay thing like:


no one buys barry's shit, dude never shoulda started
the only people interested in bonds are just involved in the market


bad example cause i did it in literally 20 seconds, but thats the idea.

I cum on big tits while ani never pulls a bitch
Anime try... but if he sees tits its from that shit

@Animosi T Another quick example for a name play punch

That's a solid concept.

DON'T WASTE SOLID CONCEPTS.

Wordin was of tho

@Meth I know it was rushed was about to reword then had a biz call irl. Just came into change but nevermind. On topic of wording your wording is always clear an being the 101 thread be interested in seeing how you would word it.

Oh an I can see that concept being played out quick if he sticks around but meh good point

Lmao,nice

@Knucklehead


Dirty Harry
Gets no bitches...
No pussy and likes it hard, is hisdirty crown
If we in a Hairy situation ..
it's just her excuse for saying his dick is no where to be found

Simon Cowell

Ur bitch on my dick so watch as my CAL-lender book her time to go SKI
I ain't greedy tho...
U can Si-MONday come around ....but forget the rest of the week

Tyler the Creator

Never created classics and the image he made was gay and passive
And atomic failure.. The resemblense of being the biggest faggot

Eric Foreman

Such a gay appeal ur name is surely.. Manly as shit,
When we say eric four men.. It's not his name it's just describing the action he gets.

When I heard you sucked balls, I told the informer to explain further cane
He told me you do more blowing than volcanoes in hurricanes..
@Storyteller @Meth

What's hurricanes and canes gotta do with it all tho???...

Go to the first page of this thread and there is four names you are to NamePlay and post it @Cakedout

You're a nobody, don't act like you America's Idol, the crowd won't budge
Because you're not going anywhere like Simon is your only judge

This isn't a nameplay caked. Read the WHOLE first post on page 1.

This was alright for a general punch, but you're supposed to be using his name to insult HIM, not someone else.

@Cakedout @Animosi T

You're gonna want to make 3 punches like you were actually text battling those 4 dudes. The entire OP has in-depth instructions worth checking out. Storytellers punches toward dirty Harry, Simon cowel and dirty Harry is a good model to use

Edit: damn you and your more concise posts, knuck

@Sharp Nine @Knucklehead

Dirty Harry
Simon Cowell
Eric Foreman


Zero bitches for you!!! - lie, cheat n steal to get a floozy to fall
& still we wouldnt see a 'Dirty pull'... EVEN with a roofie involved

Ur ballin atta snails pace - broken jalopy that lookin the pits
I mean, just watch S. car go... hes behind it pushin the whip

Wet limbs w/ the shotty, then aim to ya brim n say sorry
i'd air ric for kicks, then watch House try to breathe life back into his body

Lol..... @Sharp Nine Knucks always precise

Like the dirty Harry and s. Cargo punch @Utmost

Where is ur Tyler the creator punchline??

Exstacy, LD50, have eric dumb ass thrown out the house
Cant handle his shit, only thing E Foreman is foam at the mouth


Coward wit a weak bladder, dude wouldnt take one gun to scare
Fighting style dirty, harry saw arms n soiled his underwear


Dude creates wack shit, wit a crowbar still couldnt get win leverage
If a bitch wants TC cock, tail trynna buy that gin beverage


This American Idle, Cowell too daft for a challenge - fact:
Any bitch that Sim pull would have to be exactly that

Your shittyname wont make you popular,better of cleanin it b
Only people who heard of dirt reached for a sponge immediatel/
you ain't openin eyes wide as owls, cuz your lame ass more colon than powell
assumed ur A lazy jamaican farmer cuz "Si,mon, cow well"/sigh mon cow well
Beef I cook up and put to the grills quicker than a manhattan doorman
Especially since your name explains your views on sexuality since eric foreman

There ya go, thanks for doing this unlike SOME PEOPLE

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@Knucklehead
You didn't get back to me so here's 3 quick uns.

Dirty Harry
I don't take - I give; cus unlike you I aint no faggy twat!
So if im in a Hurry..... its just to get the dirt of my back

Tyler the Creator
His concepts are wobbling...his wording is a slur of shit!
at text im a Typist < an we think this when you write bitch

Eric Foreman
I got mad game, bitches love my moves when I attack
Hes got no game yet Foreplay with no experience of that

I thought your first two came off forced, really disliked Typist and I dislike even more that you capitalise the first letters of them. I get to the point of the wordplay and just know where it's going, almost instantly, I don't even need to get to the end of the line to get the punch, in my head I've already riddled it which ruins them completely for me. They're too predictable I think.

Maybe don't word them all the same way?

Maybe keep the wordplay until the end of the line?

I dunno.

I'll need to think of examples to better explain. Foreplay was your best though of those I read.

@Lars - It was rushed and done half arsed to complete the sign up challenge... I did already question if I need do it but I got no response.

But cheers anyways..

Hurry/harry is forced as fuck and twat/back don't rhyme. Fuck wrong with you, boy?

Typist ain't that bad, actually. Every once in a while even the sun shines on a dog's ass.

Foreplay was worded bizarre. Good concept, bad execution.

I also disagree with Lars on capitalizing THOSE particular wordplays only for the reason that they are the names of the people. If they were just regular words or something (not proper nouns) then it would make more sense not to capitalize them.

@Knucklehead @Sharp Nine @Beyond judge my bars the page before this

lol @Beyond you claim your not bitter on that vote but have literally hounded anything of mine you can give an opinion on - dude let it go

Too late. You're the Sharp Nine to my Pancakebrah at this point.

Either leave or endure a living hell the rest of your Netcees existence, pussy.

Come at me son ;)

I'll allow the nameplay thing, still not a fan of the capitalisation though, anyone with an I.Q above R!can Theoryz could work out the intention.

Typist doesn't even work both ways though, WTF Bey?

Word

I was reading it Ty pissed, ain't that the slang y'all use for getting drunk? lmao

And yeah, I tend to not capitalize my concepts like that anymore other than proper nouns