I actually posted this in the wrong thread.

Excellent mag, @Certain. Yet again, I'm left speechless by your analytical skills. You did make a few typos and little mistakes here and there, however.

Since you asked;

*Amalgam - you added an extra 'l' before the first 'm'.

Does not or doesn't. The extra 'not' (with it's contracted form) need not apply.

*Pursuits - forgot the 'r' after the first 'u'.

*Subtle - forgot the 'l' after the 't'.

*Formatting - forgot to add the extra 't'.

*Original - forgot the 'i' after 'r'.

*Unapproachability - forgot the 'a' after the 'h'.

*Every

*Tighter(?) - forgot the 't' after the 'h'.

Should be the contracted form of let us; let's. Nothing is being permitted.

The 's' in Spanish should be capitalized.

We both know you forgot to add the dash.

Great mag. Seriously makes me wish I stayed in.

Thank you, @Mael. I'll correct the ones in my parts. I didn't proofread this at all.

No worries, @Certain. Great mag, nonetheless.

It's of no surprise to me that all but one of the errors came in the writer capsules, which I wrote Thursday night while exhausted.

I'd suggest Microsoft Word with it's spell check system. As Zenland said, I wish I had signed up after reading the breakdowns. I might when I have more time to write.

Superb. Simply superb.

listening to Certains breakdown now. was fully expecting him to sound less like the khan academy guy and more like Montez from Workaholics

excited for story leads

PMing topic ideas late tomorrow

lmao@ Frank-proof

I'll be more animated next time.

its

Certain idk how I missed your audio commentary before but it was pretty awesome truth be told. Had me cracking up throughout and you did a really good job with your list of most underrated. I would agree with many of those you chose.

Entire magazine was gold from oats and vulgs thoughtful discussion to the profiles to the predictions. If this is the quality we are to expect then I have no doubt that this will be the most successful AOWL yet.

Salute

As a matter of saving my time and rewarding the non-procrastinators, I'm going to be giving more detailed breakdowns of verses that don't require extensions every week in the magazine. If you post by Thursday, you'll get about twice as much feed as if you require until Friday.

That's unfortunate, but understandable.

I had my verse about 50% done by Thursday, but life got in the way (3 year old child, preparing to move to Florida next month, etc... I couldn't pass a league like this up, so I'll cut my losses).

I'll post by thursday from now on.

I had to do a last minute rewrite after a family outing. I'm in though.

@Certain can you please let me edit this one line

but he'll never find vengeance being relentless to a man that's plateaued

remove the but?

also the line preceding it should say it's instead of it' (obv)

didnt want to take a chance my clock was a min diff from the server

Done.

You're the man^

this

I don't like the new AV, makes me feel like I'm talking to Mr. J

If it's of any consolation, I'm actually in the process of changing it. But every one means something so I'm meticulous about my profile changes. Sorta.

Adonis:
He writes with his emotions on full display and a soft touch. When he finds the right combination of lucidity and poetry,

Aint nudden wrong wit dat :)

Patrown:
His top gear is probably the most underrated ALL’round.


HOLLLLY shiiiiizanfreud..

That ish is crazzzeee

Da Talent, you certainly knows ur ish.. For real though, break downs INSANE.. The work load yall put in is f'ckn off the metre..

muchly appreciated the mag.. good looks ;)