I have Chronic-Amnesia, early onset of Altzeimers, & I just severely bumped my head laughing at your bravado. I highly doubt your claim Mr V

lol
Do you even math, bro?

Do I even what? I'll humour you and assume you mean do I do math.
1 bar = 2 lines - which would make it a 32 line verse.

Or is that not the netcees way of conducting yourself?

Anyways, where the fuck has Alvaro Paquito got to? My verse is ready. Tell him to get his frail little frame over to the battlefield and set up our battle

I'm pretty sure Hush isn't standing by and refreshing this topic every two seconds to have seen that 1 hour rule.

I didn't read the verse but from your persona I can guess you would lose to Vulgar.

Let's settle down and not be such an insecure free poster. Everything will be okay guy.

Just read it and 'lead guy' does indeed stick out as bad wording. Throughout the piece you used elegant and regal language so to say lead guy is a bit too slangy. It goes against the tone you set and is only there to rhyme. You should have reworded either lead guy or the rhyme to accommodate a smoother and more consistent read.

It was a solid piece but being rustled over an honest and fair criticism of just one phrase paints you as someone who thinks their shit doesn't stink. Its no way to be. You're not the best writer here nor are you above reproach. It'd be better to take good feedback, which Zenland gave, and consider it instead of arguing.

What's a freeposter?

Hey, I was fine till ya boy ZenFag got my back up.
Respect is a two way thing, right? Seems I hurt a lot of egos with my own, but it's all good. I can be nice too. Try me.

I'm not expecting Manyata Dominguez with his Pubert Adams moustache to refresh this every few seconds. And I'm in no rush to post the verse I got done a short while back. He will of seen my request and will reply when his shitty verse is done.

Yea, like I said, I got stuck for a synonym with that part, but felt like it worked out well considering I failed to find an alternative.

And if I made myself look as you say, then that wasn't my intention. My record is 73-4, and believe you me, I have NEVER been confident enough to genuinely think I'm good. That's the honest truth. You wanted the truth, so there you have it. I would never think I'm the best writer either lol that's laughable to me

Where's your verse pussy?


You been in this thread all day reeking of foreskin



Grow a pair and drop u coward

All day? Ok. I obviously haven't, but to know that you'd of also had to if been in here all day, or be stalking me, right? Which one is it Chico Vato-Mendez?

My verse was ready 7 minutes after your post. Where is the thread? You have 1 hour to post your pre-written tripe.

You've replied to every post in less than ten minutes. You have spent all day in this thread . Lol

lol k

@Captain Obvious

I get a notification on my phone when a reply is posted. Blame admin.
Are we gonna discuss my reply speed or are we gonna get that battle underway? You don't have to stall for time. I mean, you already had 12 lines prewritten didn't you?

So my record isn't 73-4? Is that what you're insinuating? Do I have to prove my claims?

oh god yes please prove your claims

Are you serious? lol you can't take my word for it?

So u run and respond every time u get a notification?


Some life u got

Run? I literally lift my arm slightly, phone in hand, and type. Just cuz you rock a Commodore 64, doesn't mean we all live in the 80s.

I shall say it clearly now. Set, up, the, battle, thread. My, verse, is, ready, to, be, posted.

Stop ducking

can we get some replies on the other OM drops....thanks

fuck no -we can not
but yo, this shit wasnt even that dope tbh. had its moments.


now -can we gfet onto other OM posts. this one is about dried up of lulz

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=56922
@Saila peep that

wtf is a menza

Why would somebody come over all confident, asking for a horror core battle, then keep ignoring the fact I had my verse ready shortly after his request? Does he do that a lot?

Am I able to set that thread up myself? Cuz I ain't into writing 32 lines for a battle, to then be told I've ducked it, and now wants 26 lines for another battle? Weird as fuck

lol. i didnt think his verse was bad. your ego is unsettling though. You had some weird wording. Great, even the best writers do at times. I think you need to learn to be more humble, and understanding. If you think zen is beneath you in writing and are offended by his commentary, why should you? If hes obviously not as good as you, what difference does it make? Respect is earned, really. And if someone better than you gives you the same criticism, you arent offended correct? Well you know why? Cause their respect was earned. You respect them as a writer. Lol. It's all clear in writing here. Now I'm better than you, and Im commending you for this piece. It was clear, but my only complaint (other than the wording) which really isnt a complaint, is the unclear, and almost unfocused topic or subject you may deliver each line. The mechanics are clearly there, and you arent new at this. It's good. Keep it up. And I doubt you'd beat Vulgar, but prove me wrong. See how me and Pancake flocked to say that you wouldnt beat him? That's the respect hes earned, not the respect that is automatically given to him. Learn some from a baby mawfucka. Thread closed. Thanks. And if you dont accept this criticism touching all points of argument, I will ether you worse than hush, worse than vulgar, and you'll regret not making me a buddy of yours. @El Pancake close this. No more. Re-open when you comment other pieces.

I don't and won't accept your criticism. Fuck you with Diodes mothers triple ended dildo!!!

Jokes

I like your response. I spoke to El Cupcake about this. I genuinely don't think I am the person I made myself out to be. I was singing at the time when I typed my responses. The song went like this ... "Troll o lol o lol Troll" ... and repeated the same mundane lyrics for an entire 5 minutes. It got boring about 1:30 in, but I stuck it out like a trooper and finished every last lyric. I even had a troll costume on at the time, and was watching the remastered version of Trolls 2 on DVD. Great movie! It's that bad, it's good.

I'd love to spend my time here contributing to the board by feeding open mics and voting extensively on battles. However, I would like to apologise to nobody. And when I'm done, I would then like nobody to forgive me. If that's alright with y'all?

In other news - this peice was about 'Alpha Male'. That was the subject. And this was the angle I picked.
Seriously though, I don't wear a super-ego costume in my spare time. I'm just little old humble Dave.
I think we all got off on the wrong stump (I'm a double amputee). Let's start again & be forever friends. I'll even get Veritas to do the truffle shuffle for you and film it

u mad

This isn't as bad as the replies make it out to be. I did stop reading half way through, tho. Got bored, tbh.

Thanks for reading half of it. A half expected a response like this from you.

You're doing it again, but at least you stood up for yourself. Now quit shamelessly upping this thread. Seriously.

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